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Reviewer: gotb30 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 5:41 am Title: Chapter 6

I love the firehouse for the new home! And that MM has got to be Mysterious Marilyn! Lol 😆 And what is up with Mikey!?!



Author's Response:

I thought it might be a good idea.  Who else but MM would know that Brian would buy a firehouse?  I should have but an anti-Mikey warning but I couldn't figure out how.

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 3:16 am Title: Chapter 5

I love how Emmett and Ted are looking out for Brian, especially since Mikey is acting so strangely... actually, he's mostly in character. Yikes! *rushing off to read the next chapter*



Author's Response:

To me Mikey seemed in character so I'm happy you think so too.

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 2:59 am Title: Chapter 4

Brian has a good group of friends around him, unexpectedly as Cynthia, Ted, and Emmett.



Author's Response:

I hope they are.  Personally I love them for being on team Brian.

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 2:50 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh wow... that Michael... he means well but he sure riles everyone up.  I'm glad that Brian wasn't charged but it doesn't sound like his health is too good at the moment. I'm glad this story is completed so I can find out what happened! :)



Author's Response:

But does Michael mean well?  At least you won't have to wait to find out.  

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 2:40 am Title: Chapter 2

LOL, awww, Brian was appreciative but he is a clothes horse, after all. :) I'm sad to hear that the loft is gone but he can rebuild with the insurance money. I can just imagine Brian in the green suit, with a black tie maybe? Yum...



Author's Response:

I'm afraid you haven't taken into account the best friend.  You'll see in the next chapter.

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 2:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Omg, this is so good... I wonder what is up with Michael??



Author's Response:

Don't we all wonder about Michael, the Best Friend.  I just never saw him as that.  Thanks for the lovely review.

Reviewer: CarolK1943 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2017 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 15

I just finished reading this for the second time. It was thoroughly enjoyable.

 

Now, how about continuing from the ending? I love a good Greg!

 

Carol



Author's Response:

Working on it.

Reviewer: Wendy Dawn Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2017 7:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved the ending. It leaves the  door open for so many possibilities. Can't wait to see what happens next in this universe. 

 I always love an anti-Michael story.  It's always good to see him get his in the end. 

  Seeing things through Emmett's  eyes was very enjoyable  and gave the story a different twist. 



Author's Response:

I love Emmett and he has such a way of seeing things that tickles me.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2017 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oh no, you can't stop the tale here! It's too soon.



Author's Response:

Sorry.  I find if I don't stop and wrap things up it could go on forever.  lol 



Author's Response:

Sorry.  I find if I don't stop and wrap things up it could go on forever.  lol 

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2017 3:16 pm Title: Chapter 15

Love a happy ending!

I love that you kinda left the ending open to continue with a mpreg story.  It would be a hoot to have Brian pregnant.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  It could be Brian, could be Justin, could be Emmett!  You never know.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2017 2:45 pm Title: Chapter 15

Wonderful story! So glad there was a happy ending and that Michael is out of their lives! Well done!

Deb



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I love happy endings.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2017 3:04 pm Title: Chapter 14

A broken leg is no fun, but it could have been worse: the head, the back, an arm or both...

Emmett is right to inform Ben and Hunter so they can see what is really happening with Michael.



Author's Response:

Brian lucked out, sort of.  Yes, Ben and Hunter finally know the truth.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2017 1:56 pm Title: Chapter 14

Hmmmm. What has Michael been doing? Very curious. TAG



Author's Response:

One more chapter and all will be known.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 3:29 pm Title: Chapter 13

At least, the kids can see that Brian isn't the monster Mel had them believe he was.



Author's Response:

Yep, Brian has turned into an okay kind of guy.  

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 1:45 pm Title: Chapter 13

Poor Gus & JR... TAG



Author's Response:

Yes but now that Brian, Emmett, Ted, Cynthia and Justin are backing them things should go better.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 7:45 am Title: Chapter 12

Love that vid of Randy. TAG



Author's Response:

Isn't it great!  Randy is so much fun to watch.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 7:24 am Title: Chapter 11

Thank goodness Em found Gus & JR. TAG



Author's Response:

Yes it is.  I'm sure they were not where or how he expected to find them.  

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 6:20 am Title: Chapter 10

Looks like Brian & Justin need each other pretty badly... TAG



Author's Response:

Something that everyone knows Brian and Justin need each other.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 6:11 am Title: Chapter 9

Uh oh - Brian's health is getting worse... TAG



Author's Response:

Yes, after what happened at the housewarming his health took a turn.  Something else to blame on Deb and Michael.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 6:04 am Title: Chapter 8

Yay that Justin's here finally, but boo for Michael & Deb ruining the party. I loved the layouts for the two bedrooms though. Thanks for adding the pics! TAG



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like them.  Descriptions couldn't do them justice.  Yes, Michael and Deb made fools of themselves and don't even realize it. 

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 5:41 am Title: Chapter 7

The finished house sounds great. TAG



Author's Response:

It was fun looking for unusual things for it.  Shame Brian wasn't floating in money.  

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 5:26 pm Title: Chapter 12

Finally caught up here to review.

This story catches you after the first sentence.  I love the way you kept Michael canon perfect but with a small twist. (which if you really watch, Michael could have done the same thing on the show)

Emmentt and Ted prove that they are the true friends of Brian in the preceding chapters.

And I would really love to see Cynthia go all evil on Michael ass.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!  I've always wanted to see if I could do Michael the way I saw him in the series, but I can't resist twists and turns.  I always felt by the end of the series Ted was close to Brian and wanted to put Emmett there as well.  Cynthia doesn't have the time to go all evil on Michael, but I don't think he'd survive.  I enjoyed your review especially that the story caught you after the first sentence.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 12

It's really getting worse for Justin, but he's not alone anymore; Daphne and Emmett are with him.

How Gus will act/react when Brian will arrive?



Author's Response:

I couldn't leave out Daphne and Emmett is so helpful, seeing what really is.  You'll have to wait to find out how Gus deals with things.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 7:29 am Title: Chapter 6

Great choice of a house for Brian! TAG



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.  With a bath house for an office he'd have to go for something unusual.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 7:18 am Title: Chapter 5

Nice Mysyerious Marilyn sighting! TAG



Author's Response:

I love Mysterious Marilyn and couldn't resist putting her in this.

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