Date: Oct 08, 2017 5:52 am Title: Chapter 30
Totally trippy chapter. Way awesome.
Date: Oct 08, 2017 5:24 am Title: Chapter 30
I'm lost with this one; I'll wait for the next one to try to understand.
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2017 3:26 am Title: Chapter 30
Woah! Now that's a fine kettle of fish. Does it help?
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2017 2:37 pm Title: Chapter 29
Lots of questions that I think you'll answer in future chapters. Like why does Kira get more leeway. It's nice to see that Michael has grown up. Also that Emmett is on team Brian!
Date: Oct 05, 2017 10:39 am Title: Chapter 29
We are moving right along. I do hope they can stop this soon. I see Brian is getting homesick.
Thanks for the update.
Hugs,
Jessica
Date: Oct 05, 2017 4:07 am Title: Chapter 29
Tricky part in more ways than one!
Date: Oct 05, 2017 3:43 am Title: Chapter 29
I actually like this Michael. It's a miracle.
Date: Oct 05, 2017 3:15 am Title: Chapter 29
Gor me a confusing chapter. Hope their plan works.
Em is stronger than given credit being.
Date: Sep 30, 2017 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 28
Ha! Michael is so funny. Goes to store sees what an idiot he is and wants to smack himself. Then tells the fidder his playing sounds like cats fighting. Yay Mikey.
Bringing Carl and Daphne from the past live into the current one, isn't it going to make things harder for Brian and Justin to meet?
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2017 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 28
Wow. I didn't think Michael could improve but he does. Loving this.
Date: Sep 29, 2017 10:30 am Title: Chapter 28
I'm glad that Brian was able to get Daphne and Carl on board. I can't wait for this to all come out.
Thanks for another wonderful update.
Hugs,
Jessica
Date: Sep 29, 2017 4:09 am Title: Chapter 28
Great chapter, again. The trap is shaping up and Hunter will be safe with Daphne. I love the idea of going back to see what happened, and change a few things.
Date: Sep 26, 2017 6:01 pm Title: Chapter 27
Michael's self reflection shows incredible growth and maturity. Happy for him. He will now be able to move forward in his own life without trying to manipulated every one else's, particulalry Brian and Justin's. He's finally bein honest with Brian and more importantly with himself. It must be so enlightening seeing himself as he once was compared to how he is at this moment. HE even seems embarassed.
Joan was a shocker too. She held a lot in the balance with what she could've done re Lindsey. Perhaps she really does love her son. Shame it was realized too late. Will her fate eventually change?
Lindsey apparently will go to endless lengths to try to get what she wants. Obviously she will inevitably fail, but the shit she's going to possibly leave in her wake is unreal. She's gone beyond annoying and self-seving bitch. It's like she's become evil personified.
The idea of Rita and Richert being involved together is horrific! Hope everything B&M plan goes off as planned! R&R need to go DOWN big time!
Really was a thrilling chapter! Was so eager to read it! Am excited to see what comes next.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Sep 26, 2017 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 27
Amazing chapter: the way you find ideas to make the puzzle appear.
Michael and Brian's key point is obvious now, but I'm not sure I would have guessed.
Rita is the worse mother on Earth: how could she marry a guy who is a closet case and a pedophile?
Brian was able to talk to his mother and have some sort of closure.
Date: Sep 26, 2017 1:23 pm Title: Chapter 27
Boy Lindsay's pulling out all the stops isn't she? Trying to get Joan on her side. Geeze.
It's getting a bit scary with Rita and Reikert. Him mayor? Her married to him? The only thing I can see her doing is being a pimp for the rent boys. And that is not a good thing.
About time Mikey did some good..
Date: Sep 26, 2017 10:21 am Title: Chapter 27
I'm glad Justin has the kids and Brian to re-center him. I know dealing with Craig was really hard for him.
Who knew Joan could be helpful? I'm glad Brian doesn't have her as a mother in this life.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Hugs,
Jessica
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2017 2:36 am Title: Chapter 27
Going back is interesting. Michael seems to have come to terms with how he acted and looks like he's going good.
Date: Sep 17, 2017 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 26
I'm glad Kira was able to help Justin make Craig see his future.
I agree with Brian, no shady stuff with Michael.
Thanks for the update.
Date: Sep 17, 2017 4:23 pm Title: Chapter 26
"I can't help Dad when he comes, but Uncle Mickey will"....what does Kira mean? Comes where? When they each try to convince the person in their life to cut the crap? lol
Date: Sep 17, 2017 2:18 pm Title: Chapter 26
Excellent!
They did find their place, the beginning of their time.
What will be Brian and Michael's?
Date: Sep 17, 2017 3:58 am Title: Chapter 26
That was a great chapter. Love the way Justin dealt with his dad.
Date: Sep 17, 2017 12:49 am Title: Chapter 26
Wow, Lindsay will try anything won't she. Craig is smart enough to listen to Justin. Who's next on their list?
I too hope Brian doesn't have to finish that aborted hand job.
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2017 12:26 am Title: Chapter 26
Wow. Things are finally coming together. Or at least it looks that way.
Date: Sep 04, 2017 5:02 pm Title: Chapter 25
Intriguing: what is this fixed point in time?
[Report This]Date: Sep 04, 2017 11:45 am Title: Chapter 25
The lamppost? It's gotta be that. Of course you could always come up with something better. You usually do!