Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2016 2:32 am Title: Chapter 17

ROTFL! Score one for Deb!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2016 3:57 pm Title: Chapter 16

Justin is being very considerate of Jenny.  I think the idea of them all going to New York is a good one.  Gus really told Lindsay off.  hehehe.  Boy, Lindsay's lie to Gus really burns me up.  Only in her imagination.   Love the idea of Brian telling Justin they were getting married and best of all Justin's answer.  Peter has left the building.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2016 11:47 am Title: Chapter 16

Damn!  You tell her Brian. 

Thanks for the update.  Loving this story.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2016 4:56 am Title: Chapter 16

Way to go Gus, he told the truth about Lindsay's lie and further exposed her selfish behavior now she is out in the cold with no safety net anywhere, even Mommy and Daddy want her to darken someone else's doorstep.

She could run to Michael but what can he offer her but a comic book and tons of whining, she could go to Canada but since she isn't a citizen and has no visa she will be back, better put in an application at The Big Q along with Michael lol.

Brian and Justin Are Getting Married!!

:)

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2016 10:29 am Title: Chapter 15

Go Ted and Blake!  I love how Michael screwed up his life and everyone is expected to clean up his mess.  I swear he must be related to my family. lol

 

I'm so happy that Emmett and Drew are supportive of our boys and the kids.  Emmett needs to be a daddy!  I hope you let them start a family soon.

 

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2016 5:00 am Title: Chapter 15

Lindsay like Michael still trying to live out that dream of being Mrs. Brian Kinney too bad they didn't ask Brian what he wanted, because he would've told him the position was filled the moment he met Justin and twelve years apart hasn't changed his opinion, so they can take their pathetic dreams and stick them where the sun don't shine.

I knew Lindsay couldn't be trusted and we all know Michael isn't parting with one of his precious collectibles to fight for his daughter or support her.

Very Interesting Chapter:)

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2016 5:06 pm Title: Chapter 14

Wow.a shitload happening in this chapter. I feel just awful for Gus and Jenny! Both must feel completely abandoned by their Moms. Thankfully Justin is able to take on all the kids together and Brian will be right there with him. I think this was one of Mel's best and most mature and selfless decisions she's ever made. She actually considered what was best for Jenny. Terribly sad that she couldn't seem to consider Gus in the picture at all.

Can I just give a big "WHEW" that neither Justin nor Brian fell for Lindsey's crap. I'm thrilled that she gave custody over to Brian, but I don't trust her motivations. She's going to cause problems I'm sure.

Michael as usual is a fool. Thinking he can just walk into his lawyer's office. Such a pompous ass the way he spoke to the receptionist. I'm always curious as to where people get the idea they can treat people like shit. It's not like he was raised with tons of money and is a snob in that sense. Ah well. Thankfully Emmett isn't going to help him out.

Emmett is such a joy! He's so happy that Justin is back. He'll eventually forgive Brian, he's just that loving. He just needs to make sure that Justin is OK. Drew will help him out in this area too.

Excellent chapter!! Lovely and long too. 

This is just getting more and more interesting as wel go along and am anticipating all the angst and hyjinx that will presumably occur.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2016 8:12 am Title: Chapter 14

I always thought of Emmett as awesome and here he lives up to my estimation by dropping everything to go see Justin.  Not only that, he serves up some reality and grow up pills too.

Mel has some nerve giving Jenny to Justin.  I think that's an admission that Mikey was the wrong choice. Well that and the comic t-shirts and lower than average iq. Justin is a saint.

As usual, twists and turns with funny nuggets-- fantastic!

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2016 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 13

Can a chapter be hot and cute at the same time? And Michael and Mel are both in for one hell of a surprise....I can't wait.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2016 5:28 am Title: Chapter 13

Oh I am cracking up that Michael thought Mel would support him while he sits on his Ass neglecting Jenny and ordering more toys.

I so can't wait for Mel to go to Debbie's house that smackdown will be epic and Mel is going to wish she stayed in Canada or chose someone else to be the father.

Mel is handling this situation like she still has all the controls not realizing that she lost before it even started, the moment Gus went to Justin she lost everything and now she is hanging on by a thread.

Deb is going to snap her in half with just her voice alone no way is she taking Jenny out of that house. ( I wish the next chapter was up already I could use a big belly-aching laugh)

Lindsay wised up and jumped off the ship now she is doing the right thing for Gus and Brian, perhaps one day she will make a fantastic grown-up. 

I just love a good story when Mel gets her comeuppance wish there was more like them :)

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2016 2:38 pm Title: Chapter 12

Not so fast, you're in this up to your eyeballs whether she contacts you or not. Shame on those two, that is not how the law works even in ficland. Mel going to such lengths to ignore Gus and not even try to love him is so selfish and wrong.  I can't wait till she gets disbarred and goes to jail.  She's tough, she can join a nice gang.

I don't trust Lindsay, but I can see how what Mel did could scare anyone straight.  They are staring down the barrel of being disbarred and losing their livelihood, being criminally prosecuted and going to prison, and after that Justin can go after them civilly -- that's a lot of pain coming.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2016 4:04 am Title: Chapter 12

Love how Deb told Michael off and told him his own daughter has already called a lie to his reasoning.  Lindsay seems to be legit, as hard as it is to believe.