Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:22 am Title: Chapter 2
Glad for Mel and seems appropriate for Lindsay
Author's Response:
Well I wanted something different.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Love hearing how the family is doing
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: Oct 30, 2017 7:35 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh, the end is spooky!
Author's Response:
Well it is Halloween.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 7:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
Excellent! Jack as the mayo in Joan/Vic sandwich: the threesome from Hell! Yeehaw!
I bet Emmett will be delighted to be a father and Deb will be so disappointed.
Author's Response:
Deb will never accept that she's not a grandmother. Emmett is happy as a clam. I just couldn't resist Jack with Vic plus I couldn't leave out Joan. Technically that was all Michael's doing.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 7:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
So Carl doesn't have the money from his house anymore and Deb's house is once again refinanced? I smell Michael on this new development.
Author's Response:
You smelled right. Michael is the bad egg.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 7:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
Excellent: Brian is pregnant and Justin is sick.
Will they leave the firehouse? I thought it was big enough for a big family, which they are getting.
Poor Ben: he really isn't good at picking a good partner. At least, he isn't sick anymore.
Author's Response:
I think the firehouse was tainted by Deb and Michael's interference so moving is a viable option. About Ben if it weren't for bad luck he'd have no luck at all on picking partners.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 4:04 am Title: Chapter 8
LMAO!!! I can't say that I blame Dummy for clawing out his own eyes with the images of the last scene. I'm still laughing hard at that!
So glad that they have all moved on beyond Manic Michael and Loony Lindsay. Hopefully they will have a life full of love and laughter, but most of all Novotny free!
Great Job Phyllis!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I thought, what could be the worse thing for Michael and ran with it. Living in a home with it's own playground and such an assortment of playmates for Becca and Gus will insure lots of laughter. Now that there are five kids to love it's a sure thing.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 3:54 am Title: Chapter 7
LMAO!!!!!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Well, I did try. Things just kept cropping up.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 3:21 am Title: Chapter 6
Glad Carl decided not to waste any more of his life arguing a losing battle with Debbie. Her one track mind has finally cost her everything.
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
When Deb gets focused on something, she's like a dog with a bone. This time I didn't want Carl to suffer for it.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 3:13 am Title: Chapter 5
Love that Marty knows what Marilyn knows but not the other way around. Creates a very interesting dynamic between the two personalities.
So Brian is pregnant but Justin is suffering the morning sickness? SWEET! I can't begin to tell you how many times I wished someone else had the damn ANYTIME sickness when I had my two....LOL
So Ben married a married man with 6.5 kids....SMH I honestly don't know if he went from bad to worse where Michael is concerned. Now THAT says an awful lot!
Onto the next chapter!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I wanted something different and a reason why Mysterious Marilyn denied sending the cards. Unfortunatly once I get thinking on a plot line anything can happen.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 1:32 am Title: Chapter 4
Loving that Jenny and Gus are trying new things and coming into their own as young adults!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thank you! I wanted to show how they were developing.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 1:22 am Title: Chapter 3
Michael is a head case! It's probably better that Brian doesn't try to figure out what the FOOL is up to...SMH As for this Marty twist, it's a really good one! Off to the next chapter!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I try to do things I haven't seen done. It's hard because there are so many good stories out there.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 8:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
Becca is a lot nicer than JR. Does she remember her father?
Author's Response:
Unfortunately I think she does and I think it has colored her interaction with Deb.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 7:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
MM as in Mysterious Marty? Not too far from Mysterious Marilyn, once the wig and make-up are gone.
Author's Response:
You will have your answer once you read Ben and Hunter's part.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 7:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Happy to read that Mel opened her eyes and told Brian she was sorry: never too late!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I could have left her being evil, but after I found the pic I decided to do a nice twist.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 6:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, MM is back!
Author's Response:
Wouldn't be the same without MM.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
Omg...ew ew ew he scratched out his own eyes? Jesus! What were Justin & Brian's babies & their names? Glad everyone was happy in the end but are they realing living in an old church? Hahaha
Author's Response:
Considering what he was seeing can you blame him? As for the babies names, I hadn't given it much thought. Do you have any suggestions? Yes, it is a church, I think it was Presbyterian.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 3:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love the way you wrapped eveything up.
Great story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, that's always nice to hear.
Author's Response:
Thank you, that's always nice to hear.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 5:50 am Title: Chapter 7
Omg ...that was helarious...amazing.
Author's Response:
Thanks! That's what I was going for.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 5:44 am Title: Chapter 6
Wow..poor carl...new home away from deb..good for him.
Author's Response:
You never know do ya.
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2017 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ya for Emmett being Becca's father!!
And the last scene you painted, WOW just WOW!! And LOL!!! Jack/Vic/Joan in a three way...can I say eeewwwww!!! Vic has better taste.
Author's Response:
I know. I said to myself what is the worst thing Michael could see and voila.
Date: Oct 28, 2017 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 7
Emmett is Jenny's dad? Holy shit! Didn't see that coming! And Mysterious Marilyn killed Michael? Is that right? Or was that just a nightmare? lol
Author's Response:
Yep. I thought of using Ted, but Emmett kept jumping up and down saying me, me. Sorry to dissappoint you but no one dies.
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2017 4:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
I can understand why Becca didn't want to see Deb. She doesn't know her very well and on a good day Deb is overpowering.
Carl can take only soo much. Glad Brian is helping Carl. He's the dad everyone wanted.
Did Deb re-mortgage her house for her man-child? Or did she hire a private eye to find Brian?
Author's Response:
Yes, that's where Michael got the money for the lawyer.
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2017 7:42 am Title: Chapter 5
Nope..i was clueless...there...brian prego...cool.
Author's Response:
Tricked you, did I? Bet you thought Justin was. And the story isn't over yet!
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2017 7:35 am Title: Chapter 4
Becca...much better then JR.
Author's Response:
I'm sure anything was better than Junior. Especially with who her father is.