Date: Aug 20, 2018 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hi! Again, amazing chapter, but so much pain and hurt. The "two best friends" It's amazing how you pictured, characterized them so well. Although I don't believe that the makers of the Shów had so intended, that is what many of us see in them. Both think only of themselves. Michael with a pathetic stupidity, but at least an obvious one. And Lindsay with a manipulative sneakiness. In my opinion, the latter is unfortunately much worse, because she makes it so clever and she so deceives Brian. That's why for me, it's harder to read her part in this and to endure how Brian doesn't see through her bullshit. What a bitch. I think, she wouldn't like it to hear Brian think about her as "aunt Lindsay". She seems to already imagine herself to be the mother. Pathetic... I am so glad that her plans have failed...
And then, you nearly made my cry. How Brian talks to the baby about Justin... It's soooo sadand so tragic, because they could have been so happy! Warmest regards!
Author's Response:
Yes, I agree that Lindsay is much worse in her sneakiness.
What always annoyed me about both Michael and Lindsay was how they knew exactly which buttons to push with Brian to get him to do what they wanted and they never felt bad about using that knowledge. They both pushed Brian's buttons again and again to get their way and that annoyed the hell out of me - as a friend you shouldn't be using and manipulating your friends like that :(
You are on the right track about the way she will see herself in Luke's life.
We'll find out more about that soon and will see how Brian reacts once he finds out ;)
Yes, they could have been very happy, but then I had to go in and mess it up for all of them :(
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2018 5:23 pm Title: Chapter 11
Surely Ben will tell Mikey off. Mikey sems to have a one track mind.
Author's Response:
We'll see Ben soon and will find out how he feels about all of this :)
Date: Aug 20, 2018 3:33 am Title: Chapter 11
I bet Lindsey was delighted to paint a mural for the baby and come every 3 weeks without paying anything.
Author's Response:
She loved it - for sure! We all know what she's like ;)
And we'll see more of her soon!
Date: Aug 20, 2018 12:02 am Title: Chapter 11
Great update. Oh that Michael is so clueless or is he just crafty in his ways? Still hate him. LOL
Author's Response:
I think it's a mixture of both :/
We'll see more of him, so you can hate him even more ;)