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Date: Mar 15, 2017 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
Yes I think you need to look into continuing this story!! Have always loved your stories.
The way you had the boys meet and keep coming back was refreshing, the playfulness was great with no expectations.
Would like to see how they do mixing their familys together with new found interests!!
Author's Response:
Mcm:
First, let me offer my sincer apologies for not responding earlier since I haven't figured out why I'm not getting noficiations of comments. Since this was a gift request, I can't take full credit for the idea but the carrying out of the idea was mine. I'm so glad you enjoyed the playful interaction between Justin and Brian. I'm so used to writing angst, that humor and play are somewhat unusual to write. I finally have some time and will probably be writing more on this story and possibly the other story I wrote at that same time. Thank you again for your comments, and I apologize for taking so long to acknowledge them.
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Date: Feb 05, 2017 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
I love when these two meet in an AU :) Brian si so honest LOL!
Author's Response:
I usually don't write AU, so glad this worked for you.
Date: Feb 04, 2017 5:01 pm Title: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
I loved it,and I think this could work for them if they are trying to bring the relationship into a serious one..Atleast. they started as a player turns into something as time goes by..
I just wished you're making a sequel for them to know each other more and Jutin moving to Pitts to be with Brian..
Thanks for sharing,it's beautiful story and well written..😙
Author's Response:
Thnak you. I may make a sequel after I finish my current story.
Date: Feb 03, 2017 6:25 pm Title: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
Great start. Now I need to read the rest to find out whether or not he will actually make him scream.
Author's Response:
thought it an interesting challenge
Date: Feb 02, 2017 4:42 pm Title: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
I've read this before... enjoyed it the first time, and still enjoying it the second time...
personally I would LOVE the story continued!!!!!
Author's Response:
thanks. I problably will continue- just in a bit when I finish Fatherhood
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Date: Feb 01, 2017 2:17 am Title: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
Love this story and their meeting in San Francisco. It's nice to read such interesting AUs.
Author's Response:
thanks
Date: Jan 31, 2017 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
Loved this story. And loved having them meet in SF. Just made me want to go back there again. Thanks for writing. TAG
Author's Response:
WE went to San Francisco in 2009 and visited alot of the places- ( well not the gay bars- Don't think hubby would like that) but loved it there.
Date: Jan 31, 2017 2:49 am Title: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
Excellent beginning! I'm all for reading stories where Brian and Justin meet differently and are of the same mindset before it evolves.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thanks- Since this was gift request, I got to write what the reader wanted but I think it turned out okay.