[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2016 7:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
So Brian is really Carl's son? That's a twist and one I like.
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2016 7:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
So Claire wasn't always mean to her brother?
Date: Nov 08, 2016 4:16 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh, Joanie, Joanie, Joanie, you little sinner you! Poor Carl... or maybe not! Makes you wonder how Joanie would have turned out if she had left Jack and stayed with Carl. But then, Brian wouldn't be the Brian we all know and love.
So glad to see that Brian will be more considerate of what he says around Justin and that Michael is finally a grown up! :)
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Deb
Date: Nov 08, 2016 4:12 am Title: Chapter 3
I love how Brian admits that Justin has always belonged at the loft. Beautiful reunion!
Oh, I wonder how Carl is going to handle all this.
Deb
Date: Nov 08, 2016 4:09 am Title: Chapter 2
Uh-oh! Now we know why Jack hated Brian. Carl?! OH MY! How is everyone going to react to this little bit of information? Debbie? Brian? Joan? Claire? I'm betting there's going to be a few upset people!
Love that you included Justin getting Brian's bracelet back and proving that John lied about Brian. They always took care of each other even when they were apart.
Deb
Date: Nov 08, 2016 4:05 am Title: Chapter 1
This is very intriguing. Really like the look back at the relationship between Brian and Claire. I always thought they probably cared for one another when they were younger and something happened to change that. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Deb
Date: Nov 07, 2016 9:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Loving this look forward to more.
MissMerlot