[Report This]Date: Dec 15, 2017 12:58 am Title: Chapter 21 - Blue Skies
What an amazing coincedence with Little Harry! I have a feeling that the party is going to leave a mark in history.
Date: Dec 15, 2017 12:45 am Title: Chapter 21 - Blue Skies
Will never be able to look at a bottle of chocolate again without thinking of this story. And, nice work with putting the name Harold into the story. Great Job.
Date: Dec 12, 2017 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Oh Look At Me Now.
It's great how connsiderate Brian can be with Justin. The poor pilot is KO and Brian entertains himself with his lightbox.
I loved Brian's memory about the yoga instructor.
Gus and his Daddy: it's always a pleasure to read. I hope Brian will find a way to get them to meet. Only, I don't see him getting Gus through the "time gate" as Gus couldn't not say anything to his moms. I don't think Brian would want to risk Gus' life by bringing him into 1941. But I'm quite sure you will find a way...
Date: Dec 12, 2017 7:13 am Title: Chapter 20 - Oh Look At Me Now.
Is Brian going to take Gus to Justin or maybe Justin to Gus. That would take some explaining.
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2017 2:24 am Title: Chapter 20 - Oh Look At Me Now.
Justin finding the phone and all that it is capable of is amazing. Getting to talk to Gus was great too. How to get Justin and Gus to meet is going to be something I'd love to see.
Date: Dec 11, 2017 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Oh Look At Me Now.
Your research really adds to the story as do the pictures. Great job.
Author's Response:
Thank you, we're really enjoying the research aspect of this story and are glad you're enjoying it.
~Sally and TAG
Date: Dec 11, 2017 3:12 am Title: Chapter 19 - Where or When
RL has been completely chaotic lately... so even though I'm reading, I don't always have the brain power to leave a coherent comment. But I just want you to know I'm here, I'm reading and sometimes this story is just the thing I need to relax after a crazy day. It's my reward for making it through the nasty days!
Author's Response:
Awww, that is such a wonderful compliment, thank you so much. We're glad to help you unwind after those crazy days.
~Sally and TAG
Date: Dec 11, 2017 1:20 am Title: Chapter 19 - Where or When
Ah, Brian shows he really does have a heart and it belongs to Justin. Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2017 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Where or When
Well at least they'll get a good night's sleep. Is Hobbs going to be a problem?
Author's Response:
Hobbs is ALWAYS a problem.... TAG & Sally
Date: Dec 06, 2017 1:21 am Title: Chapter 18 - 'S Wonderful.
Plot? Who needs plot? Smut is Great! TAG, you spent an hour getting 'inspired' huh? Lol Sally, of course you only watched the rimming videos for academic purposes lmao what a great chapter!
Date: Dec 05, 2017 7:57 pm Title: Chapter 18 - 'S Wonderful.
Plotty or porny: it's always a great pleasure to read.
It was very interesting to find out how Brian was able to make Justin black out.
Appelsauce, that was hot!
It was also nice to see that Justin didn't want to know what will happen on the 19th. He was torn between his loyalty to the RAF and his attraction to Brian. Tough choice, but it was the right to make in such period. Daphne, on the other hand, just asked if any shelter would do.
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2017 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 18 - 'S Wonderful.
I am so enjoying this story. But I still worry about what could and will happen.
Author's Response:
We're so glad you're enjoying this story, just know how much we love our boys, so the probability of this being a good ending is very high ;) That doesn't mean there wont be some bumps along the road hehe.
~SunshineSally and TAG
Date: Dec 05, 2017 1:55 pm Title: Chapter 18 - 'S Wonderful.
Hiya ladies,
Just a very short review.
You two are writing a delightful story. I'm absolutely spellbound by it.
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it.
XOXO
MeMa
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you so much, that is such a wonderful comment and it means so much to us that you are not only reading our story, but loving it.
We hope you like what we have planned :)
~SunshineSally and TAG
Date: Dec 05, 2017 5:23 am Title: Chapter 18 - 'S Wonderful.
Great chapter. I like plot more than poon, but that's just me.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, we really appreciate it.
I promise you, that as porny and non-plotty this chapter may have seemed, it was actually quite important for Justin. One of the biggest aspects of this story is seeing how being gay affects each of our boys in both 1941 and 2016. So, making sure Justin understands ALL the wonders of what being a gay man entails is in fact very important for his character development. This may make more sense later, but stick with us, we promise it'll be worth it.
~SunshineSally and TAG
Date: Dec 05, 2017 2:14 am Title: Chapter 18 - 'S Wonderful.
Well, well, well. What else can I say. Readers were worned about what the chapter was about. LOL And, yes the plot was there, wasn't it????
Author's Response:
The plot most definitely was there. Yes, it was disguised in smut, but that smut was actually quite important for Justin and his character development. Justin is learning what it's like to be a gay man, not only from the master but from someone that is very proud of who he is. Yes, Brian can't walk around 1941 shouting at the top of his lungs that he likes fucking guys, but he stills oozes sexual confidence, and that is something Justin needs to see.
Stick with us, it'll make more sense later :)
Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
~SunshineSally and TAG
Date: Dec 01, 2017 6:53 am Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
The best line of the night anywhere: "Who wanted a large shaking bullet?" OMG! The best line ever!
Now we get into the meat and potatoes of the story - just who, oh who IS Brian Kinney and where is he getting all this stuff/info? Hmmm....
I think we forget just how far we have come in marketing, packaging, etc in just the last three or four decades. When I was in high school, I bought a cordless shaver for my friend who was going into the Army. It was really kind of a new thing, at least where we lived, and he was floored by it. And that was in 1971, not 1941! LOL.
I'm really really really eager to see how Brian will handle having to actually disclose the truth. Will Justin threaten to end it if he doesn't? Will it be because Justin no longer sees the 'romance' of war? Will it be because Brian fears that the portal will close for some reason? Oh, the possibilities!
Loved this chapter, and look forward to more 'discoveries' and the ensuing drama.
Date: Dec 01, 2017 2:50 am Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
They are just too cute together! What is Brian going to come up with to explain all his gadgets, let alone how he knew The Palace was never bombed? When will he tell Justin the truth? Loved all the teasing he had to endure. Lol
Author's Response:
You'll just have to wait and see :P
~Sally and TAG
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2017 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
Brian being psychic! I like it.
Author's Response:
Oh no - don’t say things like that . . . You’ll encourage yet another plot bunny attack with that kind of suggestion! Lol. TAG
Date: Nov 30, 2017 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
OMG that's so brilliant. Justin's sweet naivety about the dildo and safe sex (from the previous chapter). Bathroom scene was great, I'm laughing at Brian for his vanity. Anti-wrinkle creme lol. For a moment I was worried that there will be drama as Justin was thinking about leaving Brian, but luckily he knows better. Daphne is clever, thinking about a supernatural explanation... just not this one! How long untill they figure Brian out? Or till Brian outs himself? Ich bin gespannt, as would the Gerries say.
Date: Nov 30, 2017 6:35 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
Another terrific chapter. The plot is thickening and I love it.
Date: Nov 30, 2017 6:12 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Contrasts.
Justin discovering Brian's gadgets is hilarious; the way he describes the items is interesting and we can see how disturbing it is for him. The shaking bullet is the best of what you thought Brian could have in his bag.
Daphne's remark about the fact that Brian didn't want to go to the shelter is going to bother Justin and I hope he will ask Brian why.
Date: Nov 29, 2017 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 16 - In The Mood.
Oh yes, I enjoyed very much! Hot hot hot!!!! 1940's Justin is so adorable! Now he's going to want to do it all the time. Lol
[Report This]Date: Nov 28, 2017 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 16 - In The Mood.
Very nice look at a first time. The question is does Brian stay with his Blue-eyes or does Blue-eyes go back with Andsom. Tuff question.
Date: Nov 28, 2017 7:51 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Oh Where Can You Be
This story is amazing. I love it so much.
Can you tell me what is APPLESAUCE?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing, we're so happy you're enjoying the story.
Applesauce was used as a swear word or explanative back in the 20s, 30's and 40's. I.e. "Applesauce, I can't believe what we just did, Brian."
~Sally and TAG
Date: Nov 28, 2017 7:27 pm Title: Chapter 16 - In The Mood.
Hot and hilarious!!! What a great combination! Wonderful chapter!
Applesauce is back!
The reaction of Justin about the date on the condom is very funny. His naivety is as sweet as hilarious and Brian doesn't laugh easily.