Date: Jul 21, 2016 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 21
A perfect ending to a really nice story. Thank you for your hard work.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 20
I can just imagine Gus calling Brian a twat. Also I thought it was really funny that Jen found out about the king of Babylon.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 9:04 pm Title: Chapter 19
I always thought Ben would take a more active role in all of this. I mean he is very zen but I like to think he wouldn't let anyone treat him like that for a long time.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oh Michael, please don't start a scene at the "wedding".
Date: Jul 21, 2016 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 17
Yippee for Debbie. And also I hope Michael will finally grow a brain.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 16
I hope Michael won't destroy Brian's and Justin's party.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 8:35 am Title: Chapter 15
I wonder how much longer Ben will put up with Michaels behavior. He really must be a saint.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 9:43 pm Title: Chapter 14
Finally Brian is going to make an honest man out of Justin. I like it.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 9:13 pm Title: Chapter 13
Maybe Ben can talk some sense into Michael.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 12
Michael is such a brat and he doesn't even realize it.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 11
Aww, Gus has a crush on Daphne. That is just adorable.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 10
I'm glad that the girls are actually going to try.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
I can't believe Michael actually forgot JR. He really is only thinking of himself.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 8
Michael is getting really annoying. He is causing way more trouble than necessary.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 7:32 am Title: Chapter 7
Justin is right. Such news should be said in person. It's the best thing to do it like this.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm glad Gus had the opportunity to let it all out. This is good for him.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
Michael seems very egoistic. I hope for him that he will find a way to communicate with his kid.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
I hope Michael won't make a scene at the barbecue.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
I think Theresa might have a crush on Justin. Could be funny to watch.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
I wonder what the girls reaction will be when Brian tells them he wants partial custody.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting beginning. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2016 2:51 am Title: Chapter 21
Grownups really ARE complicated, aren't they? Lol. You did a great job writing about them though. Excellent job staying in character with everyone. I'm glad it seems you've caught the fanfic bug too. Keep it up. And tell Lorie thanks for her beta efforts, she's a sweetheart! TAG
Date: Jul 13, 2016 2:39 pm Title: Chapter 21
That was great! Thanks for sharing, and they all lived happily ever after...
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 13, 2016 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 15
Michael, always the stubborn one... Who's the child, and who's the parent?
Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 12, 2016 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 21
I definitely enjoyed this story!! You have done an amazing job drawing me in and holding me captive through your awesome skill of storytelling. Looking forward to more from you!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle