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Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2018 8:23 am Title: Undefeated

My god Michael is so mean! it is pure venom, he always wants to talk about the past and does not see that everyone is moving forward and changing except him! Brian is always generous, he takes care of his nephew!



Author's Response:

 

Marie-France,

Most of the time Michael is nothing but a mean, spiteful, nasty little bitch. This is why he has been ostracized by the whole family. His mother only puts up with him because she gave birth to him. He had a good example growing up, and instead of following that example he turned into an entitled brat.

Brian is a loving and generous man in spite of his horrible upbringing.

~charming1 & Lorie~

 

 

Reviewer: Tsum tsum Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2018 5:50 pm Title: Undefeated

Are we going to see what Mikey does to brain and Justin from teds point of view or does it between this one and I clover you 



Author's Response:

 

Tracy,

All the Bittersweet Universe stories fit together at different places in each story. 

Michael was pretty much ostracized by everyone but his mother after what he tried to do to Brian and Justin.

Unfortunately that doesn't stop him from showing up and trying to cause trouble when he sees an opportunity.

~charming1 & Lorie~

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2018 5:10 pm Title: Undefeated

The beginning was really violent with Michael's speech. He doesn't think, that's obvious, that homophobes could speak about him with the same tone and he would find that unacceptable. As for the "concerned citizen for the truth", that put a bad shadow on what Brian did to save the Avenue. I hope someone will get back at him for that.

I'm so relieved that that adoption was granted: they both deserved this joy in their lives.



Author's Response:

 

Claire,

The weasel doesn't think, he just does things that he thinks will get him attention. Ignoring him will annoy him more.

Making the letter look like it came from more than one person probably made him think it would carry more weight. 

They will love their son with all their hearts.

~charming1 & Lorie~

 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2018 3:30 am Title: Undefeated

Fucking Michael. Someone has to do something. Coming to Ted's and spouting hiss filth. The letter trying to ruin Ted and Blake so they couldn't adopt Phoenix. Just plain nasty.

Love Judge Dennis!

Brian, gotta love him. Going out of his way to make sure Phoenix has all he needs to live a happy healthy life including having one of his father at home with him for the first six months of his life.

Great job. This story is one of my favorites.



Author's Response:

 

Sherry,

Some people just want attention. The best thing is to ignore them.

They got a great judge.

Brian is and always was very generous.

Glad you like our story.

~charming1 & Lorie~

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2018 10:36 pm Title: Undefeated

I am so happy to see that the adoption went through.  Michael will be in big trouble when his part in trying to stop it comes out, I hope.



Author's Response:

 

Phyllis,

The baby deserves to be loved, and he will be, by the whole family.

The weasel hates being ignored and that's what he will get.

~charming1 & Lorie~

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2018 10:23 pm Title: Undefeated

Great job.  Good chapter.  I can't wait until that idiot, Mikey gets his.  He really is the nastiest person.



Author's Response:

 

Marilynne,

Glad you're enjoying the story.

The weasel is looking for attention. He will get what he deserves, being ignored.

~charming1 & Lorie~

 

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