Date: Aug 21, 2016 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice beginning with some strong antagonists already.
I like the teams you prepared: Brian/Emmett/Ted/Mel/Leda/Deb vs Michael/Ben/Monty/Eli/Lindsay/Sam.
And Justin, who arrived in the middle with Brian's second son.
Let's the fun start.
Author's Response:
It's gonna be a blood bath. LOL
Date: Aug 21, 2016 8:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is off to a great start! So much has already happened; can't wait to see what happens next.
Deb
Author's Response:
Thanks it's my first AU and MPreg.
Date: Aug 21, 2016 7:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mpreg - I love it! A little B/J baby is always such fun.
A/U - I like the set up of who is aligned with whom, can!t wait to see it play out.
i am really enthusiastic about this story and little Jackson (is he named for the artist?).
Author's Response:
Thank you, this one is different for me. I usually stick to Cannon as much as possible. Yep Jackson was named for Jackson Pollix.