[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2025 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh boy, Debble's days at the diner are numbered. This could be all sorts of fun!
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2025 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh boy, Debble's days at the diner are numbered. This could be all sorts of fun!
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2025 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hopefully, Justin can stay out of sight for a while regarding Debbie and Michael. Is Lindsay still in Pittsburgh? If Mel kicked her out, I would presume she would want to leave Pittsburgh. How is she supporting herself? Is Debbie still at the diner? Does Michael still own Red Cape?
Questions...
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2025 7:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
I almost caught myself before sniffing deeply, hoping to smell Brian, too. LOLOLOL
Don't ask... It's been a long day - a long week.
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2025 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow, oh, wow! What a whole bunch of info with the family dynamics. I guess Lindsay and the Novotneys are persona non grata. I hope it includes Emmett and Ted too.
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2025 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
Smart-alecky Gus hit Brian's bone of contention aka The Mall. :D
Things are getting tense. But exciting.
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2025 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW! What a full chapter. Lots going on here. Now we just have to see what caused Justin's amnesia.
Knowing Emmett, I almost expected him to call Brian and tell him to get his ass to this address.
Jen is going to be so very happy.
Date: Aug 03, 2024 5:57 pm Title: Chapter 30
Love this hoping for more to this or another story to continue this universe
Date: May 24, 2024 2:00 pm Title: Chapter 16
WHOA. I did not see that coming!
Date: May 24, 2024 5:38 am Title: Chapter 7
Well played, Max! Love this OC!!!
Date: Oct 17, 2023 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, my. Yes! Oh, I do love me a good "Whoops, we stole the wrong sperm!" story.
Date: Sep 05, 2022 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 30
This was a great story from start to finish!! I loved it!!
Date: Apr 17, 2021 8:53 am Title: Chapter 30
did read it again
Date: Jul 16, 2019 5:36 am Title: Chapter 30
Great story......
Date: Jan 31, 2019 11:57 am Title: Chapter 30
love it, just great
Date: Jan 30, 2019 8:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
Fucking Debbie, never liked her
Date: Aug 27, 2018 3:53 am Title: Chapter 30
I really liked this. I never cared for Lyndsey or Michael. so I like a good story when they get what they deserve. Thanks for writing and sharing what you are very good at.
Date: Jul 14, 2018 4:03 pm Title: Chapter 30
I loved it! Sweet, father Brian who doesn’t hide his feelings is awesome. It was fun and I couldn’t stop reading. Good job!
Date: Jul 14, 2018 5:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I’m only at chapter 1 and I’m already squeeing! I’ll be up all night reading this :):).
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2018 8:29 am Title: Chapter 30
I read this story with great pleasure. I like Justin brave and independent who does not fall for the crap of Michael Lindsay and Debbie. Great story. i love all your storie waiting for the last ones to be complete impatienly.
Date: Jul 04, 2018 12:13 am Title: Chapter 30
Wow wow wow I have just read all the chapters till this one, sorry I didn’t comment on them I was so engaged with each chapter. I like the way you have woven the original script into the beginning and made a totally AU story. I love any story that has Deb, Michael, Lindsay as the villains lol.
i look forwRd to the next chapters
Date: Jul 01, 2018 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 30
Great story. Thanks for competing it and for updating "Life" and "He's Mine".
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2018 12:27 am Title: Chapter 30
I really enjoyed this story- great final chapter! I can just imagine Michael, Lindsay and Debbie behaving exactly in the way you described in court- I can literally picture their faces during the whole chapter- Perfect :)
Date: Dec 17, 2017 1:58 am Title: Chapter 30
Just finished this great story and waited until the end to review. It was wonderful. I really love all of your writing. It makes me laugh, it makes me cry and just plain makes me feel good. Happy Holidays to you.
[Report This]Date: Nov 24, 2017 10:50 am Title: Chapter 30
This story was so much fun to read- a definite favourite! I loved the way you told the story and I never wanted it to end. I really liked the part where Brian told Max to step back and Max realised he shouldn’t try to run Justin’s life, you got the balance of their friendship just right.