[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2025 11:11 pm Title: Ellis, Uniforms and Girlfriends
I like Brian and Justin's new life. Great friends ~ almost a second family. And lots more grown-up.
Their family has gotten larger, too. I love the name Victoria.
Only Brian could come up with ideas for the store. Spending all kinds of money and accumulating business in return.
I wonder how the girls are so hard up for money. Just with the money Brian gives them monthly, it should be enough for their family. And I would presume Michael and Ben send money for JR. Hmm... that's a puzzle.
I loved the series. So happy I read it. Such a neat little family.
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2025 10:49 pm Title: RESTORATION
Michael lucked out. It sounds like he came through treatment all right. I'm glad he's going to CA to see Ben. See how he is after a while, after getting out.
Justin was a saint for his testimony.
I see that Ted is back in the family. So much of that time elapsed between stories.
A puppy and a new Baby! Way to go, Brian!
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2025 10:39 pm Title: RETRIBUTION
I can't believe that Carl allowed Michael to move back to Debbie's. Especially with him being a cop. Does he know how much trouble he'd be in if Michael had drugs in the house? Debbie should have told him he had to pay his own way or get out. At least if he didn't have money, he'd have to shape up his act. Then he burns the loft. That's partly on Debbie. She should have been tougher on him instead of letting him get away with stuff.
I hate that Michael is always vindicated. I really wish he'd get more punishment for his crimes. Granted, he's going to get treatment, but there should be a short prison sentence attached. Let him pay for his crime.
Like I said last review, I hope Mel's happy she chose Michael.
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2025 9:49 pm Title: AMBUSH
God, what an asswipe. I suppose Michael found out that Justin had a show from Debbie. I really hope that Ben finds out that Michael snuck out and went to the show.
I really hope Brian's right: Ben's not going to wait around while you spend all your time and energy chasing after me. It would serve Michael right.
Sad to see that both Debbie and Mel abandoned Brian and Justin. I hope Mel knows what she's doing using Michael as a donor. I'd be afraid that my kid wold have the same whine as Michael.
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2025 9:24 pm Title: BETRAYAL
That no good pissant! He's a terrible person. But it was just as I expected, only worse. So glad Brian punched him, and then kicked both him and Ted out of the loft! I really think it was really low of Ted to agree to this. I wonder how Ted and Emmett were talking about it. Ted must have told Emmett at the party.
At least Justin didn't sink into the hatred feeling toward Michael.
You should have also put in Michael's diatribe: Left him lying there... Has even a more ominous sound to it. I'm actually surprised Debbie didn't react with anger toward Michael for those words.
So, Michael must not have a significant other. Since we all know of the unrequited love Ted has for Michael, maybe this was where his mindset was.
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2025 8:55 pm Title: BETRAYAL
I hope Michael doesn't screw Claudia over. However, now I'm worried about Michael's underlying intent regarding the comic. Is he planning to kill JT off and make Zepher Rage's love interest?
I was a little taken aback with Mel. I always see her as a champion of Justin's ~ something like Emmett.
Justin's art has really taken off! Happy about that. Those turkey cookies sounded so good. And probably better decorated that anything the women have seen.
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2025 8:29 pm Title: BETRAYAL
Silly, Brian. Cute and funny, too.
I had a feeling the reason Michael wanted to talk to Justin was about starting a comic book. Claudia sounds perfect.
I'm also very uneasy about Brian and Justin taking on the promotion work for him.
So very happy that the show was a hit!
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2025 8:13 pm Title: BETRAYAL
Crazy, stalking Mikey creeps me out. I DO NOT think Justin should be alone in anyplace with just him and Michael there. I don't trust him at all.
Glad Debbie could read him and averted the conversation. I'm glad she's playing Switzerland. This would be more painful if she was against them.
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2025 7:32 pm Title: BETRAYAL
Michael wasn't the nightmare that I thought he'd be. However, any longer and he would have had some of his hatefulness come through. I don't give him very long before that green-eyed monster comes to light. I'm waiting for the "kept boy" words to be spewed.
I'm really curious about what Michael told Ted in confidence.
The newly remodeled lower part sounds heavenly.
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2025 7:04 pm Title: BETRAYAL
Emmett confirmed it. Mikey's not handling it very good.
It was nice to see Ted and Emmett still being friends. But what happens when Michael doesn't want Emmett and Ted associating with Brian and Justin?
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2025 6:48 pm Title: BETRAYAL
Okay, the two most important people have been told. I hope Debbie will keep the news to herself. Well, Vic could be told, he's like the father figure. I'm still waiting for Daphne's reaction.
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2025 6:33 pm Title: BETRAYAL
It's strange that with Justin having eons of money now, why not offer to chip in for the remodeling?
I think I could place a hundred on the fact, that all of this is going to blow up in Michael's face, and win. With Emmett looking into Brian's eyes, that he already suspects what is going on.
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2025 6:14 pm Title: BETRAYAL
Forgot last chapter ~ Too bad about Craig lost control over Justin's tryst ~ NOT!!!
Some might say Brian was excited to be "married" since he was dragging Justin down the hall to the JP."
So... Michael is going to be his mean, hateful self when he finds this out. SMH. Justin says he won't make Brian choose. So how will Michael act if he's given the same choice?
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2025 5:52 pm Title: BETRAYAL
Vermont? Does Brian have ulterior motives?
So, Jennifer knows about Brian and Justin. That's good. At least we know the guys have one in their corner.
Their trip should be exciting.
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2025 5:34 pm Title: BETRAYAL
It appears that Michael must still be in his clinging and "You're my best friend" stage. While Brian seems more grown-up. Is this only something only between Brian ans Justin? I can't see Justin keeping this from Daphne.
Off to an amazing start.
Date: Nov 09, 2021 4:06 pm Title: Ellis, Uniforms and Girlfriends
Loved it!! I love their life; they are really enjoying their family and their newfound friends. As much as I love the Liberty Avenue family, I think its great that Brian and Justin are such great friends, with another couple and their kids.
Date: Nov 09, 2021 3:22 pm Title: RESTORATION
Loved it!! Michael really seemed sincere in his letters to Brian and Justin, and hopefully, he has gotten better. I love that Brian caved on the puppy, with his concession was that he and Justin have another child. They are really enjoying their life together!!
Date: Nov 09, 2021 2:56 pm Title: RETRIBUTION
All I gotta say is Michael is very lucky to have Brian and Justin in his corner. After everything he did to them, they still stood by him to make sure he was sent somewhere he could get the help that he needed.
Date: Nov 09, 2021 1:50 pm Title: AMBUSH
Yes, I'm thinking a restraining order may be in Michael's future after all. How does he really think that Brian is going to change his mind after everything he's done. Michael is not playing with a full deck. It's just a shame that Brian had to suffer in losing most of his friends and family; that is not right.
Date: Nov 08, 2021 6:46 pm Title: BETRAYAL
Great story!! I'm glad that Brian finally figured out the truth about Michael and cut him out!! The rest of the family isn't too happy with him either.
Date: Aug 05, 2021 6:27 pm Title: BETRAYAL
Loved the story!! And as soon as Justin started picking up signals in the comic, he new something was up, but just couldn't put his finger on it. But I am glad that it was Brian that figured it out, told him off in front of everyone and even punched him out. What was even better was no one came to his defense or even asked if he was okay. But either way, both Brian and Justin are both finished with him.
Date: Mar 08, 2020 11:14 am Title: Ellis, Uniforms and Girlfriends
Loved the series. Love your writing, no sex scenes which I glance over and you have more story.
Date: Mar 08, 2020 10:37 am Title: RETRIBUTION
I would have Michael go to prison
Date: Mar 08, 2020 10:18 am Title: AMBUSH
reading the stories again