Date: Mar 17, 2018 5:49 pm Title: March 14
So sorry you had to suffer through a migraine. I've gotten them way too often over the last 30+ years and know how horribly debilitating they can be. Don't worry.....post when you can.
I haven't posted a review in while....so I hope you don't mind if this one is a bit "wordy" lol.
Stalker and the stand in hustler = oh my I was on pins and needles while reading that chapter....never knew if CSD (crazy stalker dude) was gonna go all snapped on the nosy Justin stand-in. The not so bright version of our "Sunshine" was lucky.....if CSD would have had a blackout moment..anything could have happened.
Brian spotting the Justin lookalike was good and bad...good because it's only a matter of time before they find him....bad because his running away and hiding slows down the investigation.
The following chapters after CSD's twisted one night stand that focus on B&J daily lives are amazing moments of fluffy smoochy goodness. Sweetness hardly describes their interactions. They adore each other.
Deb trying to force Brian to forgive Michael's assholeness....is so fucking nervy....I can't with her right now. Hope Brian tells that POS that nothing has changed...and it ain't gonna too. He's outta B&J lives and if Deb keeps pushing she'll be right there with Michael. Outside looking in.
And finally.....Justin does have something to tell Brian..(giving in to Deb abt inviting Mikey..but Brian has something he needs to confess also....remember the blond hustler Justin stand-in? 😀 Can't wait for the next chapter. I haven't told you lately....this story is amazing.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hate having them and you have my sympathies as they are absolutely the worst thing to deal with.
I was a bit worried that CSD, (I love that, I'll have to use it from now on), was going to harm him too. Although, there is more going on there than meets the eye. And yes, those black outs worry me. And our clueless hustler may not be as clueles as we think. His running away does bring up a lot of questions as to his motives.
I live for the moments that Justin and Brian are being sweet, or goofy and are just enjoying each other. :) especially as things heat up with CSD. And ugh, I hadn't even planned for Deb to do that, but then it happened and I was so pissed at her for putting Justin in that position. Brian needs to give her a firm talking to.
And yes, Brian really isn't doing him any favors holding that back. Hopefully, he'll get his head together and tell Justin before it's too late.
Thanks for reading!
Date: Mar 17, 2018 12:33 pm Title: March 14
Lucile is a very funny person!
Justin shouldn't have said anything to Brian about tomorrow: it's the best way to change his mood. He should stop trying to please Debbie knowing it will impact many people. He is too "weak" with her.
Author's Response:
I have so much writing Lucille; I never know what she's going to say next. And Justin should have waited, but in his defense, he had been running around all day; so, he was tired and irritated and likely figured that he would end up falling asleep before he could tell Brian about Michael. He wasn't really thinking. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 17, 2018 11:49 am Title: March 14
I love Leo and Lucille! I always thought they would make a good couple for them to hang out with outside of their normal group.
Thanks for the great update.
Author's Response:
Those two have been absolute fun to write; especially Lucille. Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2018 11:42 am Title: March 14
I would think that Michael should be the least of there worries, but they don't know the stalker was so close. Maybe Lucille can keep a close eye out for Justin and intervine when necessary?
Author's Response:
Michael really isn't all that important to them at the moment, but Justin also didn't want Brian to be blindsided when he got to the show and Michael showed up. That would have made him angry. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 17, 2018 11:36 am Title: March 14
Good chapter. Love Justin's food choices. You have a wonderful imagination and it makes your writing sparkle.
Author's Response:
Thanks! :) I was trying to be a bit creative, without making Brian too sick in this chapter. LOL! I think he's had enough of Justin's innovative food choices. :) Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 17, 2018 10:07 am Title: March 14
Nice chapter until the "talk" came up.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Mikey spoils everything. Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2018 8:21 am Title: March 14
Cute chapter, except for the Michael part...hate him always have
Author's Response:
Yeah, I despise Michael. If I had it my way, I would just write him out of the story. But sadly, he just never goes away when you want him to. Thanks for reading! :)