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Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2018 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Blues In The Night

You know what else that justin might like? Private shower and shower sex lol. ...

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2018 3:18 am Title: Chapter 27 - Blues In The Night

Well, Justin took things better than I would've expected.  I hope he gets to meet Gus.



Author's Response:

Justin's a tough and brave little f*cker - he'll be fine in the future . . . well, mostly. *wink, wink* Off to write more. TAG & Sally.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2018 1:31 am Title: Chapter 27 - Blues In The Night

I cannot even imagine how Justin might feel, talk about culture shock. It's been a very long time since I've realized how amazing our cell photos truly are, thanks for the reminder! 



Author's Response:

One of the fun things about this story is having to look at HOW we look at things and try to see it all in a different way. We'll be getting a lot of that now that Justin's in the future. So much fun to write. Go enjoyy your modern devices for a bit and we'll get you the next chapter. LOL. TAG & Sally

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2018 8:58 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Blues In The Night

Great chapter! Justin discovering a smart phone is quite genius and the list of all devices that it covers for is amazing. Being adults in 2018 helps us see what huge steps the technology has taken. For the kids, it's obvious and very common.

I was afraid Justin would hear noises due to his concussion, not because the streets are a never ending flow.

It's great that Justin was able to talk to Gus: it helps to check that Brian isn't lying. I loved “Love you up to Jupiter and back down to a Polar Bear, Daddy!”



Author's Response:

Exactly - if you take a step back and look at something we all take for granted like our phones, it's pretty amazing how technologically advance our lives are. Poor Justin - we think he's doing pretty well with it all so far, though. The idea to make Gus and Brian trade those goodbyes was Sally's - she's so good at that fluffy stuff! And now, off to write mroe of Justin's intro to 2016. TAG & Sally

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2018 8:45 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Blues In The Night

I would love to be a time traveller.  I think it would be so exciting, scary and just plain fun like this story is.  What great writing.



Author's Response:

I would only agree to time travel if I could do it with Brian and/or Justin in tow. LOL. TAG

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