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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2018 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, what a beginning. Everything is so screwed up. I hope it will be better in New York. 

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2017 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 3

Wow, it really is better for Gus that Lindsay and Melanie won't be around anymore. It will take a lot of time for him to heal properly. It's heartbreaking and hits too close to home for me.

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2017 6:48 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow, what a beautiful chapter. There was a direct bond between Brian and Justin. Gus was really sweet. I can't wait for them to become a family. Emmett and Ted seemed to like Justin, too. Ethan sucks. He needs to leave Justin alone. He doesn't deserve someone as good as Justin.

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2017 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yes, they have to get away from the four abusers. Thank God Emmett noticed what the girls did to poor Gus. Who knows what would have happened to him if nobody had noticed. I really want to torture Michael for the way he treats Ted. It's not love when you stand by and watch your partner almost killing himself. It was pure luck that Brian showed up. And Michael deserved the punch.

Good start. I have the feeling that this story is going to be very interesting.

Reviewer: JbY Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2017 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

I didn't scroll through all the reviews, but I often wondered this. I'm wondering if it was spelled this way out of spite? According to info I found its Deborah "Debbie" Jane Grassi Novotny. In this story you have it as Debra. Was this intentional?

I love the story, it doesn't take away from it at all. Just curious 😊. Excellent story!

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2017 1:39 pm Title: Chapter 35

I like the way it ended but I don't think Michael & Lindsay deserved to be that happy.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2017 4:55 am Title: Chapter 35

I thought I had reviewed this story, but either it didn't post and I didn't notice it or I simply forgot to do it. Don't know which, but anyway... this is such a moving, wonderful, at times difficult to read story. I was hesitant at first to read it because I get too upset with child abuse stories, but I am so glad I did read it. Wonderful, wonderful story! I really love it.

Deb

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2017 4:44 am Title: Chapter 35

Omg I love the ending... not happy that Michael and Lindsay got their preferred endings... but glad Debbie was able to get better and she was able to reconcile with Vic but also glad brian didn't let her back in their life 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2017 4:39 am Title: Chapter 34

LOVE the name change... perfect! I'm sure Carl will be so touched 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2017 4:31 am Title: Chapter 33

I'm so happy for brian and Justin, Ted and Blake, and Emmett and Drew

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2017 4:31 am Title: Chapter 33

I'm so happy for brian and Justin, Ted and Blake, and Emmett and Drew

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2017 4:18 am Title: Chapter 32

Has Debra actually realized the truth?

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2017 4:10 am Title: Chapter 31

So proud of and happy for Ted... and now Em can relax a bit and get his happy too

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2017 3:48 am Title: Chapter 30

I can't even put words to my anger at THEM

 

but I love the date brian planned!!!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2017 3:26 am Title: Chapter 29

Deb really can't see how michael isn't to blame... or herself! Grrr

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2017 3:16 am Title: Chapter 28

So happy for Teddy... and seriously Mel was trying to distract brian for Michael to get to Ted? 

Why do I believe Mel didn't send the emails but Lindsay stupidly did and Mel hasn't figured it out yet 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2017 2:12 am Title: Chapter 27

Go get her Carl 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2017 9:21 pm Title: Chapter 26

Finally... sweet and vulnerable and hot!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2017 9:13 pm Title: Chapter 25

Go Nancy go!!!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2017 9:05 pm Title: Chapter 24

So happy Brian feels comfortable enough to share with his family 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2017 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 23

My happy heart with this one

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2017 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 22

The family is gelling so well together. But I also understand it could be a little overwhelming for brian. I'm glad Justin sees this and is there for him 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2017 8:08 pm Title: Chapter 21

Debra, Michael, Lindsay and Mel are always the victims in their own mind... wow 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2017 8:00 pm Title: Chapter 20

I love the new additions to Brian's family... so protective is awesome!!! Brian absolutely deserves it!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2017 7:32 pm Title: Chapter 19

Does this mean Justin might be ready to

give it a try?

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