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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2025 4:08 am Title: Chapter 1

Very sweet story. I always imagine just how much Brian would spoil and dote upon a little girl, "Sunshine."

BTW... a little writing critique on nouns... If you're referring to a male blonde... it's correct spelling is blond. As for brunette - it's brunet.

Thanks for this cute, little story.

Cathy



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and your review. Thanks for reminding me about the spelling. I hadn't known about blond and blonde and brunette and brunet, until after I graduated high school in 2007, which was when I had written this story. That's why it's spelled wrong. I had posted it and never edited it.

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