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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2018 2:26 am Title: Epilogue - Forever

Wow.  What a fantastic ending to the ending.  Brian actually married Justin!  Great story, but who would expect anything less.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2018 10:25 pm Title: Epilogue - Forever

Thank you, thank you, thank you.  The perfect ending to this wonderful story.  Of course, just when I thought I had shed all the tears I had for the story, this epilogue came along.  Love the writing paper.  It is beautiful as are the words. I hope you are already thinking of another great story.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2018 5:30 am Title: Chapter 49 - Sing, Sing, Sing

I just loved this story. I thought you did a great job on research, with the movies Dunkirk and The Darkest Hour out there is a lot of interest. I hope to hear from you both again soon.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2018 2:35 am Title: Chapter 49 - Sing, Sing, Sing

Brian and Justin together forever. All is right with the world.

And even though it was excruciatingly difficult for Daphne and the rest of the 1941 White Lion Pub to accept that Justin was lost in battle, it's better than them thinking he had deserted. 

Thank you for taking us on this wonderful adventure... I am missing it already. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2018 4:47 am Title: Chapter 49 - Sing, Sing, Sing

When you described the weather at the beginning, I feared something like that would happen and Brian would be stuck in 1941, but you wouldn't have done that.

Poor Daphne!

I guess Chris tried a dangerous move and lost.

Great story! Thank you for this time travel!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2018 1:45 am Title: Chapter 49 - Sing, Sing, Sing

Looks like Hobbs was responsible for the loss of 3 planes.  Surprised they didn't check to see what happened to Hobbs since he wasn't supposed to be flying that night.  Or was he?  Now we need another story on how Justin deals with living in Pittsburgh.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2018 12:04 am Title: Chapter 49 - Sing, Sing, Sing

Absolutely fantastic.  You told a great story in such a marvelous way.  I am always happy with a happy ending, but as with each really good story, I am sorry to see the end and I will miss the characters so much.  I just know that you already have plans for another storry brewing.  Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2018 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 49 - Sing, Sing, Sing

Yes a truly epic tale! Well done ladies, loved it!

Reviewer: Mariana Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2018 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 49 - Sing, Sing, Sing

This story was amazing. Thank you so much 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2018 1:41 am Title: Chapter 48 - Let's Get Away From It All

Perfectly done! Somehow I knew Brian & Justin's plan wouldn't run smoothly... but wow, Hobbs is even more abhorrent than in canon. I wasn't exactly sure how Justin would get out of following a direct order, but now I guess Hobbs can take one for the team. The officers didn't see him, only Justin, and he'll be piloting Justin's plane. A case of mistaken identity and Hobbs will be the one declared a deserter. Brilliant. 

Now, however... the feeling of impending Fic withdrawal is very real! 

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2018 1:03 am Title: Chapter 48 - Let's Get Away From It All

This chapter was so scarry and get me so worried that chris almost manage to rape justin. But im so glad that justin is saved...phew.... now brian MUST to drag him ASAP to 2016! Please hurry up brian! 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 48 - Let's Get Away From It All

Great chapter.  You had me worried, but get them to safety, please.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 8:36 pm Title: Chapter 48 - Let's Get Away From It All

Okay, I don't remember if we ever learned whether Hobbs survived, so maybe this was preordained.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 7:40 pm Title: Chapter 48 - Let's Get Away From It All

When Justin said he wanted to go to the base, I felt something will happen there. That was difficult to read and in the end, Brian found the right person to cover for Justin. Bye bye Chris!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 3:03 am Title: Chapter 47 - Perfidia

Once again you had me right there with Justin in the water... I even found it difficult to breathe while reading. But I thank you for not leaving us on that cliff for too long!

Like Brian, I feel a little guilty that Justin had to suffer so much, but I'm happy that it made his difficult decision just a little bit easier. 

Eww... Chris Hobbs is creepy! 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2018 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 47 - Perfidia

So relieved! However, I think Justin should really pay attention to Chris and report him for what he did during the attack; he disobeyed and risked the other pilots' lives.

I hope Chris won't find out about the secret passage.



Author's Response:

I dunno, seeing Chris wander aimlessly around 2016 could be quite entertaining ;)

Thanks as always for replying.

~TAG & Sally

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2018 5:16 am Title: Chapter 47 - Perfidia

Im glad justin is ok and ready to move to the future. There is nothing better than being with someone you love. Couldnt wait for the next update. Thanks

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2018 3:43 am Title: Chapter 47 - Perfidia

So happy Justin wasn't hurt worse. 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2018 3:13 am Title: Chapter 47 - Perfidia

Thank you for Justin agreeing to go to the future with Brian.  Now you have me so nervous that HOBBS is going to do something to Justin.  Your writing is so good that it can do that.  Great job.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2018 2:25 am Title: Chapter 47 - Perfidia

Not sure how you work it out.  Does he go on that last mission and somehow bail with Brian waiting to pick him up and take him home?

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2018 3:32 am Title: Chapter 45 - Boogie Woogie Bugle Boy

There's something oddly satisfying in the thought of seemingly-easy-target Justin being able to take out those gropers in the backroom.

I love his retort to the first group:

“I think you overstep yourself, Sir,”

LOL!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2018 3:24 am Title: Chapter 46 - Flying Home

Yes, you are evil authors... but part of me is holding out hope that it's NOT July 10th, so this is only meant to scare Justin into agreeing to a decade change. Amazing writing in that dogfight... you had me right there with Justin. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2018 5:46 pm Title: Chapter 46 - Flying Home

What an evil cliffhanger!!! I hope Chris will be held responsible for that.

Each time I read about what happened in Russia during WWII, I'm deeply troubled; but it's common to every war: humans are morphing into abject beasts.

Yet, the Russian people suffered for decades before and after that while West Germany was able to rise from the ashes.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2018 4:32 am Title: Chapter 46 - Flying Home

okay, I know you have something planned.  Just wish I knew what it was.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2018 2:42 am Title: Chapter 46 - Flying Home

ME  !!!!  HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO YOUR FAITHFUL READERS ??????  Easy, right.  Cliffhangers are fun and frustrating, but just keep thinking happy ending and I will forgive you.  But it was such a good chapter.

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