[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2025 2:19 pm Title: Chapter 13
Mwahahaha! That's what you get, Michael. You know, I don't think he quite realized the bear was a set-up. As far as I'm concerned, I hope they don't clear that little matter up for a couple of weeks.
Yep, Ryder can stay!! Mwahahaha!
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2025 1:59 pm Title: Chapter 12
At first, Michael wanted Ted to help him get Ben back, and the very next minute he wants to suck face with Ted.
Lesson to Michael: Don't hit on Blake's husband! Way to go, Blake! The crowbar was awesome! He'll have to relay that to Justin.
Is Mel getting a clue?
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2025 1:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
Ryder's a hoot! I already love him. Emmett should have told him about Brian and the nail issue, in case they were the wrong ones.
Poor Jenny, she almost makes my heart bleed. That little girl sure needs quiet and love. Brian and Ryder can give it to her, but I just don't know how they can make it work. She was very astute when talking about the bones.
Gus has the weight of the world on his shoulders, worrying about Jenny. It's like he can't even be a kid.
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2025 1:05 pm Title: Chapter 10
Well, Mel really got a smackdown! About time! Thank you, Justin. Mel better take this seriously, because I don't think she wants to take Daphne on!
Michael should learn to THINK ~ not TALK!
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2025 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
Boo-hoo, Calvin, that's what you get for wanting our Emmett to change. He needs his light to shine bright. Maybe Ben will kick Michael out, and Michael and Calvin can hook up.
Ryder sounds awesome, too. Boy, does Justin ever have a fun family.
Justin's meeting with Mel. That should prove entertaining.
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2025 11:51 am Title: Chapter 8
I so wish Carl had taken Jenny to him and Debbie's, and NOT called Mel and Lindsay for a couple of hours. It would have served them right to worry. So, hallelujah, Brian took Jenny to his place. What kind of trouble is Michael going to make with this Jenny situation?
Haha, Lindsay. Your little comment: I think that’s a wonderful idea; Mel and I could come over and see the kids tomorrow... didn't get you to see where Brian lives. Brian isn't stupid and knew what you were trying to do. Besides, Gus has been going there for four years, so why are you concerned now? One other thing, Lindsay, you would be sick with envy to see their home.
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2025 11:20 am Title: Chapter 7
I've got tears leaking out of the corner of my eye. There isn't a worse sin to me than child abuse.
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2025 10:51 am Title: Chapter 6
I could list a whole page of derogatory words concerning those three imbeciles. I hope Brian or Justin - or even Ben - talk to Deb and Carl about Mel. What she just did was way above what any caring parent should have done.
If Mel was SMART, she would give in to Gus and Jenny spending time with Brian and the other people of the family. By upsetting Gus and Jenny, she's going to wedge a knife bigger than she realizes. And if it's true that the women could lose everything without Brian's support, this isn't the way to go about it.
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2025 10:24 am Title: Chapter 5
I could just cry for Emmett. Like I said earlier, Calvin's choking his light out.
It was fun listening to Justin trying to be a Queen, though.
I hope Debbie blasts Michael right where it hurts. He thinks he's so special! He should realize that Brian is ashamed of him.
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2025 10:04 am Title: Chapter 4
Was Lindsay wearing a tight, short skirt when she went to see if she could persuade JJ Taylor to show at Bloom?
Mel, you should have kept your mouth shut! You started this shitstorm!
And let the fun begin!
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2025 9:37 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh, goody! Drew's coming to town! I'm so happy for Emmett. It sounds like Calvin is choking his light out of him.
Mel's about to learn she did a no-no, taunting Brian's secret to Lindsay, then smirking up a storm about not being afraid of a 'kid.'
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2025 9:35 am Title: Chapter 2
So many things running through my head right now...
I can see Mel and Lindsay taunting Gus about how Brian doesn't love him. When Gus tells them he knows, how angry will they be with him for not telling them?
WHY was Mel looking at the policy? Is there a way she could have used some of the money on it? Otherwise there was no way she needed to look at it. I hope Brian gets to the bottom of it.
I'm just sick thinking about Lindsay and Michael barging into Kinnetik.
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2025 8:34 am Title: Chapter 1
This first chapter pulled me right in. I KNOW this story is already going to be so good!
Glad to see how onboard Deb and Carl are.
The nerve of Lindsay asking for money for Jenny!
I was glad Brian handled Justin being more wealthy than him.
The last line really intrigues me. I think my husband is going to make them wish they’d never found out. I'm thinking there might be a fight for parental rights.
Date: Jun 16, 2024 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 29
Joan Crawford Kinney
Bahahahaaaaaaaaaaa
Date: Jun 16, 2024 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 28
What the hell does Lindsey think she has on Justin???
Date: Jun 16, 2024 8:37 am Title: Chapter 13
Bahahahaaaaaaaaaaa
Date: Jun 16, 2024 6:54 am Title: Chapter 10
I’m excited to see pitbull lawyer Daphne
Date: Aug 14, 2023 3:52 pm Title: Chapter 38
I just finished reading this one again, and loved it just as much as the first time!!
Date: Sep 07, 2022 5:06 pm Title: Chapter 38
This was an amazing story and has quickly found its way into one of my top tens!! I will definitely be reading this one again!!
Date: Dec 30, 2020 7:01 pm Title: Chapter 38
did read it again
Date: Oct 31, 2020 9:30 am Title: Chapter 19
Loving the story....but it’s Never Neverland not Wonderland
Date: Jun 17, 2019 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 38
Such a sweet ending thanks for sharing
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2019 2:40 am Title: Chapter 38
I adored this story- one of my absolute favourites- thanks so much for writing and sharing â¤ï¸
Date: Feb 14, 2018 9:52 pm Title: Chapter 38
I've read some of your more current work so decided to check out some of your older stuff, only to realize I had read quite a bit of it. Found this story and enjoyed it. Light with some angst, but not really. VEry anti- Michael and Lindsay which is fine with me as I don't like either of them. Enjoyed the story