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Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2019 8:38 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Passionately Happy Again

I really enjoyed this story I haven’t seen the movie so I was assuming how it would end but I really love a happy ending with our boys 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2019 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Passionately Happy Again

Wow, yes I'd say Brian romanced the fuck out of him. Good for him! Loved the Gus montage lol Yay Molly's back! Yeah, the boys are going to be 'busy' for quite a while. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2019 2:10 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Passionately Happy Again

I was not so far from your idea with my proposal. Brian was not playing fair at all!!! For our pleasure and Justin's in the end.

What about the yeti? What did you plan for him? Something nasty, I hope. Send Daphne, she will have some fun with him and send Mel with her, she will "crucify" him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2019 3:39 am Title: Chapter 29 - Passionately Happy Again

What an amazing wedding.  And surprise Molly was the officiate.  I'm dying to know what's next.



Author's Response:

I kept trying to figure out how to incorporate Molly, and then it just came to me! Glad you liked it. TAG

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2019 3:34 am Title: Chapter 29 - Passionately Happy Again

So happy to see an update, but I didn't think we'd get to the wedding so soon! It was the perfect ceremony for them! I still love any and all interactions between Justin and Daphne. What they had was just so special.



Author's Response:

 When Brian decides what it is he wants, he’s not about to waste anytime getting it. Besides, he was running out of time here. Hence, the romancing the fuck out of Justin. Lol. TAG

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2019 3:00 am Title: Chapter 29 - Passionately Happy Again

I really needed this tonight.  I'm so tired and exhausted but reading this makes me feel so awesome.  Brian done good!!!! and Justin and Brian sitting in the tree ( oh wait- Having sex in the back room-  not sure how that can rhyme but of the visions are great.)



Author's Response:

The mere thought of Dad sex is so icky,

it totally boggles the mind,

but if I see another hickey,

i think I might go blind.

(Qianna made you a rhyme! Lol!)

TAG

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2019 1:35 am Title: Chapter 29 - Passionately Happy Again

WOW, WOW, WOW  You continue to outdo yourself with the writing.  Going to need a new tissue box soon.  Don't even mind waiting for something this wonderful.  Maybe it should snow more out your way for it seems your creative genius loved it.  The party/wedding was a perfect way to get them together.  Thank you for your amazing thoughts.  And, Tame written properly makes a really, really good romantic story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2019 5:32 am Title: Chapter 28 -Whatever It Takes

Can't wait to find out what the plan is for the party!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2019 12:36 am Title: Chapter 28 -Whatever It Takes

With these professional schemers, Justin doesn't stand a chance, LOL! Can't wait to see what big romance event they've got cooked up!

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2019 11:45 am Title: Chapter 28 -Whatever It Takes

Wow poor Gus almost blew it 🤣 bring on the fun and games

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2019 9:45 am Title: Chapter 28 -Whatever It Takes

I look forward to knowing what you have imagined for "Team Brian" !! i love the chapter.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2019 8:06 am Title: Chapter 28 -Whatever It Takes

He could always throw a surprise wedding. 



Author's Response:

Stop reading ahead in my brain! Lololol! TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2019 4:37 am Title: Chapter 28 -Whatever It Takes

Brian will make a public declaration in Babylon; after all, it was the place of their first public reunification. Maybe play the song from the prom and be ridiculously romantic so Justin can remember this one...

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2019 4:20 am Title: Chapter 28 -Whatever It Takes

TAG:

  Awesome chapter-  I think I know what Brian is going to do and I hope Justin listens to his heart.  I love this rewriting of the story.  Can't wait for the big finale.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2019 1:24 am Title: Chapter 28 -Whatever It Takes

Wow, great chapter.  Cure cat.  Love the shirt.  It is gorgeous and just perfect for Justin.  Haven't figured out what Brian is planning, but not trying hard.  I want to be surprised by what you have up your sleeve.  I know it will be fantastic.  Keep looking at the snow and keep writing.  Maybe it is inspiring !!!!  LOL

Reviewer: Marny Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2019 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 28 -Whatever It Takes

Aggrrr  I need more, please.

* hugs  *



Author's Response:

LOL! So sorry. I'll get right on that. I've got most of the next chapter worked out in my head . . . Just have to get it on paper. TAG

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2019 2:51 am Title: Chapter 27 - Would Flowers Be Too Much?

Great update-  I love how Jennifer took the girls for an overnight to allow Brian time to woo Justin  can't wait for the next chapter.  

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2019 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Would Flowers Be Too Much?

So happy to see Grandma Jenn getting on board with "Team Kinney," LOL!

I also find it adorable how uncomfortable Justin seems with the prospect of his mother getting involved as if he knows that any time spent alone with Brian will only wear down his defenses. Brian's texts to the girls are hysterical!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2019 4:35 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Would Flowers Be Too Much?

With Jennifer on Brian's side, Justin is toasted! He won't be able to work through all the machinations that will come his way.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2019 4:11 pm Title: Chapter 26 - The Assembled Crew

Maybe watching Barney would make Justin forget about the family ganging against him.

So happy that Brian stepped in and made a valid point, and when it wasn't enough, stormed out with his family.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2019 9:14 am Title: Chapter 27 - Would Flowers Be Too Much?

i love jennifer!! She and the kids are going to make a big team !!

Reviewer: jayjaykmm Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2019 4:27 am Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

I would be the first one who would want a brian/justin happily ever after. But now i'm kind of feeling sorry for justin. Sure they belong together but if feels like he should realise it on his own. Not will all these people scheming against him. I mean, he is already dealing with a psychological issue. Adding more to it just seems cruel. 

Now,i hope there is something to be done about the yeti. If both of their name is on the doc then half of that house is justin. I just want him hurt really bad.

Can't say i'm surprised about lindsay and michael's reaction to justin coming back. Where was mel and ben during this? And blake is just a sweetheart. 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2019 4:20 am Title: Chapter 27 - Would Flowers Be Too Much?

Very happy to see this. I've been in a slump lately, and haven't read any updates in five days. So, this managed to catch my attention.  I think the thing that peaked my curiosity, was the title of the chapter. Because that was my first thought - Justin's allergies, and I wanted to see how far Brian fell, when Justin had a sneezing, watery eyes reaction. I thought - that would go and undo any leeway he may have made. It will be interesing where you go with this. Is he making spaghetti? Let's hope he doesn't burn the garlic bread. Very touchy stuff to make.

And oh yes, Grandmother Taylor can be underhanded with the best of them. I'm sure she's got things up her sleeve that the girls could never even dream of. Thanks for posting, Tag.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2019 4:00 am Title: Chapter 27 - Would Flowers Be Too Much?

Someone needs to call Emmett.  I'm sure he could whip something up and disappear into the background.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2019 12:24 am Title: Chapter 27 - Would Flowers Be Too Much?

Wonderful chapter.  Love Jenn and the girls working for Brian.  I hope Justin knows he is outnumbered.  Even Gus is joining in.  Love, love, love this story.  Could just see the expressions on Brian's face about the dinner and flowers, but he sure is trying.

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