
Date: Nov 12, 2016 11:00 pm Title: Epilogue 1-Reflection-Justin's POV
Awww. Brian sleeping with his hands on his computer tracking Justin's flight. How wonderful that the guy sitting next to him has a gay son. What are the odds. Love the letters, ya did good.
Date: Nov 12, 2016 8:37 pm Title: Epilogue 1-Reflection-Justin's POV
This entire story has been so amazing and so touching and this first epilogue was brilliant. I love the letters especially Brian's (of course lol). He did a great job expressing his feelings and I'm glad he had the balls to give Justin the original letter he wrote when he didn't know where he was. So heartwarming! The guy on the plane was hilarious, nice touch! Love love love this story and I hope you continue to write others because I will certainly enjoy reading them!
Date: Nov 12, 2016 4:05 pm Title: Epilogue 1-Reflection-Justin's POV
I haven't had time to comment for some chapters, but I wanted to let you know that this story is amazing; this chapter is special because of the letters; the one from Daphne is delightful; the one from Emmett and Ted is hilarious; the one from Brian is so unexpected, yet, I can understand why it's easier for him to write instead of talking.
The last part in Kinnetic is funny (with Ted and Cynthia walking on eggshells) and yet gut wrenching when Justin just wanted to hear Brian snoring, knowing he was following his flight before falling asleep.

Date: Nov 10, 2016 5:45 pm Title: Chapter 21-Destination-Brian/Justin's POV
Mr. Kinney! That was some dream and incorporating into Justin's send off! Gus is really going to miss Mr. Justin.

Date: Nov 10, 2016 5:28 pm Title: Chapter 20-Revelation-Brian/Justin's POV
That was some scary dream. Brian don't let Justin go It will be a mistake!
Date: Nov 10, 2016 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 21-Destination-Brian/Justin's POV
I was actually crying a lil bit reading this... I know they don't stay apart, but the emotions in this were strong.. in a good way!

Date: Nov 09, 2016 2:52 am Title: Chapter 19-Resignation-Justin's POV
He said it, he actually said I love you!

Date: Nov 08, 2016 1:56 am Title: Chapter 18-Provocation-Brian's POV
His final Picasso viewing, the little girl at the diner who’s always had a crush on him, but who he just found out today is also a really good artist….how Emmett almost killed her…….how he never wants to eat another donut for the rest of his life…… This sums up this chapter which was a very fun read. At least they are back together.

Date: Nov 07, 2016 9:20 pm Title: Chapter 17-Expectations-Brian/Alternate OC POV
Good. You know, now you just have to tell the rest of us. I like the waitress and the way you tell us what is bothering Justin. I also like the whole diner next to the museum thing. Poor Emmett. Trying to help those two, Brian and Justin, is enough to give one a heart attack.
Date: Nov 07, 2016 6:32 pm Title: Chapter 20-Revelation-Brian/Justin's POV
Agin, all I got is WOW... So good and so hot. I need a cold shower!
Date: Nov 07, 2016 5:42 pm Title: Chapter 19-Resignation-Justin's POV
wow... so freaking hot!
Date: Nov 07, 2016 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 18-Provocation-Brian's POV
glad it ended on a high note... they both were able to speak what they needed to say!

Date: Nov 07, 2016 3:54 pm Title: Chapter 16-Consolation-Ted/Justin/Brian/Emmett's POV
Great chapter. Love Brian and Gus together. Laughted so hard at the conversations. Emmett's a hoot as well. Hopefully he'll be able to straighten Justin, of the yellow hair, out.

Date: Nov 06, 2016 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 17-Expectations-Brian/Alternate OC POV
Nice cliff hanger . . . WDJG? More please! TAG

Date: Nov 06, 2016 5:42 pm Title: Chapter 15-Impulse-Brian/Justin/Emmett's POV
Everything at once is an apt title. We start off with Brian and Justin happy. Then we have Justin gets the hickups then he gets pissed. I'm still not sure about what? Justin remembers a little bit about prom night. He talks to the valet and decides to go to his mom's. Borrows her car to go to the museum? So what does Brian do? He calls Emmett. Now that was a trip. Riding in a cop's car, with his red cellphone, though I think he likes Jenn's purple phone better. The three hour tip - Gilligan's Island? Thank goodness Daphne knows Justin. I hope that Emmett manages to find the museum. Next you through Lindsay in the pot and boil. A recipe for disaster?
Date: Nov 06, 2016 1:11 pm Title: Chapter 17-Expectations-Brian/Alternate OC POV
You write these characters so accurately, it's amazing! I was mostly laughing all the way through. Loving this story so much!
Date: Nov 06, 2016 1:31 am Title: Chapter 17-Expectations-Brian/Alternate OC POV
poor Brian is panicked that he upset Justin, but Justin just needs to talk to him and work it all out... I feel so emotionally invested in all of this! lol
Date: Nov 06, 2016 12:35 am Title: Chapter 16-Consolation-Ted/Justin/Brian/Emmett's POV
Poor Justin... needs to get out of his own head a bit.
can't get enough of Brian and Gus time!!!!

Date: Nov 05, 2016 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 14-Brian/Justin's POV
Neither of them are getting much sleep. Brian knowing what he's gonna miss once Justin's gone. Maybe Justin is having second thoughts?

Date: Nov 05, 2016 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 13-Intimacy-Brian's POV
All the clothes, the fancy meal, the incrediable sex. How can Justin leave all that?
Date: Nov 05, 2016 1:12 am Title: Chapter 16-Consolation-Ted/Justin/Brian/Emmett's POV
Bahahahahaha Brian & Gus...omg so cute! "Daddy, why is your penis so big?" lmao

Date: Nov 04, 2016 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 12-Privilege-Justin's POV
A drunkin Justin is a fun Justin.

Date: Nov 04, 2016 1:40 am Title: Chapter 11-Luxury-Brian/Justin POV
My favorite lines
“Who’s he anyway? An ex-trick?”
“No.” I don’t fuck everybody I know. Jesus. “One of my tailors.”
“Oh my god, he’s like royalty.”
“See, you do understand me.”
Justin gets new clothes and an excellant meal. Brian gets Justin - to go.
Does Justin really need to go to LA?
Date: Nov 03, 2016 9:05 pm Title: Chapter 15-Impulse-Brian/Justin/Emmett's POV
Is Justin freaking out about all the changes coming up or is he legit pissed about the quick raw?
Author's Response:
Hey there. I think it's the wealth of upcoming changes. He's overwhelmed. :)
Date: Nov 03, 2016 4:42 pm Title: Chapter 14-Brian/Justin's POV
I'm so glad that the PTSD was at least brought up and that both are open to options.. and so happy Brian admitted he would LOVE to have nobody touch Justin, but he is also realistic while they are on different coasts