[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 18
It was nice seeing how everything turned out and how they were getting on with their lives.
It would have been fun to see what Michael's roommate was like and how that was going. I wouldn't think Michael would make enough at the comic shop for rent and living expenses, and entertainment.
Overall: Well Done! A very good story! I thoroughly enjoyed it.
<3 Cathy
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 7:36 pm Title: Chapter 17
I don't even know what Michael thought he was going to prove. He's not a 17-year-old. He doesn't have a good body or a cute butt, or a killer smile.
But Deb made my night coming in Babylon and pulling Michael out by his ear! That was heavenly!
Actually, I wish the audience had booed Michael during his dance and afterward. Maybe then he would have had a clue he wasn't liked. Maybe then he wouldn't think the vote was rigged.
As far as Every Breath You Take, I don't think Emmett would care if Drew stalked him.;)
I'm proud of Brian for getting that into motion.
Michael could have probably gotten behind the lyrics, Oh, can't you see? You belong to me, when it came to Brian. YUCK!
I think Ben should spend a lot of time in Babylon. I think he'd find lots to entertain him.
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 7:35 pm Title: Chapter 16
I liked that Justin called Ben. I hope Ben sees that the rest will still want him to be around, and still want his friendship. Especially since Nick is part of the family now.
I was happy to see that people are setting Debbie straight, and she seems to be getting better. I have to wonder if she's going to stop Michael from dancing.
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 6:07 pm Title: Chapter 15
Lindsay is really a piece of work. I was so proud o Brian taking her outside and setting the record straight, not only about Paris, but also Justin's art career.
Michael, coming along at the perfect moment, seemed to make Lindsay realize she wasn't too far from doing that.
So happy the girls took a stand against Michael. But Michael saying that crap to Brian about Nick and Justin, well, I just knew that wouldn't have been a good thing for Michael. Now Brian's mad all over again.
Too bad, so sad, Michael!
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 5:28 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh, poor widdle Mikey falls with the comics. He probably cried if any of them have a crease.
Thank god Ben finally knows that Michael isn't worth even thinking about. And he heard it from the horse's mouth.
Finally, Deb was forced to realize what her always taking Michael's side could cost her. I hope she keeps that front and center in her mind.
Now it looks like Michael will throw another tantrum.
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 5:02 pm Title: Chapter 13
Are Michael's plans for Rage to kill off JT, and Rage can turn to Zepher for solace, and bury himself inside Zepher? *gag*
I'm excited that Emmett's on his way to see his favorite gal! :D
So, where the hell has Michael been all day? I sure hope Mel finds out about that.
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 12
It's one step forward, five back with Deb. "Help with Michael." She should be wearing a sign on her back that says that.
I'm surprised that no one has questioned about Michael bringing in food. I wouldn't put it past the snake to inject Tylenol into something, or pot or Exlax in the brownies.
Michael's playing a dangerous game. If he goes to Brian with accusations about Nick, holy hell, there will be more trouble. Then, if he gets wind of Ted and Nick, he'll ruin it by telling Ted that Nick was with Justin.
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 4:07 pm Title: Chapter 11
Strange goings-on. Michael is one strange dodo.
It's nice to see that Carl has managed to get through to Deb. And she's being nice!
Justin and his food!
This was classic: I hear a whimper, now he feels my pain.
LMAO ~
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 3:45 pm Title: Chapter 10
I like Lo. Lo can stay. :D
I've been trying to figure out what Michael's endgame is here, but I'm at a loss.
I really do think the padded room and straitjacket are what Michael needs. And where did he get the idea he was stealing Justin's 'tricks'? I mean, Justin would have had to have been tricking, which he wasn't. Dancing does not count.
And if Michael was doing some weird dance, King of Babylon is going to be a bust.
Michael, once again, lied to Deb. Do you think she will ever catch on?
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 3:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
Sneaky little brat. Michael knows dang well that Justin is allergic to daisies. I mean with all the different types of flowers, he gets daisies and says they are especially for Justin.
Just what is Michael up to?
At least the foodaholic got some greasy, good food. YUM
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 2:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
Daphne's on the warpath for Michael. She's a little scrapper. Michael had better look out. :D
What's Deb so gungho about Brian helping Michael? Other than the garbage that came out of Michael's mouth, he's not in any trouble. So I don't get the "help Michael." Unless she means to help him get back together with Ben. Although, I think Ben isn't ready to deal with Michael, yet.
So now Michael says sorry. I have to wonder if he will actually say anything about spreading lies about Ben. He did tell Emmett it was at a hotel. HUGE LIE!
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
Let's hope Lindsay sticks to her promise. And hopefully, Gus' comment to Mel, will stay forefront in her mind.
Daphne's at the loft, and just found out what Deb did. Jen's on her way to the loft. How come thinking of those two women together is just scary all the way round. :D
Ben should put some of Michael's clothes in garbage bags and put them out on the porch, and change the locks on the doors. I mean, Michael did that to Justin's stuff, so he should get the same treatment.
Michael ~ pole ~ King of Babylon. I know this is going to be all kinds of wrongs. Well, maybe he can be voted as the one guy to stay out of Babylon. My mind is all over the place, trying to think of how funny this will be.
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 2:05 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wouldn't make it all up, everyone is accusing him of doing... The woman is half-crazy, herself.
Michael, of course, thinks Debbie believes him. Crazy person.
Lindsay had better cool her jets before she's banned, too. Brian needs to not give her a key, either.
King of Babylon? Let the laughter flow!
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 1:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
Every chapter, I'm laughing harder and harder.
Not exactly WASPs can fight, but by god, angry mothers can really pack a punch when someone hurts their kid.
Bruise on the cop's face? Deb should have to stay in jail for 48 hours, and maybe that would get through to her. She should be made to go in front of a judge. A little humility might go a long way toward curbing her anger. Or go to anger management classes.
I'm glad Brian made that comment about her being just like Jack.
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh my ever-loving sake. I hope there's a deep freeze that Deb can lock herself in. However, that wouldn't be any fun. Hopefully, Michael will be there to ask Deb how to make the rice, so they can get both of them at once.
I have to wonder if he already told the munchers about him and Brian being a couple.
I also hope the diner is packed with wall-to-wall people, so there are lots to witness the downfall of the Novotny pair.
YAY! To changing the locks!
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
Good thing Brian's a lot taller than Michael, otherwise Michael would have been all over his mouth outside.
Michael's not a liar ~ no, the asswipe is delusional! What was Deb thinking? My god, her and Michael better barricade them inside the house. Brian will be on the warpath. Brian should call Carl instead of him handling this.
Christ, again, I stress ~ the lock needs to be changed. Maybe also get a restraining order. And he better be gone before Brian comes through the door.
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 11:38 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh, Lord! Poor Ted. How's he gonna make it through a day?
I didn't think Ben was cheating. The fact that Michael saw Ben and his friend, was just the perfect thing to start this rollercoaster of make-believe. Didn't Michael see the boy standing there with them? (Not that it'd matter, anyway?)
I think Brian had better get the lock changed on the loft. Michael's close to insane!
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2025 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1
This first chapter was really action-packed. All I can do is shake my head nat Mikey and his stupid - stupid - hmm, I can't think of a word to explain his stupidity and the way he makes up stuff in his head, and it supposedly is the truth.
Does Michael think that just because he was nibbling on Brian's dick, that meant he scored? The guy is making up crap in his head and believing it's the truth.
I have to wonder if Ben really cheated or is that another Michael 'stupid' moment? Maybe it was to get Brian to spend the night with him?
Oh God, Deb! I'm interested to see which side she takes.
I hope Justin likes the declaration Brian said to him at the end.
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2024 2:55 pm Title: Chapter 18
That was so much fun!
Date: May 16, 2024 6:02 am Title: Chapter 9
This is hilarious! I love it!
Date: Jun 26, 2020 4:52 am Title: Chapter 17
Ha! I was gonna say Every Breath You Take was a stalker song. My college roommate almost picked it for her first dance with her husband until we told her the meaning :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2020 3:30 am Title: Chapter 9
What is Mikey up to?
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2020 3:21 am Title: Chapter 8
If Michael thinks he's fooling everyone, he's got a screw loose somewhere.
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2020 2:59 am Title: Chapter 7
Haha. Mikey thinks he's a grown man? At least Lindsay is attempting to stop herself.