Date: Dec 11, 2018 5:48 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Great imagery right off the bat... The first tinges of gold were just peeking over the eastern horizon when the three weary travellers drove their rental car up to Justin’s front door the next morning. And boy was Brian one impatient weary traveller.
The first initial contact between Gus and Justin had the tears leaking out of the corner of my eyes, but they were good tears.
Brian was hilarious. First that reference to the brownies, (which might have been the reason Justin came out of his stupor), then the arrival of the 'bear', and the hair-in-the-teeth, and the if-the-pelt fits, comments, had me cracking up. (I'm getting better trying to hide my chuckling, while others are watching TV.)
Okay, so I think Justin was a little bit out-of-line with the diatribe about Qianna going off to Pittsburgh with Brian, and his subsequent threat of punishment. Criminy, the girls had pictures and newspaper articles of Brian and Justin as a couple, including their non-legal marriage. I don't think she was putting herself in harms way. Anyway, when Hairy stuck his nose into the mix, and spouted shit to Quinne, I could picture Brian grabbing him around the neck, and telling him to shut the fuck up. But, it caught Justin's attention, instead. But the situation that ensued, left me breathless from laughter. You Go Brian!!!! Tell that sack of shit to lay off your daughter! I have to wonder if Brian will get a black eye out of the mix.
But then I got to the ending, and couldn't sing, 'So long, Farewell", because Justin so stupidly put Alex on the title for his home. WOW! I'm not versed on how the law works, but there must be something that can be done, especially if it's only been a week, and Alex has not contributed to the household. And just HOW can he kick Justin and Qianna out of their own home, and any company they might have in their home? I think if anyone should have the cops called on them, it should be on Hairy.
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. It was like the crest to everything that was leading up to. I can only imagine what else your mind will come up with, to torture us with. One thing I think we can all agree on, is that there will be no wedding, so the girls did accomplish what they set out to, by switching places.
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2018 10:09 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
The reunion of Gus and Justin was touching maybe all the children will help Brian and Justin to get together, in any case they will do everything. The Yeti can leave they are 5 against him no? They can all go back to the Pitts! Great chapter!
Date: Dec 10, 2018 9:20 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Wow lots of fun and good job yeti showing your real colours
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2018 3:23 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
How could Justin be so stupid. At least it's a good reason to move back to Pittsburgh.
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*Ding, ding, ding* 😉 TAG
Date: Dec 10, 2018 2:34 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Finally got rid of the Yeti. I can't believe Justin is being such adick to his daughter. She wasn't with strangers she was with her sister and other dad. Get s grip.
Date: Dec 10, 2018 12:26 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Got teary-eyed at the Gus/Justin reunion...
Doesn't look like hairy Alex is going away easily!
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I’m thinking Gus will play a big role in convincing Justin to give Brian a second chance in this story....*wink, wink* TAG
Date: Dec 09, 2018 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Awesome way for Justin to defend the girls. Now we just have to see how Brian and Justin get back together. Great updates
Date: Dec 09, 2018 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Omg the Gus/Justin reunion! I'm not crying, you're crying
Too bad we can't hop into the story & beat the shit out of the Yeti ourselves huh? What a dick! He can't have them arrested! It's 5 people's words against his lone one. He's so stupid, please tell us they can get rid of him now??
Date: Dec 09, 2018 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
💃💃💃::Dancing the Never-Yeti dance in my seat here!::💃💃💃
And what the HELL was Justin thinking adding that ðŸ´ðŸ’© to the title of his house!
Now that part of the mystery is solved, I wanna know where Lindsay fits into this little bag of tricks. She just seemed to know a little too much about Justin. Was she, perhaps, whispering in someone's ear, being the oh so caring art teacher and mother-of-Brian's-ONLY-child that she is?
Author's Response:
Can I just say how THRILLED I am that I’ve tempted you back into reading? Lol! I’m going to have to burst your bubble on Lindsey, though. She didn’t play a big part in Justin leaving. When we get there, however, you might recognize the impetus for how I’m writing him... Happy reading! TAG
Date: Dec 09, 2018 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
I also loved the moment when Gus and Justin were holding each other: powerful and emotional. Their bond is restored, finally.
Date: Dec 09, 2018 9:05 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Sciatica be damned, I'm bouncing up and down in my seat and I haven't even read the chapter yet!
Author's Response:
Careful! Don’t Hirt yourself! Lol! TAG
Date: Dec 09, 2018 8:41 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Yeah! So happy to see a new chapter and what chapter! Epic, hilarious, chaotic, disturbing... It seems that Alex has the upper hand and I hope you have something really nasty to get him down. At least Justin has opened his eyes and knows some parts of Alex' personality.
I loved how Brian took his place near Justin when he arrived. Only Justin is not that happy about the girls' stunt and I hope he will understand their goal.
Date: Dec 09, 2018 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
OMG, This was fantastic. LOVED, LOVED, LOVED it. Just PERFECT. I know that Brian can and will win back his Sunshine. Justin can give the damned house to The Yeti and be with Brian and their children. As for Brian's magic, just don't think it is possible to resist him. Your writing is beyond belief. Thank you for sharing the wonderful ideas that you come up with.