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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2018 9:57 am Title: The Party's Over!

That was soooo sad. It's not not often that I cry while reading but this did it. 



Author's Response:

I'm sorry for the tears, Susi.  Believe me, it wasn't easy killing off characters that I'd grown to care about, or make others that I love even more suffer because of it.  Comforting hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2018 6:53 am Title: A Fun Time Was Had By All

Oh noooooooo!!!!!



Author's Response:

Ah yes, the suspense!  What will the future hold?  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2018 6:44 am Title: A Bright and Shining Future

It's really nice to see everyone so happy and relaxed. 



Author's Response:

I think folks should have some fun before the storm hits.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 10:03 pm Title: Mel and Linds Plan an Anniversary Party

It's really nice to get a view into their current lives. I have a bad feeling though. 



Author's Response:

It was fun to imagine what life was like for everyone after the series ended, but of course nothing ever goes smoothly for these folks.  Thank you so much for reading my story, Susi.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 8:55 am Title: Here's to the Future!

I loved this Thank you

Author's Response:

All your comments have been fantastic, Fantgirl.  I truly appreciate you taking time to let me know how each chapter has affected you.  I hope you will give the sequel a try too.  There is much more to the story of Gus and his young lover, Jason... as well as time for Gus' sister to have a story of her own.  And of course, there is much more on what life is like for Brian and Justin as the parents of young adults.  Thank you again.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 8:23 am Title: The Best Revenge

So glad the boys are happy and safe

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you are enjoying the journey this young couple have been on.  Thank you so much for your great comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 7:51 am Title: A Nightmare Revisited

Thank you

Author's Response:

You're welcome.  I simply couldn't let history repeat itself, and Brian needed closure from the horrific incident that haunted him for so long.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 7:31 am Title: A Day of Fun and Fury

Not another bashing PLEASE

Author's Response:

I know how you feel.  That bashing was one of the most heartbreaking scenes I'd ever witnessed.  I cried for a long time over that.  Have faith, Fantgirl.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 7:18 am Title: A Bowl of Cherries Before the Pits

Is it all going to hell in a hand basket ?

Author's Response:

Unfortunately real life usually is full of potholes on the road to adulthood.  But when there is enough love, one can usually ride it out without too much damage.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 7:07 am Title: The 'Talk'- Part Two

Good talk wish more parents were like this I know too many sad stories

Author's Response:

I used the experience I had when talking with my Granddaughter, who came out as gay to us as a teen, to try and imagine how Brian and Justin would react.  I'm so glad you approved of 'the talk'.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 6:27 am Title: The Morning After

Poor Gus and Jason...they will figure it out maybe with their dads help

Author's Response:

Experience can be the best teacher, and boy are Brian and Justin experienced.  LOL!  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 6:06 am Title: The Turning Point

Good chapter....I hope neither boys get hurt...they are so young.

Author's Response:

Justin was the same age when he met Brian, and he just knew what he wanted.  Gus is sometimes more like Justin than Brian, so the couple do have a chance.  Only time will tell.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 4:26 am Title: Looking Forward to the Holidays

OK Jason is gay who knows about Gus, i think he is but my gaydar doesn't work on computers LOL

Author's Response:

There is definitely a close friendship developing for Gus and Jason.  Only time will tell where it leads.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 4:07 am Title: Getting to Know St. James

Gus is gay right ?

Author's Response:

Ah, is he or is he not?  That is the question.  Read on for the answer, dear Fantgirl.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 3:54 am Title: Mel and Linds Plan an Anniversary Party

So excited to see this posted here. I haven't read this one in years. Will be reading again soon! TAG



Author's Response:

As always, I'll be delighted if you check out this old story again, Tag.  And of course, I hope you'll check out the sequel too.  Thank you so much for all your support.  It means a great deal to me.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 3:01 am Title: Saying Goodbyes

I think the Dads will do well and the teens will be fine (as fine as teens can be ) On the road again

Author's Response:

They'll work as a team, but of course raising teens isn't going to be all smooth sailing.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 1:47 am Title: Setting Things Right

Brian is soooo lucky to have Justin to support him

Author's Response:

You are so right, Fantgirl.  I think that it is Justin's loyalty and support that made Brian fall so deeply in love with him long ago (not to mention his beautiful body and heart).  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 1:37 am Title: Changes Are Hard

Well you found a way for Michael not to take JR....Brian is a mess but Justin stepped up

Author's Response:

Justin will always be there for Brian, something that Brian appreciates more than ever as time goes by.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 1:01 am Title: The Party's Over!

A tragedy for the whole family...Gus would live with Brian and Justin, JR with her father Michael and Ben. Knowing Michael he won't man up

Author's Response:

This is indeed a tragedy, but as always everyone will pull together for the good of their family.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 12:26 am Title: A Fun Time Was Had By All

Crappy ending to a fun start....leave it to Brian to find a place to have his way with Justin in the middle of the party

Author's Response:

Brian can have a good time anywhere, but worry free days are not necessarily in his future.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 12:07 am Title: A Bright and Shining Future

Sweet reading with some worry though !

Author's Response:

Ah yes, the future is never always certain.  Thank you for commenting.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2018 10:19 pm Title: Here's to the Future!

What a wonderful story from a sad beginning to a terrific ending. You did such a great job of incorporating the series into your story. I hope you realize what an amazing writer you are. And, I am THRILLED that there is a sequel. Have to give my eyes a break and then I will start reading it. Thank you for sharing your talent.



Author's Response:

You have made my day, Mamab.  I am humbled by your generous comments.  Thank you so much.  As for the story, it was important to me that it feel more like a continuation of the QAF story rather than an alternate universe.  So the fact that you thought of it in that way is the best compliment I could get.  I hope you will enjoy where I take these families in the next story.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2018 9:54 pm Title: Mel and Linds Plan an Anniversary Party

Off to a good start teenagers yuck

Author's Response:

Thank you Fantgirl.  The teens will be a handful, naturally.  LOL!  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2018 12:36 am Title: The Party's Over!

It will be hard to believe that both Mel and Linds are gone.  Now what is to happen with Gus and JR.  Deb and Michael are in no condition to take on a young teen.  Will they stay in Canada are go back to the Pitts.



Author's Response:

Ah yes, what will the fate be of these very sad young ones?  But the answer comes quickly.  Thanks for giving me so much feedback, YumYum.  I appreciate it so much.  Warm hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2018 12:28 am Title: A Fun Time Was Had By All

Such sadness.  This chapter was so suspenseful with everyone waiting for the girls to drive up only they never do.



Author's Response:

This wasn't easy for me to write, because I've never written any story before or since that kills off characters unless they've lived a full life.  But in this case I had to do it.  The whole idea is how would Brian and Justin cope with being parents, especially to two very different teens.  Thank you again for commenting.  Huge hugs, Grammy

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