[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2018 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 23 - How It Could Still Be
I'm hoping for the best. But I can see a lot of stories about good times and one about the real reason Justin left. I want to see justice done with Justin's house, the yeti should not be allowed to get away with what he's done and I don't think the girls would mind telling all his online friends about it.
Date: Dec 16, 2018 9:25 pm Title: Chapter 23 - How It Could Still Be
Fantastic chapter. I know you have some good ideas in mind and can't wait to see where you take them.
Date: Dec 16, 2018 9:24 pm Title: Chapter 23 - How It Could Still Be
Yeah, so happy to see a new chapter!
Justin is pretty upset and can't be "Sunshined" easily. At least, Brian explained what happened and said he was sorry; that's a big step. Justin took care of him and that's another step.
If they actually all go back to Pittsburgh, they will have plenty of time together as Justin will be off and Brian can work from home.
I hope Justin will fight the yeti as soon as possible.
Date: Dec 11, 2018 5:48 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Great imagery right off the bat... The first tinges of gold were just peeking over the eastern horizon when the three weary travellers drove their rental car up to Justin’s front door the next morning. And boy was Brian one impatient weary traveller.
The first initial contact between Gus and Justin had the tears leaking out of the corner of my eyes, but they were good tears.
Brian was hilarious. First that reference to the brownies, (which might have been the reason Justin came out of his stupor), then the arrival of the 'bear', and the hair-in-the-teeth, and the if-the-pelt fits, comments, had me cracking up. (I'm getting better trying to hide my chuckling, while others are watching TV.)
Okay, so I think Justin was a little bit out-of-line with the diatribe about Qianna going off to Pittsburgh with Brian, and his subsequent threat of punishment. Criminy, the girls had pictures and newspaper articles of Brian and Justin as a couple, including their non-legal marriage. I don't think she was putting herself in harms way. Anyway, when Hairy stuck his nose into the mix, and spouted shit to Quinne, I could picture Brian grabbing him around the neck, and telling him to shut the fuck up. But, it caught Justin's attention, instead. But the situation that ensued, left me breathless from laughter. You Go Brian!!!! Tell that sack of shit to lay off your daughter! I have to wonder if Brian will get a black eye out of the mix.
But then I got to the ending, and couldn't sing, 'So long, Farewell", because Justin so stupidly put Alex on the title for his home. WOW! I'm not versed on how the law works, but there must be something that can be done, especially if it's only been a week, and Alex has not contributed to the household. And just HOW can he kick Justin and Qianna out of their own home, and any company they might have in their home? I think if anyone should have the cops called on them, it should be on Hairy.
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. It was like the crest to everything that was leading up to. I can only imagine what else your mind will come up with, to torture us with. One thing I think we can all agree on, is that there will be no wedding, so the girls did accomplish what they set out to, by switching places.
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Date: Dec 11, 2018 3:52 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
Here's me lagging behind, again.
Way to go, Stud. Go get your man. So, we learned that Lizette was a manipulative bitch. Sold both babies separately, after already being paid the surrogate fee. Hmm... But Brian telling Justin to leave, I don't know if I can condone that. I know in the heat of an argument, mean things can be said, but with Justin already feeling quilty, I'm sure that was the cincher. And Justin having a boyfriend, or not, after Brian found out where he was, he should have been on the next flight out, with Quinne in hand. What better way, than with a baby, to win his Sunshune back?
Big question... Was Lizette coaxed by Michael or Lindsay to pull this stunt? You know, if I can't have you, then nobody will have you?
It will be interesting to see how this plays out, but after everything we learned in this chapter, I don't think Justin will be very welcoming to Brian.
Hugs ~ Cathy
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2018 10:09 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
The reunion of Gus and Justin was touching maybe all the children will help Brian and Justin to get together, in any case they will do everything. The Yeti can leave they are 5 against him no? They can all go back to the Pitts! Great chapter!
Date: Dec 10, 2018 9:20 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Wow lots of fun and good job yeti showing your real colours
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2018 3:23 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
How could Justin be so stupid. At least it's a good reason to move back to Pittsburgh.
Author's Response:
*Ding, ding, ding* 😉 TAG
Date: Dec 10, 2018 2:34 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Finally got rid of the Yeti. I can't believe Justin is being such adick to his daughter. She wasn't with strangers she was with her sister and other dad. Get s grip.
Date: Dec 10, 2018 12:26 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Got teary-eyed at the Gus/Justin reunion...
Doesn't look like hairy Alex is going away easily!
Author's Response:
I’m thinking Gus will play a big role in convincing Justin to give Brian a second chance in this story....*wink, wink* TAG
Date: Dec 09, 2018 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Awesome way for Justin to defend the girls. Now we just have to see how Brian and Justin get back together. Great updates
Date: Dec 09, 2018 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Omg the Gus/Justin reunion! I'm not crying, you're crying
Too bad we can't hop into the story & beat the shit out of the Yeti ourselves huh? What a dick! He can't have them arrested! It's 5 people's words against his lone one. He's so stupid, please tell us they can get rid of him now??
Date: Dec 09, 2018 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
💃💃💃::Dancing the Never-Yeti dance in my seat here!::💃💃💃
And what the HELL was Justin thinking adding that ðŸ´ðŸ’© to the title of his house!
Now that part of the mystery is solved, I wanna know where Lindsay fits into this little bag of tricks. She just seemed to know a little too much about Justin. Was she, perhaps, whispering in someone's ear, being the oh so caring art teacher and mother-of-Brian's-ONLY-child that she is?
Author's Response:
Can I just say how THRILLED I am that I’ve tempted you back into reading? Lol! I’m going to have to burst your bubble on Lindsey, though. She didn’t play a big part in Justin leaving. When we get there, however, you might recognize the impetus for how I’m writing him... Happy reading! TAG
Date: Dec 09, 2018 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
I also loved the moment when Gus and Justin were holding each other: powerful and emotional. Their bond is restored, finally.
Date: Dec 09, 2018 9:05 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Sciatica be damned, I'm bouncing up and down in my seat and I haven't even read the chapter yet!
Author's Response:
Careful! Don’t Hirt yourself! Lol! TAG
Date: Dec 09, 2018 8:41 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Yeah! So happy to see a new chapter and what chapter! Epic, hilarious, chaotic, disturbing... It seems that Alex has the upper hand and I hope you have something really nasty to get him down. At least Justin has opened his eyes and knows some parts of Alex' personality.
I loved how Brian took his place near Justin when he arrived. Only Justin is not that happy about the girls' stunt and I hope he will understand their goal.
Date: Dec 09, 2018 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
OMG, This was fantastic. LOVED, LOVED, LOVED it. Just PERFECT. I know that Brian can and will win back his Sunshine. Justin can give the damned house to The Yeti and be with Brian and their children. As for Brian's magic, just don't think it is possible to resist him. Your writing is beyond belief. Thank you for sharing the wonderful ideas that you come up with.
Date: Dec 09, 2018 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
I think this is the perfect Brian for the situation. He's obviously changed since becoming a father. His little "Sunshine" daydream in the airport shows us he's still there! Something tells me he has got evil plans for Alex!
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2018 9:47 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
Yes I'm ready for the Justin part. Brian is so romantic and always in love. Is lysette manipulating them for more money or will there be something else? Thank you for the update, I'm so exciting for the next.
Date: Dec 09, 2018 8:59 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
Ok, I just came here for a little break from finals revision. I've spent each break today binging on this story! Your Brian is perfect! Makes sense that's he's evolved over the years. And he's missed Justin. Now your Justin is also perfect. Perfectly annoying! I am enjoying this story so much! Thank you for takin the time to write and update! Looking forward toYeti meeting The Stud!!
Author's Response:
I’m afraid the meeting of The Yeti and The Stud is probably not going to go well, but it should at least provide a laugh or two! Thanks for spending your study breaks reading my story. Good luck on your finals! TAG
Date: Dec 09, 2018 6:38 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
Great explanation: the mother was after money that's for sure, but why did she lie by omission about the twins? To get more money? I doubt that; there must be more to it. She should have wanted to keep Brian and Justin separated, but again why? Was somebody else pushing her acting like this?
Date: Dec 09, 2018 6:19 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
Excellent! From Emmett going all Dom demanding the truth, to Brian tricking his daughter during the call and Brian laughing during Qianna's explanation: delightful! Add a few "Honeycutt" poking, the LSD joke from Brian to Emmett, you made my day!
Date: Dec 09, 2018 5:04 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
Dam I have to wait for another chapter and these last two were awesome. Me thinks the boys maybe not quite divorced and hopefully the yeti will be toast as they say 🤣🤣
Date: Dec 09, 2018 12:43 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
Yay! You go you three! The three Musketeers to the rescue! This is going to be awesome!
Now was Lizette being manipulative for her own gain or manipulated by someone? Hmmmm
Date: Dec 09, 2018 12:32 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
It was written perfectly. Brian still shined thru in his normal way, but with a bit of happiness and excitement thrown. Just wonderful as usual. And, as for Justin, the twat better be HAPPY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!