




Date: Aug 14, 2025 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 28
Loved the ending... Loved the whole story!
Thank you again for entertaining us and spoiling us with your stories.





Date: Aug 14, 2025 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 27
So Michael went to see JR, but didn't see her? Why stay? SMH.
I sure hope everyone will allow Lindsay to hang herself.





Date: Aug 14, 2025 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 26
Why or how ~ is Lindsay supposed to be Mel's problem? They aren't legally married ~ or did I miss something?
I shouldn't laugh, but I did! ~ Poor Mikey is missing part of his ear. Stupid, gullible mini-man.
What if Nancy gets a brain injury from being bashed into the wall?
Lindsay shouldn't be able to ever get out of prison after this.





Date: Aug 14, 2025 9:48 pm Title: Chapter 25
Well, if the crazy lesbian kills Nancy, that will solve a whole lot of people's headaches. Otherwise, it will put her in an institution for the rest of her days. ;)





Date: Aug 14, 2025 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 24
How did Michael get out of jail ~ AGAIN??? What's the purpose of having a restraining order, if they just pick him up and take him to jail, but then he gets out the very same day?? It's not that way where I live, but maybe it's different in other places.
I figured Nancy would go ballistic about Lindsay's lies. Yep, Mommy ~ she lied. It will be the biggest embarrassing moment in her life.
I don't think the cops are worried about Lindsay. And when Dean gets done talking to Ron, I don't think Ron will be any help.





Date: Aug 14, 2025 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 23
Lindsay just threatened Alex. I hope that will be enough.
If the police ~ or Carl ~ would contact Lindsay's parents and explain the situation that Lindsay used their house and phone to violate the restraining order, would that work? Because if Lindsay talks to her parents first, the police are going to hit a roadblock.





Date: Aug 14, 2025 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 22
I KNEW as soon as Justin said Brian helped him achieve his goals, Lindsay would go nuclear. I'm almost afraid for Brian and the kids.
Did Michael have an epiphany? Hurry, we need to mark it on the calendar!





Date: Aug 14, 2025 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 21
I hope now that Michael can't get anyone to bail him out, he'll start thinking all this isn't worth it. However, I would think he'd get a sentence for having illegal drugs in his system.
I was surprised that Michael got out of jail. Wouldn't he get more than one night for breaking a restraining order? But oh well, he broke it right away, anyway.
Lindsay may have done something to make her mother proud, but it was all a lie. How happy is Mother going to be when she finds out the truth?





Date: Aug 14, 2025 8:09 pm Title: Chapter 20
Justin and his level of inside humor make me happy. It's always an ice breaker. It takes the tenseness I feel with those other two away.
If Max and Mel had kind of delayed taking off so quickly, wouldn't that have kept Lindsay there?
Yippee! One down. Now, how to take care of the other one?





Date: Aug 14, 2025 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 19
My god! That first part in Lindsay's POV had my skin crawling. It hit too close to the story that Lizzy wrote, and thinking she wanted Justin, and what she did to get him.
Hmm... Ted knew what Michael said about leaving Justin lying there, but does Debbie know? I was hoping that Debbie was standing behind Ted when that was said. Ted pointed out some truths, and Michael still wouldn't believe him. When is Michael going to realize he has no friends, no family? He's going to have a very lonely life if he doesn't realize that before long.
Maybe Brian can drop kick them off a cliff, and not the metaphorical one.





Date: Aug 14, 2025 7:13 pm Title: Chapter 18
The comment Max made about what Ted told him about Lindsay and Michael, sounded like the conversation Lindsay and Michael just had.
Well, if Lindsay planned on staying with Michael, that conversation between them ruined that.
Ted's a good friend to Brian. I was afraid Brian would start feeling like all this was his fault, and you didn't disappoint.





Date: Aug 14, 2025 6:50 pm Title: Chapter 17
Why do I think Justin should have been at Kinnetik, hiding in the art department, or somewhere that Lindsay couldn't see him? I don't like him not there, and alone at Britin. I'm sure there's a security guard there, but I just have a bad feeling. And Gus is at the school. I hope I'm wrong. But when she referred to Justin as her HUSBAND, my stomach plummeted.
Way to go, Jen! You might have made Brian speechless, but it was the lightheartedness that I needed. :D





Date: Aug 14, 2025 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 16
Yeah, it makes a lot more sense to not have any kids or adults around Lindsay right now.
I think it will be quite easy to have Lindsay agree to hand over custody. But oif all Lindsay does is talk out of her head like she did with Mel, they are going to be able to get a restraining order, are they?





Date: Aug 14, 2025 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 15
I had a thought... what if Brian went to Lindsay and told her that he was unhappy with his life, and now Peter wants to marry Wendy. Would that snap her out of it? Because if it didn't, we'd know for certain just how far she was gone.





Date: Aug 14, 2025 5:18 pm Title: Chapter 14
Okay... that bitch is certified. Get out the padded room and straitjacket.





Date: Aug 14, 2025 3:53 pm Title: Chapter 13
Well, that couldn't have gone any better. I still wonder how Michael's going to pay his attorney.
Talk about being a stupid idiot. Although I think that's part of his actual name. ;)
I could have cheered when the Ecstasy violation was mentioned! Way to go, Gabe!





Date: Aug 14, 2025 3:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
About fricking time that Brian takes these next steps to take care of his family. I'm sure it won't take Lindsay to screw up, and a restraining order will be put in place, and her rights to Gus, will be stripped.
Court should be very entertaining. Michael has left out so much info to his lawyer. Besides that, he will attempt to contact Brian., I hope the security guards call Carl on him when he tries going into Kinnetik.
Maybe I should go make popcorn, sit back, and laugh.





Date: Aug 14, 2025 3:08 pm Title: Chapter 11
How is Michael going to pay his lawyer? That should be interesting. If his "wages" have to be garnished to pay the lawyer, Michael will be sleeping under a bridge.
Brian should probably just buy new furniture, because Michael will probably never pay for the cleaning. All those times Michael had his assistant working, I wonder if he was in the loft all those times?
Ben has gone nuclear! :D
I knew that Michael going to the loft was going to be bad. Actually, not so bad. It was the cherry on the cake: a Restraining order.
Haha! Lindsay's next. I can hardly wait!
The kids are so cute. I love that Gus enjoys playing with them.





Date: Aug 14, 2025 2:43 pm Title: Chapter 10
Now Ben's extremely mad. I don't blame him. I'm waiting for him to decide he wants to be an ex-husband.
Michael is going to be in hot water ~ boiling water ~ when that PI's report comes in. When they all find out how long he's been going to the loft to hang out, sparks are going to fly. I can't wait! :D
Touché for Justin and what he said on the phone to Michael. Another mark against Michael for the day. He was only eleven hours late! LOL
I think Lindsay is about to get an order for the owner of the gallery to stay away. What a bitch ~ (I really wanted to call her the C word.)





Date: Aug 14, 2025 1:58 pm Title: Chapter 9
Well, I don't think Michael will have a case for winning custody of Jenny. Talk about a jacka$$. If there's anything that they don't witness on their own, I'm sure the PI will see it. I really hope the PI has pics of Michael buying the E and swallowing it.
Also, with Ben being a teacher, should he be doing E?
Yeah, pics would be fun! :D
I feel so bad for Jenny.





Date: Aug 14, 2025 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 8
My god, those two are nuts. I think that the whole lot of them should drug Michael and Lindsay, and put them on a plane to South Africa, in the poverty-stricken country.
Michael. Did Michael do this so he could talk to Justin, or to Brian?
I can't wait to hear Ben's thoughts on this.





Date: Aug 14, 2025 11:41 am Title: Chapter 7
What a rat race! Both Lindsay and Michael need to shut the hell up!
I was glad to see the kids sitting calmly upstairs, instead of scared and crying.





Date: Aug 14, 2025 11:21 am Title: Chapter 6
I think things will soon take a turn in muncher land. If Lindsay is late dropping the kids off or picking them up again, the school will take other action. I can't figure ot why she's so tired all the time, nor why she isn't taking care of the things at home. Now she's sleeping in her car in front of the manor... tsk, tsk... not so good.
I also think Michael's going to get more than a warning about staying away.





Date: Aug 13, 2025 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
I hope Carl chews Michael out over this nonsense. It's wasting police time.
Christ, they just wanted one night. But oh no, not if Michael's around.





Date: Aug 13, 2025 9:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
Getting old sucks! I sure hope the diner was filled to the max when Brian said something to Lindsay about Sam. ;)
Grandma and Grandpa are going to have fun with the kids!
God, I hope Michael doesn't get wind of them going to Babylon.