Date: Nov 30, 2021 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was looking for new stories to read and found this, throughly enjoyed reading it. I like stories with Gus.
Date: Dec 12, 2020 9:38 pm Title: Chapter 21
I have discovered your stories and I am enjoying Covid lockdowns reading them. This is another brilliant multi chapter story with angst and love. Excellent to hear the kids POVs
Date: Apr 25, 2017 3:22 am Title: Chapter 21
I'm glad you had this idea... great story!!!
Date: Apr 25, 2017 3:19 am Title: Chapter 20
Oh Emmett... perfect definition lol
Date: Apr 25, 2017 3:12 am Title: Chapter 19
Mikey made an awfully quick turnaround
Date: Apr 25, 2017 3:05 am Title: Chapter 18
Still not sure why Michael thinks he should be consulted about parenting Gus!!!
Date: Apr 25, 2017 2:58 am Title: Chapter 17
Ugh Michael is about all I can say... so happy for Deb and Carl!!
Date: Apr 25, 2017 2:51 am Title: Chapter 16
You go Debbie!
Date: Apr 25, 2017 2:45 am Title: Chapter 15
Michael... seriously??? Still doesn't get it! And Gus is so intuitive
Date: Apr 25, 2017 2:37 am Title: Chapter 14
Emmett is his own kind of superhero... he'll get it done!
Date: Apr 24, 2017 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 13
Yes Michael... it's all about you!
Date: Apr 24, 2017 8:41 pm Title: Chapter 12
Michael is such a jealous petty prick! To him he is more important than his daughter being happy
Date: Apr 24, 2017 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 11
Ben is great, Michael is too self absorbed
Date: Apr 24, 2017 8:07 pm Title: Chapter 10
Could this be the beginning of s truce between Brian and Mel??? :)
Date: Apr 24, 2017 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow... while Michael thinks he's father of the year for wanting Brian to pay for him to go to Florida, he actually FORGOT his daughter??? Jackhole!
Date: Apr 24, 2017 7:48 pm Title: Chapter 8
So glad Brian is not caving in to the whine
Date: Apr 24, 2017 7:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love how Brian is willing to be bored because his Sunshine and his son will be happy! Michael needs to learn the same
Date: Apr 24, 2017 7:31 pm Title: Chapter 6
I just want to hug Gus!!!
Date: Apr 24, 2017 7:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ben seems so level headed and goal oriented and michael really is just whiny lol
Date: Apr 24, 2017 7:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
I like getting the different POV especially from Gus and JR
Date: Apr 24, 2017 4:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
awwww Theresa is a cutie.
and again, so glad the boys are all working together so well.
Date: Apr 24, 2017 4:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm glad the "boys" all can figure out a way to make things work between them... now the girls need to figure their shit out!
Date: Apr 24, 2017 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
So far I like it (not that I doubted it for a second, cmon, i like all your stuff!)... I'm a fan of the Mikey bashing, but I guess I can handle not bashing him too lol
I'm glad the kids have Justin, but I feel bad that Mel makes a point of saying Brian can't make decisions for his own son.

Date: Sep 22, 2016 5:32 pm Title: Chapter 21
Great use of angst and humor. Tears rolled down my face as I laughed at Gus saying he loved you twats! Kids are awesome that way.
Keep up the good work!
Date: Aug 21, 2016 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 21
Loved this! So happy that Gus could call Justin any time he needed help and Justin would drop everything to be there. Very happy that Justin never kept anything from Brian, too!
Typical self-absorbed Michael at his best!
Glad the girls were able to work through their problems and become a family again with everyone.
Deb