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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2025 4:51 am Title: Chapter 10

As Brian told Vic, he stayed out of the slaughter. I think if asked, the guys would welcome him into their new world. 

So Brian is the father. I'm not sure how long he should wait to tell Justin. I can see it going in two different ways. But I don't think Brian should go snooping into any parental rights.

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Date: Sep 22, 2025 4:21 am Title: Chapter 9

Talk about Brian like he was nothing to her? Apparently, he's not. Not if they can do and say things like that. Either Michael is a slut, or he's just pretending he's getting it somewhere else. So she'd better turn her attention to her son.

I sure hope the guys can get Vic out of there. Either that, or he has a place to go where Deb and Michael can't find him.

He went from science to sex... Did Justin get Brian's sample? Because Brian's set of numbers, just has to be S.E.X.

 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2025 3:54 am Title: Chapter 8

I loved the ending of this chapter: The scene with Brian, Justin and Lily. There’s an army to slay the dragon for you. And with that, they became a family.

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Date: Sep 22, 2025 12:36 am Title: Chapter 7

Is Melanie practising law? With how her lifestyle has been described, I can't imagine her getting up in a court of law or even being able to work with clients. What does the law firm think of her antics? I can't imagine that a public court case would please a law firm, especially given the details of what it was about.

 

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Date: Sep 21, 2025 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 6

Just like I thought ~ Gus is going to protect Lily so nothing evil gets her.

Yes ~ Michael is the scum of the Earth.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2025 5:17 pm Title: Chapter 5

With each chapter, I'm wishing there was a way to reach inside my laptop and strangle some necks. 

Hopefully, Brian eases up on Daphne. How astute of Daphne to catch on to the trigger word. That is so awful for a little one to already be scared of the innocent word: Mommy. I do think Gus will accept Daphne like he has Shelly.

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Date: Sep 21, 2025 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wonderful conversation between Brian and Justin.

And Gus really wants to protect Lily, which is just precious.

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Date: Sep 21, 2025 3:32 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ah, that picture idea was perfect. Also very sweet. I want to strangle a pair of women for what they've done to little Gus, and also to Brian. 

Justin and Lily just got a new family. Gus also gained a new little sister. He needs that. It can make him realize he needs to watch over her.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2025 3:16 pm Title: Chapter 2

This almost choked me up. It says a lot how Gus is so relaxed around Justin.

It sounds like Justin needed them in his life, and I think the others needed him too. And a little girl to boot. Heaven.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2025 2:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Boy, what an opening! I already love it. I've been reading a long series, where both Michael and Debboe were the epitome of wonderful. I needed a break, and thought ~ Star has to have one to get me back on track.

Michael should be hanged in the town square and let the natives at him. What a worthless piece of crap. Ted is one of the sweetest people I know. I have to wonder if Michael was with him for the money, because if Ted had excess money to invest with Brian, I'd assume Michael was benefiting from it. What's poor widdle Mikey gonna do now?

Those women also need to be locked up for the treatment of Gus. Child endangerment is one of the worst. And could Brian sue Mel for the money, since any court can see the money wasn't spent taking care of Gus?

Reviewer: Allison42 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2024 6:11 am Title: Chapter 10

Now I just can’t wait for the reveal of who Brian’s real father is.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2020 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 35

did read it again

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2019 1:08 am Title: Chapter 35

This is really different and I really loved it. Thanks for sharing 🥰

Reviewer: Purple Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2019 9:16 am Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: Kinneysbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2019 8:51 am Title: Chapter 35

So sad but a lovely ending

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2018 1:25 am Title: Chapter 33

Love it

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2018 8:03 am Title: Chapter 35

Great ending. I really enjoyed this story. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2018 9:28 pm Title: Chapter 34

The name is a perfect way to honor Carl. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2018 1:44 pm Title: Chapter 33

They are all healing. It’s great to see. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2018 1:34 pm Title: Chapter 32

Did Deb actually get it?

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2018 1:21 pm Title: Chapter 31

Already house hunting? They are adorable. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2018 9:07 am Title: Chapter 30

What a perfect date. 

If Lindsay and Michael thought the emails were harmless why send them through Mel’s account?

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2018 8:53 am Title: Chapter 29

I can’t decide whether Deb is really thinking that Brian is the source of all evil or if she is just nuts. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2018 8:46 am Title: Chapter 28

Emmett is a great friend. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2018 8:35 am Title: Chapter 27

Yippee, Ted meet Blake. Now he has to be brave enough to go back. 

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