[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2018 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
Wow. That was some explenation and I beleive it. Something tells me the girls will not be hearing from Lizette. But Brian and Justin might.
Date: Dec 08, 2018 8:02 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
Hey Tag. I had way too much laughing going on in this chapter. Emmett's flair for the dramatic, and, well, Brian just totally cracked me up. First, the I'm not getting married, then the LSD comment. Then the laughter enthused, and I had to laugh at the stupidity of everyone laughing and NOT know what they were laughing about. And I really laughed at Quinne's exurberance about 'Itchy Alex'. I wonder if the cream stinks... Hmm...
I've been thinking about Justin's reaction, and I don't think he's gonna be too forthcoming. Not only is he so very mad at Quinne right now, what is his reaction going to be when He learns that it wasn't HIS daughter who was the fouled-mouthed hellion doing all those things to Alex? I think he's going to go through the roof when he realizes it was actually BRIAN'S daughter. Will he believe the girls devised the plan? Now that the gig is up, and they know in Pittsburgh, is Quinne going to have to come clean and have Justin take her home? And, I can just picture Alex's sneer. He will probably try and talk Justin into sending Qianna away to boarding school, or something.
I realized the emails the girls sent out a long time ago, they still haven't heard from the one marked, MollT, have they? I suppose if she makes herself known, there will be a new wave of problems, after all this excitement.
About you focusing on The Britin Trap, I vote for you writing where your muse takes you. If it's writing about our plotting girls, go for it. If it's writing about quirky Justin, then that's what you spend your itchy fingers on. I enjoy both stories, so any update is a positive. Thanks for all the writing lately,
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Date: Dec 07, 2018 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
So, Brian and Justin weren't keeping the twins apart since they didn't know there was a twin! Interesting. I'm developing a theory about what happened and I soooo want to share to I see if I'm right, but don't want to ruin it if I'm right! Damn, I hate that. But the key is the surrogate... and Lindsay. Hmmm.............
I so love this kind of intrigue. And I'm going to love the holy hell that rains down on everyone when the truth of what happened comes out. Bwwaahaaaaaaaaa.........
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2018 9:49 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
Oh great Brian laughs so everything is fine !! He did not know that there were twins, so what happened? I'm looking forward to seeing the whole family finally reunited. Thank you for the update.
Date: Dec 07, 2018 3:26 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
Great update. So glad Brian is laughing and I hope it will be resolved soon. Love them together and want them where they each belong.
Date: Dec 07, 2018 3:12 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
Oh this was great!! Can’t wait to see what Brian does!
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2018 3:05 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
Okay, from what I gather Brian didn't know there were twins. If I didn't know better I would think Mikey was involved in some way. He and Hairy Alex would get along fine.
Date: Dec 07, 2018 2:48 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
I think Brian's reaction was perfect! He was too impressed with the girls' inventiveness to be angry!
Can't wait to see the big reveal when Justin finds out. But apparently, the boys didn't know about the twins. That's probably why the girls were able to get away with the switch for as long as they did.
Date: Dec 07, 2018 12:41 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
This was wonderful. Somehow, I felt that Brian would take it well. Now we wait AGAIN (LOL) to see how Justin deals with it. I can see a happy ending coming at some point. As for Stylite, I happily wait for chapters on either story so no problem. I couldn't write one at a time so you are doing great.
Date: Dec 06, 2018 6:01 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
Yeah, this cliffhanger is a great meanie!!! But so happy that you're back with this story.
Date: Dec 06, 2018 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
After Gus, Emmett: the switch was bound to be discovered. Excellent cliffhanger!
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2018 10:05 am Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
I'm really anxious to know how Em will react after this news and how it will help Q. Great chapter and I like the nails too
Date: Dec 06, 2018 9:53 am Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
Oh Lordy All To Hell! I gather Em got a hold of someone in California, and they must have faxed him a reply, along with a wedding invitation. I tend to think our darling Emmett is a little more than pissed. Maybe he won't be quite so eager to help the girls out.
Saying that, I wonder how much Qianna is going to LOVE Em after this?
Yay, I'm all caught up. Just have seven more WIP chapters to read. This was fun though. I got a lot, all at once.
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Date: Dec 06, 2018 9:02 am Title: Chapter 18 - You Know Your Father
I have to agree with Gus and Qianna. I think Lindsay knows more that what she said. First, she said that she thought it was a promise of a new job in California. A couple minutes later, she said, and the lure of a Hollywood job was stronger than a baby and a life of domestication in The Pitts. Am I reading too much into this? Because she went from thinking Justin might have gone to California, to saying he was in California with a job in animation. How does she know that's where he is, and that's the type of job he has? What makes her think he's not in New York, painting under a pseudonym? Besides, WE know Justin was in on the baby planning, so it wasn't an attempt for Brian to try and get Justin back. Also, I hardly doubt it was nine months after Justin left, that Brian brought Quinne home. Didn't anyone think of that? It seems the twelve-year-olds, are better sleuths than the rest of the family.
Boy-oh-boy! Justin really has his head in the clouds. NO WAY do you take the side of your fiance, partner, or husband, against your own child. He's not even attempting to listen to Quinne. And it's a little harsh accusing her of poisoning the brownies. Christ! She just added a little extra chocolate. After all, it was only a laxative, not, poison. She didn't powder sugar them with boric acid and a powdered sugar mix. And he's failing to see the humor in it, as Quinne put the note there, telling him to not eat them. And just HOW could the doctor tell he'd ingested laxatives? Just maybe, Alex took them himself, trying to get Quinne in trouble.
Looking forward to Qianna's night with Aunty Em. Will he be anymore forthcoming?
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Date: Dec 06, 2018 7:45 am Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends
Well, one down, two to go. You must have really had busy fingers this week. Me? I beta'd twenty chapters. :(
Loved the enclosed photos. I don't think I've ever seen the one from Baxter's party. Lord, I really never thought Randy looked THAT young! And, I REALLY don't remember his pants being that low! It was a WOW moment.
I was impressed with the newspaper article you wrote, but I certainly caught the use of the word, 'alleged'. That whole episode still rangles me. I think it was so bogusly written.And I'm further surprised and impressed by Brians 'Sunshine' box of memories. Although the fact he STILL has the scarf... But, speaking of the scarf, where was it, during the picture?
And OMG! I knew if one of the girls could get the best of Alex, it would have to be Quinne, as I just don't think Qianna is as devious as Quinne is. But growing up with Brian Kinney, would do that to her. And yes, you must have had a blast with your research. I stupidly looked up the itching powder. My first thought was that it would be various ingredients. And I thought, WHY the hell would anyone want to make itching powder, and what would they use it for? I guess those thoughts are still there, as even though it's dried flowers, what would anybody need with information like that? Unfortunately, I couldn't leave well enough alone, and had to read the questions below the article, and someone asked, "How can I make someone itch from their shampoo?" Pray tell, what kind of sick people do we have in this world? LOL... Although, that is one way Quinne could use it!
Thoroughly enjoyed all the old memories, and had a hoot with Quinne. And yes, I do believe wholeheartedly, that Brian and Justin still love each other.
Almost to the bottom of the chapter, you had, "Quine (forgot an 'n') started to laugh...
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Date: Dec 06, 2018 2:55 am Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
I waited very impatiently for you to write your Nanowrimi and am so glad that you are back to this story. I hope Em is willing to help the girls and I can't wait to see what you have going next.
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2018 1:40 am Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
Let's hope that Emmett can supply answers now that he knows who the groom is. I'm dying to find out why they split!
Date: Dec 06, 2018 12:45 am Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
Before it's over all the gang will be helping the Qs! Love this... and oh, yeah... You Are Evil! 🤨
Date: Dec 06, 2018 12:08 am Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
OK, Brian Kinney. Stop trying to throw us off of the famous Kinney cliff. Wonderful chapter. Getting closer to some answers and Em is just the person to move things along. Thank you for your wonderful thoughts and sharing them with us. Even if you are having too much fun.
Date: Dec 05, 2018 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
Love those toenails!! Em's the best!
Everything is coming together & coming out! Lol So I assume QiQi is going to come clean now right?
Here's hoping Lizzie responds.
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2018 10:13 am Title: Chapter 18 - You Know Your Father
Yes I hate Alex so much and Justin is so blind. Did Gus and Quianna let Brian discover something? He's pretty clever. I wonder what has separated them and who can help them discover and bring them together.
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2018 1:31 am Title: Chapter 18 - You Know Your Father
I never took Justin for being stupid, but it seems he is. Now what was done by who that broke them up? I'm dying here.
Date: Dec 04, 2018 9:45 pm Title: Chapter 18 - You Know Your Father
I Usually hate Mikey, but Alex is much worse. Can't imagine Justin not being smart enough to see what he really is. And, I don't think the "love is blind" thing is it. Your cliffhangers are amazing and keeping us on the edge of our seats. Great job. Fantastic writing.
Date: Dec 04, 2018 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 18 - You Know Your Father
I hate Alex a lot and Justin is still blind.
Gus and Qianna had a near miss that had Brian suspecting something. They really should be more careful.
Date: Dec 04, 2018 2:43 am Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends
What a happy little surprise - to see the update, I mean. I'm sure Alex wasn't very thrilled with his surprises! But I am really concerned that Justin is so blind to just how creepy, creepy Alex is. What could he be thinking???
And the mystery behind the girls' separation has become even deeper. I'm guessing the duel wedding dates is a clue, but not one my brain can figure out
Looking forward to reading whichever story you decide to update next!