Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Taking an a new story as well as the other?! WOW! Very impressed. More chapters to look forward to. More nighly reading!

A terrific concept to this one. Justin has certainly brought himself up by teh bootstraps thanks to Max. Gald they found each other. Max is a terrific character. A great friend to Justin and Aiden and I belive will be a good friend to Brian in the long run. Brian will adjust to having Max in their lives and will grow to appreciate him I think.

I was thrilled that Emmett was the one who saw Justion first. Perfect. He'll be protective of Justin adn Aiden, as well as Brian , Jewel and Gus. He's such a wonderful friend. 

My heart burst for Jenn. finally being able to hug her son. I can't imagine what she's gone through. so glad that she and Brian are so close. That they share custody of Jewel.

As for Michale Lindsey etc....how frigging convol;uted are they?! I can't believe all they did. Their actions are beyond reprehensible! And that Debbie is in on their side too....That she lied as much as she did. Makes my skin crawl! 

Now we have to wait and see what happens when everyone discovers that Justin is back. I'm sure that they won't believe he has amnesia, that he's lying about that and will do all they can to get in the way. Definitely going to be anangst filled story and will leave me wanting to throttle Lindsey, Michael and Debbie. Looking forward to Justin and Brian really finding their way back to each other. Justin is all grwon up now and will do everything to protect his kids. They will come first, so M,L and D had better watch out. they won't get away with much. Brian will have a whole new respect for Justin as well I think. He'll see that he's going to have to work for this relatioship, but I do believe he's ready to do that.

Terrific new story!! I can't wait to really sink my teeth into this one even more than I laready have!!

Cheers,

Elaine 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am so hooked! And I usually don't care for MPreg fics but this is awesome! So happy I started this, you're a great writer! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 1:25 pm Title: Chapter 4

So Jewel and Aiden are close in age.  Love that Brian thought about his cologne.  Have to say that Max kinda reminds me of Deb a little.  Very little. Looks like the meeting is starting out well.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 1:02 pm Title: Chapter 2

Like how concerned Brian is.  It looks like Ted is there to look out for Brian, I like that.  Looking forward to the meeting.

Reviewer: nena20 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 9:44 am Title: Chapter 4

Absolutely llllove this story!!!! Please post more......

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 6:27 am Title: Chapter 4

YES!!!!!! Familiar is GOOD!! Glad Brian had the forethought to go back to the scent he used to wear. 

Jen's falling out with Debbie is not a surprise in the least! If it wver came down to her pampered prick of an offspring vs. Everyone else, Debbie would definitely side with Michael. Sheesh! It is any wonder he has never grown up since his mother hasn't either? 

I LOVE Max! Lawd Ham Turkey he reminds me so much of Emmett! Now I definitely am looking forward to the two of them meeting. That's definitely a whirlwind waiting to happen! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 6:06 am Title: Chapter 3

OMGGGGGG!!!! What an AWESOME beginning! I really can't wait for more!

Michael and Lindsay are some trifling asses! I already knownthere will be all linds of hell to pay when they, along with Debbie, find oit that Justin is back and not only back but with Brian's child in tow! Not only that but Justin is also rich and famous! Take that Bitches and Mitch! 

I'm so glad that Em was the one to find Jay! I couldn't blame Ted for his skepticism. He and Em are definitely true friends. I also think that Blake is going to prove himself a real friend and ally to B & J. 

Brian as a Dad is always precious and priceless! And now we have him with full custody of Jewel along with Gus! I can't tell you how happy that makes me. I'm so happy that Brian and Jen have been sticking together throughout it all. They seem to have developed a solid relationship through all their personal heartaches and triumphs. I look forward to seeing how their reconnection with Justin and Aidan continues to grow.

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

 

P.S. I'm still in the middle of my re-read on TSOOL, so although the reviews from me are slow-coming due to RL (dammit why hasn't life outside of writing been outlawed yet?), they are definitely on the way! 

Reviewer: DidiPita Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 4:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Love this so far - definitely want more  :)

Author's Response:

I posted the next two, I hate waiting.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 4:15 am Title: Chapter 1

Another exciting story of you Starlight..I am bouncing the walls right now from excitement,you always did that to me with all your amazing stories..can't wait for the next chapter..Goodluck and more power!!

What would Brian looks like when he see Jay the first time in years..

Author's Response:

Thanks for encouraging me to keep doing it.

Reviewer: Kateeni Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 3:57 am Title: Chapter 1

You have some of the most interesting ideas.  I love your stories.   Please post more.....please please 

Author's Response:

This came from a combination of bunny plots. So than Deb tanner for making me think.

Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 3:35 am Title: Chapter 1

You already know that I think this story is amazing. I'm so lucky because I get to read it first. 

~Lorie

Author's Response:

I'm lucky you keep me in line.