Date: Jun 10, 2016 9:23 pm Title: Chapter 15 - In the end, love will find a way.
What an amazing story. I absolutely loved it. Please continue writing. You have so many great ideas and a great way of describing our favorite boys.
Date: Jun 10, 2016 7:44 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Just as He Expected.
Oh no. I knew Justin would somehow become aware of the bet but I was hoping that Brian would be the one to tell him.
Date: Jun 10, 2016 7:24 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Dinner at Deb's.
I'm happy that Brian seems to embrace his feelings. I was really afraid he would push Justin of a cliff. The way you describe the whole family dynamic is just beautiful.
Date: Jun 10, 2016 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Finally.
Wow, that was hot. And the pictures are a really nice touch.
Date: Jun 07, 2016 9:34 pm Title: Chapter 11 - King of Babylon.
"Make love to me, Brian". Finally they found their way together. I'm so excited. But I also have a bad feeling that something is about to happen that I won't like.
Date: Jun 07, 2016 9:27 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Learning his own heart.
Justin's background story is so sad. I hope e can find happiness with Brian without too much heartache.
Date: Jun 07, 2016 8:25 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Brian, are you alright?
With every chapter I'm getting more and more afraid about what will happen if Justin finds out. This is sooooo good.
Date: Jun 07, 2016 6:01 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Brian's Competition.
I think Brian should have just told Justin about the bet. I don't know why but I think it would have been better.
Date: Jun 07, 2016 5:46 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Justin Taylor.
Oh, oh... I'm afraid of what Brandon might do. The suspense is killing me so I'm off to read.
Date: Jun 06, 2016 9:29 pm Title: Chapter 4 - To know him is to...like him.
You can deny it all you want Brian. You're screwed.
Date: Jun 06, 2016 8:49 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Another gorgeous blond.
I like the almost gentle way Brian let down Chris. And the origami is a really nice touch.
Date: Jun 06, 2016 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Enters Sunshine.
Wow, it's amazing how honest Brian is being. It might just be the right way to Sunshines heart.
Date: Jun 05, 2016 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Sometimes you have to give to receive.
That's a really great beginning. I wonder when Brian will meet Justin. Can't wait to read the rest.
Date: Jun 02, 2016 12:44 am Title: Chapter 2 - Enters Sunshine.
omg some parts had me roflmao
Date: May 27, 2016 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Sometimes you have to give to receive.
Wonderful and interesting story, slowly but surely built.
Well done! Thank you.
Date: May 26, 2016 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Sometimes you have to give to receive.
your stories, each and every one of them are so addictive.
I've read this one time and time again. Every time I finish the last chapter I just want to go back to the first.
So off to start on In his Kiss again and then on to the others.
So good to see you here on KD.
Just faved you
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: May 25, 2016 2:23 am Title: Chapter 1 - Sometimes you have to give to receive.
you are a
very bad influence...since I am still reading Spin and Fall at home, I had to take The List in to work with me...and got very little actual work done since I couldn't put it down
I absolutely love the way you write Brian, yearning but not sure for what, torn between life as he knows it and wanting something more, at once completely in character and so AU it should be uncomfortable to watch, and yet leaves the reader only wanting more
Brian's running dialog with himself shows just how far out of his own comfort level he is stepping in order to pursue his blonde - why am I eating lunch at the diner 3 days in a row...how can holding him feel better than fucking...I might have a crush...it might be more...WTF...
love this story, your writing is amazing - thanks
Charle
Date: May 23, 2016 3:01 pm Title: Chapter 15 - In the end, love will find a way.
This is one of my favorite stories...
so glad to see your stories here on KD..
are you working on any new stories?