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Date: Aug 29, 2025 8:14 pm Title: Chapter 25

Another winner of a story! Thank you!

At least you had Michael getting some time. I also hope that all of Michael's money and valuables were seized for Brian, since it would go toward the clinic.

Hugs ~Cathy

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 24

I just hope the sentencing fits the crime. Even though Michael isn't in as deep as the office, he needs some prison time for all the underhanded crap he's done, and the amount of money he's taken all these years will require some stiff felony charges.

I'm really looking forward to the partners in the clinic getting what they deserve.

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 7:37 pm Title: Chapter 23

I am so very happy that Brian now owns the storage facility contents.

What kind of father does that to his son? 

So... it looks like Hank is getting some awesome comics, and Michael is going to have to answer some tough questions, and be forced to tell the truth.

As for David... Everyone in the clinic where he works is going to find themselves i n some deep shit. I don't feel sorry for any of them.

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 7:21 pm Title: Chapter 22

That is some scam! I don't think Hank had anything to do with this. It's probably more like David was getting back at Brian.

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 7:00 pm Title: Chapter 21

This is starting to get really interesting.

I just can't see David doing that for Michael. IF Michael has been buying prime collectibles, it looks like he's going to have to sell all of them.

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 6:45 pm Title: Chapter 20

It's really too bad that nobody ever talked to the therapist who was treating Michael.

Dr. Dave! Another slime. This ought to be good and interesting!

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 19

When Debbie found out the truth about Michael, she was spitting tacks. Now it's back to step one. Nothing matters except her widdle baby.

It looks like we're going to find out the mystery about the money. I'm sure Michael has found a way to keep it.

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 18

Good for Blake and Drew finally laying down ground rules.

However, Deb is toxic, and they shouldn't feel bad about not wanting her around.

This whole "who's paying bills, and what for" has me stumped. Good to know that Justn and Cole will get to the bottom of it. 

How much has Brian shelled out?

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 5:26 pm Title: Chapter 17

Debbie needed this realization that whatever she planned wasn't going to go her way.

Good god, in heaven, what could Brian have said that had Michael backing up?

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 5:16 pm Title: Chapter 16

Poor Vic. Debbie had better really look at herself and see why people don't want anything to do with her or Michael. I love that Brian is not letting them stay, but Rodney gets full access. And it doesn't surprise me that they blew this way out pf proportion.

God, Michael was really milking the attention from Brian.

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 4:58 pm Title: Chapter 15

Yay! Things are coming to light about Michael. Good question ~ if Michael hasn't worked in years, how is he paying his rent and stuff? What was he doing for work before the accident?

Go, Lindsay. Slap Deb again regarding Michael.

I really do like Cole. Someone who could probably buy half of the world, yet down to Earth. He'll probably start grooming Gus right away.

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 4:42 pm Title: Chapter 14

Okay, the insurance question was valid. But what's really going on?

I like that Brian fessed up to Justin about Michael and the anger he had.

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 13

Ooh, Mikey made the one mistake... Debbie knowing the truth. Good enough! I love Carl in this story. He's apparently back to counselor mode. The fact he already referred to Debbie as Red is amusing. I wonder if there's more in the making.

And what's that about the insurance company not paying the bills? That doesn't sound right.

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 12

Aha! That phone idea sounds good.

Michael will milk this fall as another way to bother Brian and the others. I'm so glad Vic was there, and he and Rodney took over. I hope Vic tells everything to Debbie about how Michael was RUNNING.

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 3:56 pm Title: Chapter 11

Wow! Debbiie's really in dunce mode. I'm sure Ted's next. Maybe if Melanie talked to Deb, who's aware of the animosity between Mel and Brian, that would sink in more.

If it comes to Jennifer having to talk to Debbie ~ mother to mother ~ it won't be pretty.

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 3:40 pm Title: Chapter 10

Well, I sure hope that Debbie cools her jets now. I hope that the comment she made when she said a little too much sinks in now. I'm kind of hoping that if she doesn't shape up, the guys will stop seeing her, too. People can only take so much.

So, Lee is infatuated with Molly. Does Justin know that?

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 3:23 pm Title: Chapter 9

Touché, Justin. I also liked Brian getting a couple of jabs in there, too. Justin has so much more repartee than Michael.

What do you bet Michael ran straight to Debbie, complaining about how mean Brian was? He'd better also remember that the four other guys were there and nobody came to his defense. Hmm... will Debbie beat it over to Woody's?

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 2:56 pm Title: Chapter 8

It turned out to be a good thing that the door to Brian's office was open. Because if they heard Cynthis speak, then Michael must have heard what Brian said about Michael.

Also, I'm behind with Brian's friendship with both Mel and Lindsay.  

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 2:20 am Title: Chapter 7

Too bad, so sad. I think I should invest in ear noise reduction headsets.

It was nice to see Brian and Justin together, arriving together at the girls' house.

I wonder if Michael will go into their house?

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 1:50 am Title: Chapter 6 The Return of Brian Kinney

I wonder if this was the first time Carl played marriage counselor. 

Nothing like: Clash of the Titans.

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 1:28 am Title: Chapter 5

FINALLY, Brian saw the truth. I hope when Debbie gets there, she sees him floating around before he sees her. All she'll need to do is stay quietly and watch.

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 1:00 am Title: Chapter 4

Oh Yippy! The guys have to talk now. They can be alone, without Michael hounding them. I hope they just go to the mansion.

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 12:44 am Title: Chapter 3

So Mel has a Brian in her life. That's a different take on her. One I like though.

 

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Date: Aug 29, 2025 12:24 am Title: Chapter 2

SMH ~ Poor Brian. Michael has really got him twisted. 

I hope someone follows him discreetly and tapes him walking. Michael better hope he can run faster than Brian when Brian realizes Michael's been lying for a very long time.

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Date: Aug 28, 2025 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

This hit me strange: Michael was driving? Hmm... did he purposely cause the accident?

What a shithead. If I was Brian, I almost think I'd ask Mikey to go for a drive, and then drive him over a cliff, after I cleared the car. ;)

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