Date: Nov 13, 2018 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 6 - I’ll See You Tomorrow.
Daphne and Justin are too funny! Their discussion about the name of the mystery: epic.
MM is more and more easy to be with. Will he say something about Ian?
Author's Response:
We adore Justin and Daphne and are so glad everyone else seems to as well. They are just so easy to write. Their argument about the mystery topic just seemed SO them, you know?
MM is definitely warming up to Justin, you'll find out soon enough if Ian gets a mention or not :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing as always.
~TAG & Sally
Date: Nov 13, 2018 3:28 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Obsession.
I am enjoying this story!
Date: Nov 13, 2018 9:28 am Title: Chapter 6 - I’ll See You Tomorrow.
Yes, your chapter definitely provided sweetness. Our Mystery Man is certainly looking forward to his burglars' visits. I loved how he found a way for Justin to come back, even though I have no doubt Justin would have thought of a reason to show up again. It was sweet of Harry to arrive downstairs to greet him. How long before Harry actually greets him at the door? And I really doubt those little coffee creamers will make the resident guard 'fat'.
So Harry does own the building. That answers one of my questions. But he needs to realize the difference between Burglar vs Trespasser. But now that Justin's been invited back, he won't even be a trespasser anymore, right?
I was almost hoping Harry would show up outside and chase Ehan away, but I know that's impossible at this point. I'm sure Harry will have questions for Justin about Ethan though. Maybe Harry can offer some advice.
I do have a couple questions. Something I need to point out. You said, “Don’t be. You didn’t even know him,” Brian replied. Okay, How do we know this is Brian speaking?
Then you said, Come on. I’ll make sure you to the bus safely. Shouldn't the word 'get' be in there?
Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for the double posting. I'm proud of you ladies. In a mere week you've put out over 25K words. Just keep writing, and I'll be sure to keep reading!
XOXO ~ Cathy
Author's Response:
Hi Cathy,
Firstly, thanks for being our eyes for us, sometimes we end up reading, editing and posting so late, we miss things - like the little B slip up - but that is fixed now, phew :) Thanks for all your support, it's reviews like yours that keep us going.
~ TAG & Sally
Date: Nov 13, 2018 4:05 am Title: Chapter 6 - I’ll See You Tomorrow.
It's funny, but as I was reading this chapter, I said to myself, Tag & Sally are not writing this story. Egbert and Brat are sending the thoughts to you. And, you are putting their thoughts on paper perfectly. There is just something so unique about this story. Whatever it is, keep it going as it is wonderful.
Date: Nov 13, 2018 4:00 am Title: Chapter 5 - Obsession.
Apparently this Daphne also scored extremely high in verbal while taking her SAT test. I could almost see Justin puff up his chest a little regarding his satisfaction with himself.
Is it weird I thought how Daphne always had food in her mouth, right before Justin voiced that?
I wonder if Bill is trying to protect (Harry) with all that hissing he's doing at Justin. Maybe Justin should invest in some catnip. That should make the cat stop his hissing at him.
(Harry) seems to be keeping a pretty close watch of Justin's comings and goings. I would hope a burglar wasn't too predictable ;)
You ladies were wondering how well we liked Justin's babbling? I do believe I answered that question last chapter. I, for one, LOVE it! Although, maybe we should stick with Daphne's explanation fot today: “Have I told you lately how strange you are?”
One small error: Which, I guess, answered the question of whether or not he wa(y)s gay.
Loving the story. Looking forward to the nxt chapter.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Nov 13, 2018 3:33 am Title: Chapter 6 - I’ll See You Tomorrow.
Something tells me Egert might be a little jealous if he spotted that Ethan encounter from the window!
Date: Nov 13, 2018 2:59 am Title: Chapter 5 - Obsession.
I think the babbling Brat is the perfect foil to the silent and stoic Egbert,
Date: Nov 13, 2018 2:40 am Title: Chapter 5 - Obsession.
I think it is wonderful, Justin babbling is perfect. The entire concept of this story is amazing. It is showing a totally different Brian and Justin and I love it. Beyond fantastic writing. You two are a perfect pair!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 13, 2018 2:05 am Title: Chapter 6 - I’ll See You Tomorrow.
Things were going smoothingly until Ethan showed up. Your line is lovely but I agree with Daphne.
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2018 7:03 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Obsession.
Actually I think Justin's babbling sounds like...Tagsit. Things are getting better.
Author's Response:
Are you saying *I* babble? I'm shocked you would say such things. Hehehe... TAG
Date: Nov 12, 2018 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Obsession.
Those babblements are epic and made Mysterious Man laugh; so , go for it!
Why am I not surprised that MM is gay?
Please let me know if I'm right regarding the references to "Particles of truth":
-food in §3 “Chicken or fish?” while in the film it was "Turkey or tuna sandwich?"
-the germs' phobia
-the cleaning ritual / OCD
-loner with awful parents
Author's Response:
I'm ashamed to admit that I didn't actually see that movie . . . *I'm a bad fan*. Not sure if Sally did or not. Maybe I should go watch in now, though . . . TAG
Date: Nov 12, 2018 5:34 am Title: Chapter 5 - Obsession.
I love this! It's amazing how the characters seem so different from the series and yet not. I love a babbling brat! LOL!
Can't wait to read more, Ladies!
*Hugs*
Deb
Date: Nov 12, 2018 1:29 am Title: Chapter 4 - Taylor The Latte Boy
I love your bratty Justin! He really gets time to just be young in this. Very curious about what brought Brian to this state though.
Date: Nov 12, 2018 1:05 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Way You Make Me Feel
Thank you for the "spit' warning, LOL!
I really like this very young and very bratty Justin. Makes a great contrast with the brooding and very OCD Brian.
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2018 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Taylor The Latte Boy
Vedy interesting. Makes one want to know more all the sooner.
Date: Nov 11, 2018 7:34 am Title: Chapter 4 - Taylor The Latte Boy
Oh Christ! As soon as I read about the wobbling dick, I burst out laughing, which wasn't appreciated by my daughter and granddaughter as they were watching a movie. An intense movie. So I shut down my computer and thought I'd wait until they went to bed. When I started reading it again, I again burst out laughing, but knew enough to keep it quieter. Which ever one of you is Justin's voice these last couple of chapters, I really have to hand it to you. So after a few deep breaths, I was able to contunue to read. And then we went to Daphne's logic. (Is this suppose to be a comedy?)
Does Brian by any chance OWN that building? If not, how is it that Justin is breaking in? And the burglar shit is so funny, too. Appears our Mr Peebles had a forbidden love back in the later 1800's.
I think our little Sunshine might have taken a shine to our Mystery Man. Can't wait to learn more about him. Like, how does he get money for food, and how does he Get his food?
Justin, Better ask the Mysery Man his name first the next time.
A slight error:
“Well, if it isn’t the stray bur(g)lar
Loving this story! Keep writing ladies.
Cathy
Author's Response:
Hi Cathy,
Firstly, thank you as always for reviewing, we really appreciate it and we love that you're enjoying this story so much. Is it supposed to be a comedy? Yes and no, it's definitely meant to make you smile with lines like those - so we're glad it made you laugh. But there will be lots of emotions and feelings in this story, so we felt a little humor is needed :)
We both write Justin - what is so great about the two of us writing together is we very much see the same things in the story and our characters, so our writing compliments each other nicely.
Thanks again for reading. We hope you get your answers to your questions soon hehe.
P.S Thanks for the heads up about the error, it's al fixed now!
~ TAG & Sally
Date: Nov 11, 2018 7:02 am Title: Chapter 4 - Taylor The Latte Boy
Daphne and Justin: what a pair of friends! I love Justin's distracting ways: I could see the look of Daphne.
Justin found a big clue and didn't break his neck: quite an improvement from his first visit.
Author's Response:
We know right, how proud are you of Justin for not falling down the stairs this time? LOL.
We're glad you are enjoying the Daphne and Justin friendship, she'll be playing a big part in this story so it's important to us that people like her. Justin getting his dick out to distract Daphne was so sneaky, but it seemed just so THEM that we had to do it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
~ TAG & Sally
Date: Nov 11, 2018 2:00 am Title: Chapter 4 - Taylor The Latte Boy
I love Justin bratty or not. And, I am totally enjoying every minute of this terrific story.
We also love bratty Justin, he's cute and very in character for the first couple of seasons of the show. We're so happy you're enjoying reading this as much as we are enjoying writing it. Thanks for reviewing. ~ TAG & Sally
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: Nov 09, 2018 1:25 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Way You Make Me Feel
Love the cats name. I can picture Brian looking as he does now and very OCD. Now how do you get Justin back inside to get to know him better, after all he knows the cats name.
Date: Nov 09, 2018 4:38 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Way You Make Me Feel
Nice reference to "Particules of truth" and Andron look, that I found horrible (the look as I didn't see the film).
What a lonely person; so sad.
Date: Nov 09, 2018 3:18 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Way You Make Me Feel
He was just as hairy as I had drawn him with a bushy beard that covered most all of his face and straggled down his neck. The beard was matched by a headful of shaggy, poorly-trimmed, dark brown hair that curled around his face and partially obscured his eyes. Okay, Do either of you photoshop? I'd love to see Brian Kinney look like that!
Oh, Justin... You better come back now, you hear? I LOVED his inner musings this chapter. You wrote it perfectly. Was it confusion from hitting his head? I don't think so. It was just his illustrious host. It sure saddened me with, “FUCK! Even the burglar couldn’t wait to leave. Everyone always leaves. Shit, Bill . . .” Everyone always leave? Has he had guests before? I take he's a very lonely man. And as your video so kindly pointed out, I don't think WilliamShakespaw is so unwelcome as he likes us to think.
BTW... Awesome video. That was during the days when Michael Jackson looked so divine. And, he always made dancing seem so effortlessly. I was a young 31 when that video was made.
Loved the chapter, and looking forward to the next.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Nov 09, 2018 2:22 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Way You Make Me Feel
OMG, I am so in love with this story. Your description of the crazy man was perfect. The two of you together are magic !!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 09, 2018 1:05 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Way You Make Me Feel
Of course it was Brian...can't wait to find out why he and Bill are living there. Thanks for the update
Author's Response:
Oh, there's so much fun backstory to come. But never fear, Sunshine is here for him! And Bill The Cat, of course. LOL. TAG
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2018 2:54 am Title: Chapter 2 - Fade To Black
Loving this Ghost story...I think
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2018 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Fade To Black
How exciting. Love that Justin now has a reason to break his non-date with Ethan. Who is the mystery man.