




Date: Sep 28, 2025 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 10
This was so very funny and good. I can tell you, if a person is in a crappy mood, all they'd have to do is open this story and within a few minutes, they'd be laughing.
I bet Alex had a blast with the New Year's prank.
Thank you for this delightful story.
HUGS, Cathy





Date: Sep 28, 2025 8:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
Seriously! Lindsay fell overboard. Maybe Michael can try to get the net to drop her over the water. But oh, wait... they're going to the sewer. LOL





Date: Sep 28, 2025 8:47 pm Title: Chapter 8 texting an YoYo’s
This is a really fun read, I wish you had written more like this.
This was a crazy chapter. Was that just everybody shouting out comments to Alex?
Michael and Lindsay (the monkeys) were a fun idea.





Date: Sep 28, 2025 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wasn't Alex afraid he'd get in trouble for kidnapping and handcuffing them in the back of a van? Although he should have known better than to outsmart this group.





Date: Sep 28, 2025 8:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm laughing so hard! My stomach hurts, and tears are pouring down my face. I'm trying to get myself under control so I can resume reading.





Date: Sep 28, 2025 7:56 pm Title: Chapter 5 bouncing balls
How in blue blazes were you able to even type this? I was laughing so hard, my eyes were watering.





Date: Sep 28, 2025 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
I cannot control my laughing. At one time, I even started to cough.





Date: Sep 28, 2025 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
You can't cure stupid. I think they passed stupid, a hundred miles back.





Date: Sep 28, 2025 7:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
At least if they're handcuffed to the chair, they'd have to carry the chair with them if they tried to leave. Then they wouldn't be able to move very fast.





Date: Sep 28, 2025 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Craziest thing I've ever read!
Date: May 23, 2020 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 10
Thanks I had to remember not to eat or drink anything while reading this. So good I reread over and over.
Date: Jul 03, 2019 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Warning dont drink and read!! Also people on bus think im crazy. So funny love all these ideas dont know how you come up with all them. Could there be a squel please begging
Date: May 11, 2019 4:51 pm Title: Chapter 10
I found this story while searching for something to read while awaiting updates and it is fantastic. You should do comedy. Oh, the ideas were just amazing. I laughed so much picturing the idiot twins. Wonderful writing as always.
Date: Aug 11, 2017 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 10
I loved this story. It lightened up my day.
Date: Aug 11, 2017 1:37 pm Title: Chapter 9
They just don't get it, do they?
Date: Aug 11, 2017 1:18 pm Title: Chapter 8 texting an YoYo’s
What else can you come up with? You must have a lot of fun in your free time.
Date: Aug 11, 2017 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
Poor Alex. He must be getting really desperate.
Date: Aug 11, 2017 11:40 am Title: Chapter 6
The coconut water was a nice touch.
Date: Aug 11, 2017 11:03 am Title: Chapter 5 bouncing balls
I will get that picture out of my head. Thank you. It's amazing.
Date: Aug 11, 2017 10:20 am Title: Chapter 4
What did they do outside? It must be really good.
Date: Aug 11, 2017 10:07 am Title: Chapter 3
These two belong in the psych ward.
Date: Aug 11, 2017 9:41 am Title: Chapter 2
This is getting better with every single word. Lindsay getting a buzz cut is just the icing on the cake.
Date: Aug 11, 2017 6:58 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG This is hilarious. I can't stop laughing.
Date: Dec 28, 2016 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 10
I loved this story. You have an amazing imagination. I don't think I've laughed that hard in ages. Look forward to reading more from you.