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Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2016 11:29 pm Title: Lindsay

Gosh, Lindsay killed Mel and she confessed to Carl, then tried to od.  I wonder if this is another plan of hers? Like setting up the insanity defense.  Why not just go home and take the Police to the house? Perhaps, I'm overthinking. But, Linds' life is over.

ps thx for the quick update



Author's Response:

I"m so sorry. This story has given me such problems. I'll get on a roll and it goes away. I hope you like this chapter. As to why not take police herself? She was too cowderdice.

Reviewer: Jen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2016 4:57 am Title: Lindsay

Confused, if they are living separate and still sleeping in their own beds alone, am I not Understanding? In the story it says that since they decided to live together. Or do you mean when they get a House? Sorry for my confusion.



Author's Response:

Sorry I wasn't clearer. Living together in the house. Brian let Justin stay in last chapter because he was so traumatized by finding the Mel.

Reviewer: Jen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2016 4:13 am Title: Lindsay

Great chapter. I hope that the cops get there in time to save her so she can go to jail. Poor Ted, please let the third baby be okay. Brian' so got it for Justin. One question, is Brian and Justin actually living together in one apartment because it said that they are bring things to eachother Places? Or are they moving stuff back an forth, living together in both apartments? 

Should there be a minor character death  warning on this. 



Author's Response:

I'll put up the warning. They still live separate but move stuff back and forth.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 7:49 pm Title: Lindsay

I hope Ted's baby's come through this okay.  Lindsay has no luck so I assume that she survives taking all those pills.  Poor Justin, I hope something good happens for him.



Author's Response:

Ted's story is gonna get sad, just a fair warning, it is Ted. That's a lot of people ready for Lindsay to live. Justin's good is coming, I promise.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 5:21 pm Title: Lindsay

Woah....OK. that answered my question. she obviously did know about Mel as did surprisingly Sam. Now he has that to hold over her. Will Lindsey succeeed in killing herself or will Sam get to her in time? Will he even try to save her or see it as his way to keep himself as uninvolved as possible. 

Feeling terrible for Ted. Oh I hope the little one comes through it OK. 

Justin of course will be effected as well. PTSD all over again.

So much going on with our boys and family.

As always, wonderful chapter!!

Elaine



Author's Response:

I'm thinking about changing something that I planned on from the beginning. I'm not seeing it going over well. Glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 1:41 pm Title: Lindsay

That......That.......THAT BITCH!! Oh now she's sorry....AGAIN... but she should pay with her life at the hands of others, not her own. And Sam should definitely go down as an accessory. Seriously, the two of them deserve each other! If she had left that dirty man's extra 'Belly Button' alone, perhaps she wouldn't be in the mess she's in. Lonely Lindsay??? By a new toy or a male latex doll! Geeze! She deserves everything coming to her and more just for being stupid!

Lawd, it's not even 10am EST and I need Beam after reading that! LOL

WRITE On Pam!

~Nichelle 



Author's Response:

HAHA. Too funny. I'm trying to write but i've ditched the two tries i've done on this new chapter. I'm glad you 'liked' it.

Reviewer: MissMerlot Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 1:27 pm Title: Lindsay

Love that harridan of a wasp says love....oooh tell me she gets saved and does time.   Exits stage left to find cold compress and smelling salts



Author's Response:

Lol. I guess people want her alive.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 11:11 am Title: Lindsay

Okay....I need a moment after this chapter....



Author's Response:

Good or Bad?

Reviewer: Qaf4Lyfe Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 10:43 am Title: Lindsay

Please dont let that bitch Lindsey get away with it. With her killing herself she deserve to go jail



Author's Response:

I have writing the next chapter two different ways, I tossed both of them because they didn't fit right. I truthfully have no idea what i'm gonna do to her.

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