[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 6:07 am Title: Chapter 15
At first, I thought Michael was supplying the girls with drugs, but then thought it had to be something else, if they were both holding down jobs. What I can't understand, why he's not in jail. They had video of him supplying a drug to Justin... I would think a video of Brian's - besides him publicly admitting it - they could have gotten from Babylon. Let's not even start on the extortion charge, which carries at least a year in jail... more depending on the monetary amount.
But, it sounds like Mysterious Marilyn (MM) is in their corner.
This story just pulled a reader into it. You have an amazing knack for that. Thank you for sharing this with us.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 6:02 am Title: Chapter 14
This is getting so messed up. Brian's got a broken leg. And Michael better hope no Lynch mob comes after him.
Where's the money? Why would the girls give it to him? Did he know something about them that he threatened to tell Brian, which pertained to Gus?
I'm so very happy that Emmett made sure that Ben and Hunter know the truth about Michael.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 5:49 am Title: Chapter 13
I feel sick to my stomach. You've created a Michael worse than usual. For him to drug both Briin and Justin... how terribly awful! I sure hope he gets his just desserts!
Follow the Golden Rule: Do unto others as they have done unto you.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 5:37 am Title: Chapter 12
Where is all the money that Brian has sent? Is Lindsay hiding it, waiting for a rainy day? Other than that, I can't come up with anything.
And Oh God! Look at what they've done to the kids!
I'm having a hard time stomaching Michael. Talk about an evil person.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 5:33 am Title: Chapter 11
Michael has a lot to atone for. So do Lindsay and Melanie. That is so underhanded of them.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 5:29 am Title: Chapter 10
How did Michael know where to get in touch with Justin? And what's his reasoning now?
I love Ted, Emmett, and Cynthia. So very glad Brian has them.
Breast cancer? I hadn't seen that one coming. Good Job!
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 5:23 am Title: Chapter 9
I want to reach into my computer and strangle Michael. My god, what a CHILD!
Debbie could be second in line for being strangled.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 5:15 am Title: Chapter 8
I'm glad that Brian is seeing both Ted and Emmett for who they are.
I was so happy to see Justin coming into the story. And that Brian still wants him.
Michael is so very evil. Why's he doing all this?
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 4:56 am Title: Chapter 7
Michael's an idiot, and Debbie needs to see just how much of one he is.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 4:52 am Title: Chapter 6
I love the switch of how Emmett protects Brian. Isn't that what a TRUE best friend would do?
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 4:51 am Title: Chapter 5
I like how Brian is seeing who his TRUE friends are.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 4:45 am Title: Chapter 4
Nice to have security cameras. And thank heavens for Cynthia amd Emmett.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 4:41 am Title: Chapter 3
Where's Michael's head at? Emmett Armani. Do I need to say more? Good thing he's as tall as Brian.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 4:32 am Title: Chapter 2
Stupid Michael. It's a good thing Emmett and Ted helped Brian.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 4:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, Mikey. He never wants to grow up.
Date: Dec 29, 2022 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 15
Wow, this was a great story!! I was kept on the edge of my seat from start to finish!! Even though Michael didn't get his comeuppance that he so needed, at least he ended up on the short end of the stick. Brian, Justin and the kids made a life together with Emmett, Ted and Cynthia helping out a long the way. And Michael became the outsider, the one who nobody wanted anything to do with. I guess he got his comeuppance after all.
Date: Aug 13, 2019 2:19 pm Title: Chapter 15
did read it again
Date: Sep 22, 2018 1:27 pm Title: Chapter 7
so far i love it. Always liked EM and Ted and Chytia. Love Brian
Date: Sep 22, 2018 1:26 pm Title: Chapter 7
so far i love it. Always liked EM and Ted and Chytia. Love Brian
Date: Aug 29, 2017 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 15
Who is MM? I like your conclusions. I'm just sad that Michael didn't get any punishment for hurting Justin like that.
Author's Response:
Sadly the bad guys don't always get what they deserve. Maybe next time.
Date: Aug 29, 2017 4:55 pm Title: Chapter 14
The girls gave Michael money? Why? This is really confusing. I didn't think Michael would be intelligent enough to pull this off.
Author's Response:
Michael is much smarter then he looks. As for why they gave Michael money I'm sure they did something he could hold over their heads.
Date: Aug 29, 2017 3:43 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'm glad they let JR go with Brian.
Author's Response:
Me too. I think Brian could tell that Gus would not leave JR behind.
Date: Aug 29, 2017 3:25 pm Title: Chapter 12
I hope Gus takes well to living with his father. Maybe Michael will finally grow a conscience and tell what drug he used.
Author's Response:
Once Gus learns the truth I'm sure he will. As for Michael - don't count on it.
Date: Aug 29, 2017 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 11
Those poor kids. Where is all the money? And why doesn't Michael help?
Author's Response:
All will be reveiled.
Date: Aug 29, 2017 3:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
Poor Justin. Michael is such an asshole.
Author's Response:
Yes he is.