



[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2025 9:02 pm Title: Chapter 37
This song kind of works for Brian... Truly Madly Deeply. Granted, Justin didn't return to Brian as a ghost, but he did return to Brian after five years in New York. He gave Brian a second chance, and they made a wonderful life together with their three child.




[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2025 7:32 pm Title: Chapter 36
Out of everyone in canon, Brian has taken the greatest leap in growing up. He started back when he became pregnant with Luke, and has just kept going.
I'm proud of him stepping up and rewarding Ted and Cynthia for all their extra work in Kinnetik.
I hope they have a blast on their vacation.




[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2025 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 35
To me, I think they should probably wait for the wedding. Let Brian get really healthy (he needs lots of stamina for the honeymoon.) Besides that, they have dealt with so many obstacles that they need things to calm down, so when the time comes, they will appreciate things so much more.
Besides, I think the evil author will allow the wedding to commense.




[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2025 2:49 am Title: Chapter 34
Michael is so gullible and stupid. As if someone would just hand over everything Rage. But Justin was a genius coming up with that plan. I do wonder how Michael is supporting himself out there.
As soon as I read 'Aiden Cole' I was like, "Really?' Cute.




[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2025 1:59 am Title: Chapter 33
Wonderful welcome home party. Do you think Emmett overdid the P-I-N-K? :D




[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2025 1:47 am Title: Chapter 32
I liked that Brian and Luke had some time together, just as Justin and Gus did a couple of chapters back. Everyone in this family deserves to have things be happy and normal for a change.




[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2025 1:37 am Title: Chapter 31
Things are certainly looking up. About time this family gets a break. It was so wonderful that the boys had a relaxing, fun day at the zoo. And then, even more wonderful, they got to go see and hold Victoria.
Thank you for this beautiful chapter.




[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2025 1:30 am Title: Chapter 30
I'm so happy the guys were finally able to hold Victoria. I'm sure the boys look forward to the day they can, too.




[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2025 1:07 am Title: Chapter 29
I love the relationship Justin and Gus have. With Gus having doubts, he was reassured by Justin that he's loved and will always be there for him.




[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2025 12:49 am Title: Chapter 28
I hope you're soon through with making these guys' lives have problems. They need a break and are due for some good days ahead.




[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2025 12:28 am Title: Chapter 27
In canon, I always wondered why they never had Brian's hair falling out when he was brushing it for work during that time. They used a real-life illness, but didn't follow through with all the side effects.
I'm proud of Brian having Emmett help him during this time. I always had a soft spot for Emmett. There was so much more to him than some people thought.




[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2025 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 26
I'm happy Brian realized he needed to shoulder some of the responsibility. You could see a lot of Brian's maturity and growth in this chapter.




[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2025 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 25
About time Brian went to see his baby girl. I'm not sure what he'll say since he knows Justin held the truth from him.




[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2025 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 24
Brian was spinning out dangerously. I'm glad Debbie and Jennifer stepped in, because Justin is already dealing with too much.




[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2025 5:42 pm Title: Chapter 23
The Justin that Brian first met and his no-bullshit demeanor was a lot that had attracted Brian to him. He needs to remember that's who Justin is.
This is a real struggle, and you're doing a wonderful job in writing this. My mother-in-law and aunt-in-law both went through breast cancer. So some of this is very familiar.




[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2025 5:01 pm Title: Chapter 22
I sure hope they took into consideration all the places and people Michael was not to have contact with, or go to, when they reassigned Michael, and that rules will be explained to him... e.i, how he needs to leave immediately if he sees hm. I'm irriatated that no police were involved, since Michael was so hostile toward Justin.




[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2025 4:38 pm Title: Chapter 21
I forgot to ask ~ Was Michael given a rundown before leaving prison? Like remnding hm of the rastraining order, or any other rules and regulations he needs to follow?




[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2025 4:26 pm Title: Chapter 21
I almost feel bad asking if all we'd get about Michael was past actions. He has a few things that will never change: I'm Brian's best friend, Boy Wonder, using Brian for his money... etc... etc... I can see 10 years his mindset is that of a 14-year-old.
The man shouldn't be allowed to be work around normal people. They should have put him in the hospice or prison to clean.
I hope they turn it in how Michael ddn't walk away as soon as he realized it was Bran. That's violating the restraining order. Especially when he stood there arguong. The security guy should have grabbed Michael right away and dragged him out. Instead, he's bothering a sick man.




[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2025 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 20
Do they have a baby name with 'M or Em' in place, just to be sneaky? Or do they have a special family name? We decided on our way to the hospital, both a boy and a girl name. It was a good way to think through the pain.
It's a good thing Brian can read Justin so well. Having a premie, especially one so undeveloped, is scary.




[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2025 3:45 pm Title: Chapter 19
A situation like this is going to cause a lot of uncertainty. I hope Justin reads the situation correctly, so he knows what's best to tell Brian.




[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2025 3:31 pm Title: Chapter 18
I feel so bad for Luke. It's hard for adults to deal with something so scary as a hosptial and all the tubes connected to the patient. A young boy seeing his daddy like that, would be terrified.




[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2025 3:19 pm Title: Chapter 17
There are certain story arcs that I really love more than others. Parental rights, Justin remembering prom, and "Justin learning Brian was at the hospital every night." So this was a special chapter for me.




[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2025 9:34 am Title: Chapter 16
I'm terrible when having to play "the waiting game," so I'm very grateful Justin has support during that time.
It was wonderful that Justin went back to the hospital to be with Brian, because right now, I think they need to be connected.




[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2025 8:56 am Title: Chapter 15
It's nice to see the family rallying around to help and offer support.
Are we actually going to get some Anti-Michael, or is it going to be just his past actions?




[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2025 8:34 am Title: Chapter 14
I hope everyone takes the news well and acts accordingly. I loved the father/son scenes. The boys are so great.