[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2016 3:01 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh God. How did Michael find out that Justin was there? If Deb hadn't incited Michael he wouldn't have even been there. I wanted to punch him when he talked about 'his mistake'. So glad Justin did. Great idea dumping him in the trash behind Babylon. Thank goodness Daphne was there. Love how the kids are all for Daddy and Dad. Wish Max had been there. Between him and Daphne Mikey and Deb don't stand a chance.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2016 2:29 am Title: Chapter 9
Love that Michael got what he deserved and can't wait to find out what he thinks about being in the dumpster.
Date: Oct 20, 2016 1:12 am Title: Chapter 9
Wow.....so now Mikey knows and soon deb will too.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2016 12:32 am Title: Chapter 9
OMG! Chapter 9 so rocks! Love me some Daphnie! That's a true friend who held you hide or dump a body!
Date: Oct 19, 2016 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 9
So glad that Justin and Daph got a chance to talk before getting interrupted.
The nerve of that little rat bastard!!!!! I was cheering aloud when Justin knocked him the fuck out!! OMG I would have paid my entire paycheck to see that live and in color! I can't stand that schmuck!! I think having him wake up with the trash is an excellent idea but NOW we have the problem of when he does wake up. There is no longer the full element of surprise because he will certainly go running to his loud, overbearing, bullshit artist of a mother. I can't believe him yelling, 'We got rid of your ass...' Daphne should have kicked him in the mouth while he was knocked out, LOL Yeah she's definitely a BFF if she's helping hide the body. Michael betta look out because they are not playing with his whiny, degenerate ass!
WRITE On Star!!
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 19, 2016 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
I loved Max remarks on Debbie's look.
Date: Oct 19, 2016 8:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
Teasing, teasing...
Also, they want to give their "relationship" a second chance, better balanced.
Date: Oct 19, 2016 8:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
Delightful chapter!
Brian is not letting amnesia keeping Justin away.
Date: Oct 19, 2016 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
What an end of chapter! Well done!
Date: Oct 19, 2016 7:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Poor Ted, unable to find words to explain the situation.
Auntie Em is ready to deal with his new nephew.
Date: Oct 19, 2016 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excellent and interesting beginning!
Date: Oct 19, 2016 6:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's hard to believe that Deb is actually more manipulative than Michael and Lindsey combined! I mean WOW!! What a C*&@#!! She's been manipulating and using the boys since day 1. I'm re ally going to look forward to her demise!!!! At least it's starting. HAHAHA! The fact that everyone at the diner is aware of the video now and their reactions...Priceless!
Interesting that Justin seems to have taken on Brian's eating habits. An unconcious thing? will he ever recover his memories? Hypnotherapy someday maybe? Either way, I doubt he's going to stay hidden long and everyone will be aware of his return. Michael will whine and stuff, Lindsey will do her usual. I'm more nervous about what Deb will do or try to do.
I'm loving Max more adn more every chapter! He's totally supportive of Justin and Aiden, and looks like Brian as well. He seems to have fit right it. He's also someone I never want to piss off!! :)
Daphne's here! YAY! Feel sorry for Justin being in town with so many people knowing who he is, yet he has no memory. It's gotta be hard. He's holding up very well though. Daphne will get that he really doesn't remember her adn will be the supportive friend she's always been. He'll reconnect with her I'm sure, just as an adult rather than the friendship since childhood.
Terrific story! getting better adn better. More intriguing!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 19, 2016 1:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
What a conniving cow Deb is! And all for the sake of her shiftless ass offspring and the almighty dollar! So glad she was exposed!! I doubt anyone will be willing to support her from now on. Hopefully that will extend to the lawyer she's seeking help from. Brian doesn't owe her and especially NOT Michael anything except a swift kick in the ass!
So glad that Daphne is making her appearence in this story. I think if anyone other than Brian could help jar Justin's memory, she will.
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 19, 2016 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 8
Love that Deb was busted! Omg she sounds as delusional as Michael...that is not good!
Daph! Yay, love her! Go girl!
Date: Oct 19, 2016 10:51 am Title: Chapter 6
All I can say is WOW!!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2016 5:32 am Title: Chapter 6
Damn, I just caught it. If Liddy is Lindsay that means she's known where Justin was all these years and kept it from Brian. The nasty little cunt.
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2016 5:19 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh boy. A two for one. I didn't realize how delusional Deb was or should I say is. Lord a mercy. At least everyone knows what she really thinks. Glad to see that Daphne showed up, now we are getting somewhere. You rock, Starlight.
Date: Oct 18, 2016 8:07 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love The story of our life. This one is pretty good so far. I have to ask are Libby and Linz the same person ? That would bring all kinds of hell. Great twist so far.
Date: Oct 18, 2016 6:32 pm Title: Chapter 7
Completely broken hearted over the treatment Deb is giving Brian. Michael adn Lindey I expect it from. Tahk goodness Justin is back and HAS his back! Deb won't know what hit her! He's going to give it to her with both barrels! Can't say as I will have any sympathy when it does happen. Teh comlete audasity...the gaul!!
Thankfully we have the devious mind of Max to assist. HA! That video idea was brilliant! Whish I could see it for myself! Oh boy!! The patrons on Liberty Ave, and those that go to the diner are going to get an ear and eye ful with that little clip.
Max, justin and Emmett combined.......HOOOOOOOOOO-WEEEEEEEEE! those folks had better watch their backs! Better yet, I hope they don't! LOL! They are going to deserve everything they've got coming to them.
terribly excited to see what is coming next! I hope you're not over extending yourself taking on 2 fics! Whata challenge! Hats off to you! Both are incredible!
cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 18, 2016 2:26 pm Title: Chapter 7
Whoo-wee!!! I've said it before and I'll say it again: Deb is NOT READY!! Under Justin's guidance, Max has learned to be a devious mastermind. He's like Em and Jus mixed and that cannot bode well for the Novotnys or Lindsay when she shows her envious little head again. I would say 'poor things' but you know... I just can't find it in my heart to be sympathetic to the conniving cunts and the desperate dickless doofus one of them gave birth to. I think we all know what Deb bought for Michael. And while she's burning bridges left and right, he's getting away virtually blameless again. I'm looking forward to all of their trifling asses being exposed. Hopefully Brian and Justin will come up to a solution regarding the living arrangements to include an electified fence to keep the children away from those three toxic people!
Date: Oct 18, 2016 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like to see a badass Justin,we'll see how little sunshine grown up and risking everything just to protect his loved one..loved uncle Maxie too..Can't wait for the video working around Liberty,so better watch out Deb..!!
It's been running this scenario in my mind for hours about Liddy,could it be Lindsay?And all along she knows where J is,and prevented B from finding out when B bought the painting from the gallery..?
Good Job Starlight and good luck for more chapters..!
Date: Oct 18, 2016 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
Deb, what are you thinking? I guess Justin will need to regulate. Jen and Brian are tortured while Mikey is pampered - no way, not gonna fly.
Date: Oct 18, 2016 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
"Are we supposed to kiss hello.." Lol. Still laughing. Seriously, I really enjoy your work. Even if I forget to review know that I am reading along and will hopefully get back to tell you -- you're awesome!
Date: Oct 18, 2016 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awwwww, so sweet.
Date: Oct 18, 2016 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Way to open a fic with a pow, pow, pow! I'm going to enjoy this.