Date: Oct 20, 2018 9:28 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
How fabulous is the expression 'Able Grable' .. I want to use that one myself, ha ha
Author's Response:
We actually had the best time researching old colloquialisms to use in the story. I learned a few new ones mysel! TAG
Date: Dec 01, 2017 6:53 am Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
The best line of the night anywhere: "Who wanted a large shaking bullet?" OMG! The best line ever!
Now we get into the meat and potatoes of the story - just who, oh who IS Brian Kinney and where is he getting all this stuff/info? Hmmm....
I think we forget just how far we have come in marketing, packaging, etc in just the last three or four decades. When I was in high school, I bought a cordless shaver for my friend who was going into the Army. It was really kind of a new thing, at least where we lived, and he was floored by it. And that was in 1971, not 1941! LOL.
I'm really really really eager to see how Brian will handle having to actually disclose the truth. Will Justin threaten to end it if he doesn't? Will it be because Justin no longer sees the 'romance' of war? Will it be because Brian fears that the portal will close for some reason? Oh, the possibilities!
Loved this chapter, and look forward to more 'discoveries' and the ensuing drama.
Date: Dec 01, 2017 2:50 am Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
They are just too cute together! What is Brian going to come up with to explain all his gadgets, let alone how he knew The Palace was never bombed? When will he tell Justin the truth? Loved all the teasing he had to endure. Lol
Author's Response:
You'll just have to wait and see :P
~Sally and TAG
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2017 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
Brian being psychic! I like it.
Author's Response:
Oh no - don’t say things like that . . . You’ll encourage yet another plot bunny attack with that kind of suggestion! Lol. TAG
Date: Nov 30, 2017 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
OMG that's so brilliant. Justin's sweet naivety about the dildo and safe sex (from the previous chapter). Bathroom scene was great, I'm laughing at Brian for his vanity. Anti-wrinkle creme lol. For a moment I was worried that there will be drama as Justin was thinking about leaving Brian, but luckily he knows better. Daphne is clever, thinking about a supernatural explanation... just not this one! How long untill they figure Brian out? Or till Brian outs himself? Ich bin gespannt, as would the Gerries say.
Date: Nov 30, 2017 6:35 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
Another terrific chapter. The plot is thickening and I love it.
Date: Nov 30, 2017 6:12 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
Justin discovering Brian's gadgets is hilarious; the way he describes the items is interesting and we can see how disturbing it is for him. The shaking bullet is the best of what you thought Brian could have in his bag.
Daphne's remark about the fact that Brian didn't want to go to the shelter is going to bother Justin and I hope he will ask Brian why.