[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2016 2:15 am Title: Chapter 3
Awwww... I loved that Brian and Justin are talking again. What a mess! Did Michael or Lindsay hit Justin over the head and make him forget?
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2016 2:02 am Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait for them to see each other again! I hope Justin's memory is sparked by the meeting.
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2016 1:56 am Title: Chapter 1
This is crazy but I love it. *rushing off to next chapter*
Date: Oct 18, 2016 12:09 am Title: Chapter 6
Deb and Joan WHAT?!?!?!?!?!!?!!?!!! OMG they both have some serious shit with them! Joan toting her Bible as if that would really make a difference was truly pathetic. Then for Brian to expose Deb as a card carrying member of the Untruth Corporation was the icing on the cake and outright hilarious! Bet Joan got her ass out of there FAST! I could've sworn dust kick up behind her departure.
As for Debbie...Jeez Louise how delusional and self-righteous can one person get?! Always spouting what she did for other people..REALLY? The most she did was create a network of flunkies to coddle her failure of a son. Well now she'll have to deal with that reprobate all by her lonesome since her own plans to have Brian and Michael raise Jewel together backfired. It must be really trying for her to know that she can't guilt Brian into doing anything for her or Michael...SMH
As for this 'Liddy' chick: Why do I get the feeling that Lindsay is really the bitch who's humping everything male or female during the art shows? To my way of thinking, it would definitely be something the harridan would do. Not only that but she was always jealous of Justin's talent as well as for having Brian's attention. Could it be that she knew that Jay Thomas is really Justin Taylor in the flesh and tried to befriend and sabotage him by turns? I wouldn't put it passed the bitch to pull some underhanded garbage like that. It seems like a viable reason why she always seems to abruptly drop the child custody suits since she would have to make sure the 'threat' of Justin going back to Pittsburgh remained nonexistent. If there were two people who would be able to see through her bullshit, it would be Jen and Justin.
Max: What can I say about Max except that I LOVE HIM!! OMG! He is absolutely hilarious and so like Em! Jen is right that both Max and Em watching the children would spell T-R-O-U-B-L-E!
Looks like Brian and Justin are about to really begin anew and I can't wait!! Brian always did draw strength from Justin and vice versa. I think Deb, Michael and Lindsay had better watch out, especially if Justin regains his memory. Both Brian and Justin have some really large scores to settle. And those three sure as hell aren't ready!
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 17, 2016 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 6
Sweet Jesus! I have never been so pissed off at Deb as I am right now! Holy shit! I can only imagine what Justin has in store for her....wow! The nerve!
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2016 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm speechless. For Deb to try to get Joan to help her out is the bottom of the barrow. And to find out that she lied in court about Brian really puts her on my shit list. Love how Maxx would have given her what for if he'd had all the facts. Love how Justin is willing to comfort Brian. Now how do you plan on working the living arrangements?
Date: Oct 17, 2016 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
Love love love!!! All the kids together are so adorable! Uncle Max & Auntie Em are going to be fabulous together!
How often do you update?
Date: Oct 17, 2016 8:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
Omg I cannot even imagine! I can totally relate to a mother's love...I have 4
This is going to be sooooo good!
Date: Oct 17, 2016 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Taking an a new story as well as the other?! WOW! Very impressed. More chapters to look forward to. More nighly reading!
A terrific concept to this one. Justin has certainly brought himself up by teh bootstraps thanks to Max. Gald they found each other. Max is a terrific character. A great friend to Justin and Aiden and I belive will be a good friend to Brian in the long run. Brian will adjust to having Max in their lives and will grow to appreciate him I think.
I was thrilled that Emmett was the one who saw Justion first. Perfect. He'll be protective of Justin adn Aiden, as well as Brian , Jewel and Gus. He's such a wonderful friend.
My heart burst for Jenn. finally being able to hug her son. I can't imagine what she's gone through. so glad that she and Brian are so close. That they share custody of Jewel.
As for Michale Lindsey etc....how frigging convol;uted are they?! I can't believe all they did. Their actions are beyond reprehensible! And that Debbie is in on their side too....That she lied as much as she did. Makes my skin crawl!
Now we have to wait and see what happens when everyone discovers that Justin is back. I'm sure that they won't believe he has amnesia, that he's lying about that and will do all they can to get in the way. Definitely going to be anangst filled story and will leave me wanting to throttle Lindsey, Michael and Debbie. Looking forward to Justin and Brian really finding their way back to each other. Justin is all grwon up now and will do everything to protect his kids. They will come first, so M,L and D had better watch out. they won't get away with much. Brian will have a whole new respect for Justin as well I think. He'll see that he's going to have to work for this relatioship, but I do believe he's ready to do that.
Terrific new story!! I can't wait to really sink my teeth into this one even more than I laready have!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 17, 2016 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Holy shit! This just keeps on getting better!
Date: Oct 17, 2016 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am so hooked! And I usually don't care for MPreg fics but this is awesome! So happy I started this, you're a great writer!
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2016 1:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
At least Brian admitted to his mistakes. And Justin took his share of the blame. Nice touch. Love Uncle Maxx and how accepting he is of Jewel and Gus, not to mention Emmett.
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2016 1:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
So Jewel and Aiden are close in age. Love that Brian thought about his cologne. Have to say that Max kinda reminds me of Deb a little. Very little. Looks like the meeting is starting out well.
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2016 1:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
Well, the meeting went well. I'm glad that Brian wants things to work and that Max isn't going to be a big problem like an Ethan would. Why am I not surprised that Deb tried to pull a fast one. Really enjoying this.
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2016 1:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Like how concerned Brian is. It looks like Ted is there to look out for Brian, I like that. Looking forward to the meeting.
Date: Oct 17, 2016 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is good....not looking forward to the Novotnay clan showing up. Michael and Justin having a kid though...I would never have expected that.
Date: Oct 17, 2016 9:44 am Title: Chapter 4
Absolutely llllove this story!!!! Please post more......
Date: Oct 17, 2016 7:40 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm so Fucking excited I love mpreg like this
Date: Oct 17, 2016 6:27 am Title: Chapter 4
YES!!!!!! Familiar is GOOD!! Glad Brian had the forethought to go back to the scent he used to wear.
Jen's falling out with Debbie is not a surprise in the least! If it wver came down to her pampered prick of an offspring vs. Everyone else, Debbie would definitely side with Michael. Sheesh! It is any wonder he has never grown up since his mother hasn't either?
I LOVE Max! Lawd Ham Turkey he reminds me so much of Emmett! Now I definitely am looking forward to the two of them meeting. That's definitely a whirlwind waiting to happen!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 17, 2016 6:13 am Title: Chapter 4
Please please plase please please please please post more!!!! Thank you
Date: Oct 17, 2016 6:06 am Title: Chapter 3
OMGGGGGG!!!! What an AWESOME beginning! I really can't wait for more!
Michael and Lindsay are some trifling asses! I already knownthere will be all linds of hell to pay when they, along with Debbie, find oit that Justin is back and not only back but with Brian's child in tow! Not only that but Justin is also rich and famous! Take that Bitches and Mitch!
I'm so glad that Em was the one to find Jay! I couldn't blame Ted for his skepticism. He and Em are definitely true friends. I also think that Blake is going to prove himself a real friend and ally to B & J.
Brian as a Dad is always precious and priceless! And now we have him with full custody of Jewel along with Gus! I can't tell you how happy that makes me. I'm so happy that Brian and Jen have been sticking together throughout it all. They seem to have developed a solid relationship through all their personal heartaches and triumphs. I look forward to seeing how their reconnection with Justin and Aidan continues to grow.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. I'm still in the middle of my re-read on TSOOL, so although the reviews from me are slow-coming due to RL (dammit why hasn't life outside of writing been outlawed yet?), they are definitely on the way!
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2016 5:15 am Title: Chapter 3
Ok don't keep me waiting!
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2016 4:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Love this so far - definitely want more :)
Author's Response:
I posted the next two, I hate waiting.
Date: Oct 17, 2016 4:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Another story already! Wow! You're inspiring me to try and keep up with you in my own writing. Keep it up! TAG
Author's Response:
That's the plan.
Date: Oct 17, 2016 4:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Another exciting story of you Starlight..I am bouncing the walls right now from excitement,you always did that to me with all your amazing stories..can't wait for the next chapter..Goodluck and more power!!
What would Brian looks like when he see Jay the first time in years..
Author's Response:
Thanks for encouraging me to keep doing it.