Date: Nov 06, 2017 4:47 pm Title: Chapter 36
Brian doesn't do boyfriends or relationships, but, oh boy, he does jealousy!
Michael is really great in this story; he thinks and acts to get Lindsay out of control, so she makes mistakes.
Todd's a little devilish; he loves teasing Lindsay.
Date: Nov 04, 2017 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 36
OOOOHHHHHHH that tricky bitch! I can't wait to watch her fail! Brian may be feeling like his world and all the people in it are going crazy, but eventually he's going to put all the pieces together for himself. I can't wait until he confronts Old Lyin' Lips Lindsay about her lie.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2017 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 36
Game, set, match. Two out of three?
Date: Nov 04, 2017 5:29 am Title: Chapter 36
Poor Brian he must feel like the whole world has gone crazy.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 4:21 pm Title: Chapter 35
A few possibilities appear to deviate from Lindsay's plan: Ethan, David and Brian being jealous. If they play the right cards, it could work or at least seriously annoy Lindsay.
Michael is great in this part: he thinks to other things than comics and his best friend. I like his idea to see who is responsible for the loft's intrusion.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 6:19 am Title: Chapter 35
This Michael is really trying.
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2017 12:58 am Title: Chapter 35
Wow, that was different and it plays right into the storyline.
Date: Oct 26, 2017 6:36 pm Title: Chapter 34
What an imagination you have to deal with different timelines and versions of people.
Date: Oct 25, 2017 3:19 pm Title: Chapter 34
ADmittedly I'm getting a bit concerned about the current situation. I know that you would never separate them, but the lead up to everything getting restored is nerve wracking.
That whole thing with Lindsey freaked me out! How did Michael and Justin not react?
What's with Brian's reaction at the end? Is he jealous of Michael? Is he wonderingWTF is going on? Is he figuring things out?
Edge of my seat!
Cheers
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2017 2:18 pm Title: Chapter 34
Boy, while I enjoy everybit of this I'm having trouble telling which Brian is which. I liked it when you had Emmett 1 and 2. Maybe you could do that for all the characters?
Date: Oct 25, 2017 10:36 am Title: Chapter 34
Uh oh. Maybe Brian 1.0 has finally figured out what is going on.
Please update soon.
Date: Oct 25, 2017 6:50 am Title: Chapter 34
This is getting kinda scary. Lindsay won't hurt Gus will she?
Date: Oct 23, 2017 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 33
I'm a bit lost, but I guess it will get more clear later on.
Date: Oct 23, 2017 11:07 am Title: Chapter 33
Very interesting chapter. I'm glad we are finding out more of Lindsay's plan.
Thanks for the update.
Date: Oct 23, 2017 8:10 am Title: Chapter 33
Ok. this just got really weird, and that is saying something.
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2017 2:06 am Title: Chapter 33
Just when Brian has it figured out it changes. I look forward to your posts, they are so good.
Date: Oct 18, 2017 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 32
That entire scenario with Stockwell was great!! Oh the look of his fice must have been absolutely priceless! LOL! Love it.
Kind of neet having Michael being a "ggod guy" now. Seeing his previous self and being moritified at his actions. Past brian I think is a bit out of sorts seeing a new and improved Michael. I also like how Brian is obviously looking for Justin. Frustrated that he can't find him.
Getting pretty concerned about this raging fire that Micheal was referring to. He's right. Things seem to be a bit simple right now. Too simple. I'm biting my nails waiting to see what's going to happen. YIKES!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 18, 2017 10:29 am Title: Chapter 32
I would have loved to have been in the crowd to see Stockwell make a fool of himself.
I can't wait for them to get back to the other timeline. I know Brian is missing the kids and Justin.
Thanks for the update.
Jessica
Date: Oct 18, 2017 5:48 am Title: Chapter 32
Smart Michael.
Date: Oct 18, 2017 4:04 am Title: Chapter 32
Oh, what a cliffhanger! What is going on?
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2017 3:27 am Title: Chapter 32
Wow. Michael is the smart one for a change.
Date: Oct 15, 2017 9:07 am Title: Chapter 31
You can see how frustrated Brian is getting being away from Justin. I hope he can get back to Justin soon.
Keeping my fingers crossed that all goes according to plan with the sting operation.
Thanks for the update.
Hugs,
Jessica
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2017 11:57 am Title: Chapter 31
I am so looking forward to seeing how this scam turns out. Hope it works.
Date: Oct 13, 2017 3:49 am Title: Chapter 31
It will be tricky to get Stockwell not to bury the case once the dirty cop is caught.
Date: Oct 08, 2017 11:34 am Title: Chapter 30
Wow! I don't even know what more to say.
Thank you for the update.