[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 2:57 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ha, Britin is still there and Brian is spending time in front of the painting and the fire in a summer night: there is hope!
Author's Response: You could be right.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 2:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
It's nice to see them getting close and laugh together, but I have the feeling it won't last. Gus is seeing that his father isn't the "monster" he must have heard Mel calling him.
Author's Response: Gus will have to learn who Brian really is.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 2:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
They seem to find some sort of balance and get along quite well. Let's hope that it will last.
Author's Response: Yes, let's hope.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 2:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
Whoa!!! Heavy on stress and emotion!
There are some parts that let me think that Gus is not yet on the dark side, but he is pretty close.
What a nightmare!
Thanks to Mel, they were able to put pressure on Gus with a little blackmail.
Author's Response: Gus is still redeemable.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 1:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
Melanie really has no shame saying to Brian that he can't put the blame on her; who else is behind all this mess if not Mel? A kid doesn't become secretive without a cause.
Author's Response: Good point.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 1:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
I hate Lindsay and Melanie for doing this to Gus and Brian: separate them hoping Gus will stop asking to quit school and go back to Pittburgh. They make a mess and demand help once it's almost too late. What kind of permanent damage is already done? They are totally irresponsible.
Author's Response: They are not the best parents in this story.
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2019 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Intriguing and promising beginning! Did Brian found a new "Justin" or a new lawyer who might help for other matters than sex?
Author's Response: Brian has let Justin go, at least for the present.
Date: Apr 30, 2019 8:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter. This is what Gus need.
Author's Response: Hopefully Gus will be in a better place with his father.
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2019 4:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Amazing storylines! I cried and ached for Gus. He was so confused and hurt by how everyone had treated him so far. Brian became the father Justin always told him he could be.
Brian finally grows up! He has to kiss ALOT of frogs to get his prince to return. I loved the adult versions of our beloved duo. Finally they are equals.
Thanks for this terrific tale!
Author's Response: Lovely comments. Thanks so much. I like to think Brian and Justin could live happily ever after.
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 33
What a truly wonderful story. You made hating Greg so easy. And, since happy endings are my thing I am really, really happy. Fantastic writing as always.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I got a lot of flak back when I first wrote this story because Brian was with someone else.
Date: Apr 29, 2019 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 33
Lovely story.....I’m glad gus ended up with Brian.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed the story.
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 10:53 am Title: Chapter 21
Couldn't go on without saying FINALLY !!!!! Wonderful story. Fantastic writing. Off to get to the end.
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2019 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start to a new story. Sorry I am just starting to read it, but I got caught up on the WIPS so I could just read it. Can't wait to see where it is going. Fantastic writing as usual. Will probably not review until the end as once I start reading, I don't like to stop.
Author's Response: This story is a bit unusual. Hope you like it.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2019 8:09 am Title: Chapter 33
I like Gus! The wild child has succeeded everything. His life is better with his father than with his mothers. He brought Justin back. He helped Ravi. He's a good kid. I wish him to stay with Brian and Justin. Great story thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting. Gus is a good kid at heart.
Date: Apr 28, 2019 4:21 am Title: Chapter 33
Go, Gus! Way to stand up for yourself, sonny boy! Great story! Thanks for writing. TAG
Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting. Glad you enjoyed the story.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2019 4:04 am Title: Chapter 33
The perfect ending. I'd just like to know if Lindsay and Melanie returned to Pittsburgh together or not. I do know whether they do or not they won't get Gus back.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2019 3:53 am Title: Chapter 32
Will the Wild Child do the right thing?
Author's Response: That remains to be seen.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2019 3:44 am Title: Chapter 31
It's good that Gus helped Ravi and that he likes Dr. Marla. Hope that the bully gets bullied.
Author's Response: We'll see what happens about the bullying.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2019 3:32 am Title: Chapter 30
What Justin doesn't know is that it's a perfect doing the bullying.
Author's Response: That's right.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2019 3:01 am Title: Chapter 29
Hooray! Sexy Times! TAG
Author's Response: LOL Glad you think so.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2019 2:29 am Title: Chapter 27
I love the way Brian is being so open and vulnerable here. Great job writing these scenes. TAG
Author's Response: Thanks. I like a vulnerable Brian.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2019 2:02 am Title: Chapter 29
Now that's the way to end the night.
Author's Response: Thumbs up!
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2019 1:46 am Title: Chapter 28
So Lindsay may be coming back to the Pitts? I think Brian should tell Gus he's not giving him back. That would make Gus very happy.
Author's Response: It would make Gus happy, but I don't think Brian is ready to do that.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2019 1:34 am Title: Chapter 27
Nice date, but is their trouble waiting for them at the loft? Will Sidney change Lindsay's plans?
Author's Response: We shall see.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2019 1:25 am Title: Chapter 26
Talking doesn't seem big in this family. Does Brian know how to barbeque?
Author's Response: Talking has never been Brian's forte.