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Date: Oct 10, 2025 7:04 pm Title: Chapter 17

That comic book debacle has given me hiccupping giggles. Poor Mikey! HA! LOLOLOLOL

I'm glad Brian told Max that he and Justin need to do this, and Justin backed him up. But if Brian screws up just once, Max will step in, feelings be damned.

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Date: Oct 10, 2025 7:03 pm Title: Chapter 17

That comic book debacle has given me hiccupping giggles. Poor Mikey! HA! LOLOLOLOL

I'm glad Brian told Max that he and Justin need to do this, and Justin backed him up. But if Brian screws up just once, Max will step in, feelings be damned.

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Date: Oct 10, 2025 6:48 pm Title: Chapter 16

So... it's almost like dealing with a person with DID. (That's probably carrying it a little too far), but Jay is going to take over and let Justin rest for a little while. 

AND......... Enter Sam! I'm really loving all this.

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Date: Oct 10, 2025 6:32 pm Title: Chapter 15

Are we going to start wth the streetlight, then the loft, maybe the trip to the hospital...?

Oh, does Brian still own the loft?

Brian and Justin seriously need to let all the others do the legwork and backgrounds, and then Brian and Justin could go in for the kill.

 

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Date: Oct 10, 2025 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 14

That brigade of friends is a breath of fresh air. All these men in take charge rolls... funny.

Not sure on the whole Debbie thing. I really don't think Debbie can go against Lindsay and win.

Will Lindsay think she and Michael should try for rights to the kids? Fast money. But also expensive, so I'm not sure.

Ooh, the Sam angle is pretty delicious sounding!

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Date: Oct 10, 2025 5:42 pm Title: Chapter 13

Oooohh, so much going on in this chapter. So Michael's the culprit for Justin's amnesia. And he's stealing from the Big Q?

Lindsay can try to say she's not involved... but she doesn't realize that Justin knows who she is now.

That PI is going to be sorry for getting a piece of Lindsay, because he will have a lawsuit so bad, he'll have to close shop.

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Date: Oct 10, 2025 5:03 pm Title: Chapter 12

Aha! I figured Liddy was Lindsay. Too close to a person wanting to slam Justin's work. And Liddy is almost Lindsay. I gather it's something Lindsay kept to herself, not telling Deb and Michael, because Michael said - We got rid of you. 

Now, who's we?

And Brian and Justin are back together! Look out, you three peabrain idiots.

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Date: Oct 10, 2025 4:40 pm Title: Chapter 11

Oh, Justin is a genius! I love the camaraderie they have with the neighbor. Michael has been made to look like the aa**ole he is.

Too bad Debbie realized they would need bail money.

Lindsay, what can I say? It doesn't sound like she's in Pittsburgh. I have something niggling in the back of mind about her. It will be interesting to see if I've guessed right.

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Date: Oct 10, 2025 4:34 pm Title: Chapter 10

It was nice to hear a little about Justin's backstory. And how he coped. Resilient as always.

It sounds like Brian is going to have to get his backbone back.

I was tickled pink when Michael woke up in the dumpster behind Babyon. That sounds so gross. Then, when the cops showed up and Michael got a restraining order.

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Date: Oct 10, 2025 4:00 pm Title: Chapter 9

Yep - Justin and Daphne are a source to be wreckin with. Never no question. One mentions something no matter how awful, and the other says "Sure."

It sounds like Molly a neat sister. Even Emmett gets in the act. No Questions!

One thing stuck out in this chapter ~ We got rid of your ass. That sounds ominous. I wonder if Michael and Lindsay had something to do with his amnesia? For one thing, what would Justin have been doing in an alley in NY? Somewhere that he would get attacked or mugged.

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Date: Oct 10, 2025 3:35 pm Title: Chapter 8

Deb better be careful. She won't have only Liberty Avenue gays mad at her... but now she'll have Justin, Daphne, and Max to deal with. Ooh, will she keep her job?

Daphne - I'm so happy she's still in Pittsburgh.

 

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Date: Oct 10, 2025 3:32 pm Title: Chapter 7

You know, a parent can only do so much for their child. Unfortunately, Deb doesn't understand that. However, I think most of this, she's doing for herself.

I love that Brian is aware of Dlvina.

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Date: Oct 10, 2025 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh boy, Debble's days at the diner are numbered. This could be all sorts of fun!

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Date: Oct 10, 2025 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh boy, Debble's days at the diner are numbered. This could be all sorts of fun!

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Date: Oct 09, 2025 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 5

Hopefully, Justin can stay out of sight for a while regarding Debbie and Michael. Is Lindsay still in Pittsburgh? If Mel kicked her out, I would presume she would want to leave Pittsburgh. How is she supporting herself? Is Debbie still at the diner? Does Michael still own Red Cape? 

Questions...

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Date: Oct 09, 2025 7:34 pm Title: Chapter 4

I almost caught myself before sniffing deeply, hoping to smell Brian, too. LOLOLOL

Don't ask... It's been a long day - a long week.

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Date: Oct 09, 2025 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 3

Wow, oh, wow! What a whole bunch of info with the family dynamics. I guess Lindsay and the Novotneys are persona non grata. I hope it includes Emmett and Ted too.

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Date: Oct 09, 2025 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 2

Smart-alecky Gus hit Brian's bone of contention aka The Mall. :D

Things are getting tense. But exciting.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2025 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

WOW! What a full chapter. Lots going on here. Now we just have to see what caused Justin's amnesia.

Knowing Emmett, I almost expected him to call Brian and tell him to get his ass to this address.

Jen is going to be so very happy. 

Reviewer: BabylonBritinTaykin69 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2024 5:57 pm Title: Chapter 30

Love this hoping for more to this or another story to continue this universe

Reviewer: Allison42 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2024 2:00 pm Title: Chapter 16

WHOA. I did not see that coming!

Reviewer: Allison42 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2024 5:38 am Title: Chapter 7

Well played, Max! Love this OC!!!

Reviewer: Sid401k Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2023 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, my. Yes! Oh, I do love me a good "Whoops, we stole the wrong sperm!" story.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2022 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 30

This was a great story from start to finish!! I loved it!!

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2021 8:53 am Title: Chapter 30

did read it again

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