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Reviewer: MissMerlot Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2016 1:04 pm Title: The House

Oh my days!!!!  So brilliant and unexpected, the pregnancy and now Mel...good for Justin for standing up for himself.  I knew Lindz is a wasp but a killer bee surely not...so looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thank you. Lindsay is very ooc here.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2016 12:04 am Title: The House

What!!! Lindsay did this -- poor Gus.  Poor Mel.

What an update! Pls don"t leave us hangin' too long.



Author's Response:

Gus is going to be hard to write.

Reviewer: rainbow Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2016 3:54 pm Title: The House

Oh my, we all know that Lindsay can be a bitch, sometimes but where do that killing instinct come from? Good chapter. 



Author's Response:

THank you.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2016 3:22 pm Title: The House

W.......T...........F?!?!?!?!?!? Woah! Talk about coming from left field! I LOVE it when you writers do that! Giving us readers big zingers like that. Keeping us on our toes.

Is it Mel? I mean it seems logical and best case scenario, however....Well, I'm just assuming it is. 

If so, why knowingly send Emmett over to the house? Wouldn't she figure out the smell of decomp would be moticable? (perhaps she's not smart enough to think of that...)They are assuming that Mel signed the papers, however, that obviously didn't happen. Once it's found she'd dead though, the sale would be able to go through. BUT...what would Lindsey's reasoning be for putting the house back on the market if the papers AREN'T signed. (BTW...I'm just making ideas out loud here. lol)

That is one hell of a cliff hanger!! REally looking forward to what you have in store for us next.

Cheers,

Elaine

 



Author's Response:

Thank you. Really, i have no idea what I have in store until I write it. Guess that's a little obvious sometimes. LOL>

Reviewer: qaf fan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2016 4:54 am Title: The House

WHAT IS GOING ON?? I did not see that coming.



Author's Response:

Yay, expect the unexpected.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2016 12:29 am Title: The House

What did Lindsay do?



Author's Response:

You know now. lol

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 25, 2016 11:22 pm Title: The House

OMG!  You pull a cliffy like that on us and leave us there!!!  Is it Melanie?  Is Lindsay that crazy?  Well yes she is, but...  A new chapter would be wonderful.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I do love my cliffhangers.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 25, 2016 10:51 pm Title: The House

I knew it! I knew from the statement Lindsay made....she killed Mel



Author's Response:

Yeah, that was a little telling.

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