Date: Aug 19, 2016 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
seriously this neighbor fued is the funniest thing ever... especially with everone in on it!!!!
Date: Aug 19, 2016 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 6
Poor Kiki didn't know :(
it's so face paced I love it!
Date: Aug 19, 2016 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
I like that Emmett got to drop the bomb just so casually... lol
the saga of the bushes is cracking me up! lol
Date: Aug 19, 2016 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm usually anti Mikey, but I really like how supportive (and adult) he is in this story. He thinks before he speaks and he supports B and J and gets along well with the others and doesn't seem whiney...
thank you for making me actually like this mikey! :)
Date: Aug 19, 2016 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really like when Mel and Brian get along... they don't have to be best buds, but I do think when you take away the "jealousy" that Linds causes, they would get along well enough
Date: Aug 19, 2016 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like that everyone (even Gus) sees that Lindsay doesn't have anyone's best interests at heart, except her own
Date: Aug 19, 2016 9:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOVE the baby baking... and Brian talking to the belly telling it to grow... awwwww
Date: Jul 29, 2016 5:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Forgot to ask - is the Exploding Orgasm plant real? Tried to google it but nothing. :(
Author's Response:
Try looking it up under Fuchsia Erupting Orgasm. Yep it's real
[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2016 4:53 am Title: Chapter 16
Hella story! You do a very convincing Evil Lindsey. And the subplot about the erotic garden was a hoot. Great job and keep it up with the crazy productivity - we readers love it! TAG
Date: Jul 23, 2016 1:12 am Title: Chapter 16
That was great, I loved it! ~ Kathhleen
Date: Jul 23, 2016 12:58 am Title: Chapter 15
Hilarious! That was great! ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 23, 2016 12:58 am Title: Chapter 15
Hilarious! That was great! ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 22, 2016 1:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love the image of the trees... Justin can paint them, maybe as an archway into a private space for Brian and Justin...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 21, 2016 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Another fun fic, I'm loving it! You are the most prolific writer, you must write in your sleep... he, he, he....
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
I have to finish things it kills me to leave things undone. It comes from running retail stores. I have to refrain from writing on my work computer.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 5:56 am Title: Chapter 16
Another job well done!
Date: Jul 21, 2016 5:19 am Title: Chapter 16
I am so glad you started writing these stories! I have to say I'm an 'anti-??' lover and I eat up stories where one of he crew is the villain. Your's are done with such humor that they are a pleasure to read. Those of us who are absolutely fail at inserting the humorous aspect are a bit jealous. ;) Good work!
Roni
Author's Response:
I have to say I became obsessed with Paper Boats on the Hudson. I like to laugh so I want everyone to laugh with me. Thank you for all the compliments.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 12:46 am Title: Chapter 16
You gave Brian and Justin the ending they deserve because they are totally devoted to each and their family, I am glad that Mel found someone who makes her happy and adores JR they are a good match.
I thought Emma was talking about Lindsay when she said 'Dirty Stinky Butt' lol, I am happy that Brian decided to have another kid because those kids will be showered with tons of love. The twins names are two cute I look forward to getting glimpses into their lives as they grow.
Brian telling Lindsay off was funny I am happy she got what she deserved sorry she brought an innocent child into her childish behavior, but hopefully his father is there to protect him when Lindsay goes off the rails (I doubt she will stop, for the moment she has just found a new target).
I can't wait to read it all over again this was just wonderful and I look forward to more from you :)
Author's Response:
I wrote a new story it starts out sad. I hope that it will work. It gets happier and of course will have humor. It bashes a lot of characters.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 12:36 am Title: Chapter 16
Where to start. The twins, how cute. Then they had another son. boys outnumber girls. Glad that Sarah and Mel got together, it seems perfect. Roe on the other hand is not nice to Brian. Frying a laptop? Naughty, naughty. I have to feel sorry for Jacob, married to Lindsay. Poor guy. There must be some way to get him access to his son. Thank you for giving us a look at four years down the line. A story about the Disney Cruise would be nice. You might need to research for it and take a cruise! I'm gonna miss this.
Author's Response:
My sister’s cat did the same to her computer. The Disney cruise is awesome and I already have a story for that. I will probably write the sequel in a few weeks. I can't wait to see Justin out smarted by his kids.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 16
Another great story! I really like Brian and Justin together raising a family. I hope you consider writing a sequel.
Author's Response:
Yep can't let the kids grow up without us.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 16
OH I'm so sorry to see it end!!! Lindsay got her gay man....and then got left by the same. Nancy should have been happy. She must be crapping in her shoe that Justin and Brian are great parents to their four kids while she's barely tolerable to Gus and possibly her other son.
The birth and baby names was so touching. Also glad that Brian was able to be a father again from the beginning with not only Justin's but his own. I LOLd at Emma calling Gabriel "dirty stinky butt." At first I thought she was talking about Lindsay, LOL but it was nice to see she was talking about the baby.
I would definitely enjoy a sequel or a series of one-shots showing the progress of all the characters in "Why Not Me." I have enjoyed it immensely!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
This one is probably my favorite so far. I want to watch the kids grow up. Can you imagine three genius kids.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 15
Lindsey is where she needs to be. shame her mom is such a bitch. She obviously learned her own behavior from her. Glad Nancy willgive gus's rights to Mel and Brian. Wonder how long she'll be away for.
The garden party.........what I've been highly anticipating. OMG.........I must say, I laughed so bloody hard reading this. I was on break at one of my jobs and people seriously were thinking I was a loon. I was in stiches!
The way you had everyone involved...the little details...everything. Absolutely brilliant description and so beyond my expectations! Loved it and have read it about 3 times just since last night.
I know you're getting ready to wrap this up. I really hope you think of something new to write! Your writing has developed even in such a short time. I was really impressed with your first story you put here, but even only 3 stories later there's a definite maturity and highly developed ability.
Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thank you I started this writing because I got to control what was done. I really thought I would fall on my face. My next one is at the beta this one isn't going to start out as funny but well I have to have humor so it will be there. Thank you for enjoying it.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 1:36 pm Title: Chapter 15
Nancy is getting her wish after all... well at least to some degree. With Nancy signing over the rights to Mel and Brian, Lindsay has no ties legally to her 'shameful past.' I doubt that Lindsay will be very happy with Nancy's decision but then again it won't really matter since Nancy admitted Lindsay into the facility and therefore Lindsay can't check herself out at will. That would be an interesting conversation to read about, LOL
LMFAO!!!!!! OMG! The Garden Party was Absolutely STUNNING and so befitting the Liberty Avenue Family! I'll bet that Katherine finally learned her lesson about being a nosy neighbor. If she starts harassing the person 3 doors down, I hope they take a page out of Justin's book. I wonder what the husband would have thought of all that? He probably would have laughed himself to hiccups at the sheer genius and hilarity of it all. Brian definitely taught them well! I swear if they ever make a QAF movie, I want to see this scene in it!!! This was CLASSIC!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. Don't worry...another chapter of SLA is coming sooner than you think! The alternating POV approach in this story definitely inspired me to delve into the characters' psyches and pull out some hidden (and not so hidden) motivations for their actions. It should definitely be interesting!
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2016 10:36 am Title: Chapter 15
I can see that a lot of research went into this chapter. I really thought the Gardener's Association were real and to find out that it was Todd and Babylon dancers was hilarious. Wonder where Katie's husband was during all this?
Date: Jul 20, 2016 8:27 am Title: Chapter 15
Love it love it love it