Date: Aug 25, 2016 8:49 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Moving Day (August 4, 2001)
So happy you had this inspiration and started writing!
I also loved this movie and can't help it, I cry each time when she puts 2 & 2 together at the end as she realizes he's dead, and she hurries to put the last letter in the box and waits until...
I love the drama mood you put in this first chapter.
Author's Response:
Oooooo - so excited to see someone who's familiar with the original read this. Can't wait to see your take on my QAF adaptation. I'm still very proud of this one, even though it was my first. Thanks for reading. TAG
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2016 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 35 - In Unison. (May 20, 2002 Â 8:30 pm)
Sweet! I love it! And you know I'm all about the love!!!
Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Date: Aug 23, 2016 2:11 am Title: Chapter 35 - In Unison. (May 20, 2002 Â 8:30 pm)
Great story and I think you're an excellent writer. Definitely keep t g email coming. Looking forward to reading more of yuor stories.
Date: Aug 22, 2016 1:21 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Broken Date. (December 27, 2001 Â 6:30 pm)
Tears! He didn't show because he couldn't... Because it was bashed at the prom... But I still don't believe he's dead, maybe they both have brain damage... How am I doing?
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Aug 20, 2016 11:51 am Title: Chapter 27 - The Prom. (November 20, 2001 Â 2:00 pm)
I still can't help feeling that Brian was killed trying to protect Justin at the prom... And Justin just doesn't remember. Jennifer must have decided that it was better for Justin not to remember, therefore he can't make the connection to Brian...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
You're getting warmer . . . TAG
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2016 11:35 am Title: Chapter 26 - Â Following Directions. (November 10, 2001 Â 6:30 pm)
Wash, Rinse, Repeat!
Hugs ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2016 10:52 am Title: Chapter 24 - Pain and Panic (October 5, 1999 – 7:00 pm)
Smiling my Sunshine smile! I knew my romantic Brian was in there somewhere...
I have so many scenarios runny through my head, but I know... Read the fucking story! This is getting really good! Loving it!
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Aug 20, 2016 4:20 am Title: Chapter 30 - Broken Date. (December 27, 2001 Â 6:30 pm)
Question... the non-dinner at El Mare was December 31st, 2001, yet Justin writes on January 1st, 2000, that Brian hadn't shown up, and that "it didn't work."
Is this just a typo, or perhaps another quirk in the timeline necessary for plot development?
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2016 12:53 am Title: Chapter 22 - After the Art Show (October 2, 1999 – 9:00 pm)
“I love you, Justin. I love you!†Because we all know he did say it that first night... This was wonderful! Squeeze!
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Aug 19, 2016 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Playtime (September 6, 2001 – 6:20 pm)
Congratulations Dad, now you have two babies... So very hot indeed...
Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Date: Aug 19, 2016 2:45 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Reciprocating Gifts (August 21, 2001 – 2:00 pm)
Now I have visions of a naked Brian on full display... Runs to bedroom...
Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
Then you should take a 'nap' . . . *wink wink* LOL TAG
Date: Aug 19, 2016 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Opening Up (August 10, 2001 – 4:00 pm)
What no ghosts! Well that totally blows my second theory, that it was Brian that tried to save Justin at his prom and was bashed along with Justin...
Okay back to the story...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Aug 19, 2016 1:12 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Sweet Dreams (August 10, 2001 Â 8:00 am)
Now that was HOT!!! Loved it!
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
Glad you approve - the story was in need of some hot just then. TAG
Date: Aug 19, 2016 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 13 - ÂThe Lost Boy (August 9, 1999 Â 7:30 pm)
Of course I cheated and read someone's comment on the last chapter about them not ending up together... Not happy about that! So I took a break, I know, stupid thing to do... After sleeping on it, as you can see I'm back.
I'm thinking maybe Brian is really a ghost, and that maybe since Justin wasn't part of his life in 2000, it's possible that he didn't survive the scarfing incident... I know, just read the fic... ha, ha, ha...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
Don't believe what somebody else's review says - they may not understand . . . And, nope, no ghosts involved. You'll just have to keep reading. Not going to give away the ending for you! TAG
Date: Aug 18, 2016 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 35 - In Unison. (May 20, 2002 Â 8:30 pm)
Oh no I dont want them separated
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2016 5:04 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Moving Day (August 4, 2001)
Oh how fun to read your first fic... I'm loving it, just like I love all your other fics...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, Kathleen - I'm still so proud of my first baby. Hope you like it. TAG
Date: Aug 18, 2016 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 35 - In Unison. (May 20, 2002 Â 8:30 pm)
Have you got sequel to the loft
Author's Response:
Nope - never got around to writing any sequel. Not sure how I would. Unless they got separated in time again? Hmmmm. TAG
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2016 2:43 am Title: Chapter 35 - In Unison. (May 20, 2002 Â 8:30 pm)
Love the ending. You really had me worried. I'd dearly love to know what happened. Were there four guys or just Hobbs. Whatever, I'm happy that they are together now!!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2016 2:25 am Title: Chapter 34 - Don't Go, Brian! (May 20, 2002 Â 5:30 pm)
Call the cops!!! Four against one will be suicide.
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2016 2:21 am Title: Chapter 33 - Best Laid Plans . . . (May 20, 2000 Â 1:30 pm)
No! Tears are coming down.
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2016 1:27 am Title: Chapter 32 - For Justin. (January 31, 2000 Â 4:00 pm)
What did Brian do? Where is Justin?
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2016 1:21 am Title: Chapter 31 - Alone. (January 7, 2000 Â 9:30 am)
Aha. The other man was Ethan. Kill him off. But I'm still wondering where Brian was New Years Eve?
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2016 1:14 am Title: Chapter 30 - Broken Date. (December 27, 2001 Â 6:30 pm)
Nooooo! Why did Brian miss his date? Sad, so sad.
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2016 1:08 am Title: Chapter 29 - The Babylon Experience. (December 18, 1991 Â 10:30 pm)
Justin had a boyfriend? Is he the one who died? What a relief.
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2016 1:01 am Title: Chapter 28 - Debbie. (November 26, 1999 Â 10:00 pm)
Frankly I think a heart attack would have been more dramatic than exhaustion.