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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2025 5:25 pm Title: Chapter 16

You're pretty good with those ad campaigns. Way to go!

I was a little nervous when Justin started to leave. I was wondering if he thought he would run the whole way to his place. He seemed to be nervous when he'd leave for the bus.

So, why was Justin so set on communicating by writing everything on a tablet?

Well, my break is over. I don't have much other QAF work left to finish, so hopefully, I'll be able to start the next story.

Another very good story. So glad I have a bunch yet to pick from.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=



Author's Response: Thanks so much for all yourcomments on the stories. Glad you are enjoying them.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2025 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 15

I hope Brian liked his size 12s in his mouth. He really screwed it up. Justin is young, has had it pretty rough, and Brian treated it like he could make it all better.

Maybe Justin could intern there?

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2025 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 14

AHA! Even though it took the Blush campaign to get Brian there - and not on his own - he still finds out it's Justin.

I've had Nichelle ask me if I look over her shoulder when she's writing, as I come up with what's happening in the next chapter.

Can't wait to read how their meeting goes.

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Date: Jun 29, 2025 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 13

I'm not sure why Brian's sitting there trying to figure it out. I see him more like casing the building out. Maybe he should wait in his bathroom for them to show up.

I'm not sure how long Justin has been working for Joe, but if they could have all gotten together sooner, Joe and Lydia could have been support and family for him a lot sooner. Not sure what chapter I questioned why Justin was alone, and as it turned out, it was Craig. That man needs something done to him. 

And once again, I wish Justin would agree with Craig,if only to haul more stuff out of the house when they're sleeping.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2025 3:29 pm Title: Chapter 12

Hmm... I wonder what Brian thinks will be good for a response. Will he point out that's not how campaigns are run?

And Justin was right, it was foolish to leave that last note. That was more of a personal question.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2025 2:50 pm Title: Chapter 11

I think I have to go back and check what days Justin worked with Joe. I remember something about certain days when he could possibly be late. 

Justin really has people befuddled about who he is, and yet, won't take credit.

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Date: Jun 29, 2025 2:28 pm Title: Chapter 10

I liked how Brian ran his thoughts about Emvic to Ted. I have to wonder if Ted will realize how much Brian liked Justin.

Justin thinking Brian might have a boyfriend ~ well, if Brian finds out, he's not going to like being in that category.

Is Justin going to find something in Brian's office that will make him realize that BK is his Brian?

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Date: Jun 28, 2025 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 9

Hmm... Botelli won't do anything to the painting, I hope. I know it's padlocked, but...

I'm probably as disappointed as Justin that Brian didn't go back to the club. 

If nothing else, Justin has his memories and an awesome painting to turn in.

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I had forgotten to say one thing about the last chapter... I started wondering if Brian was going to show Justin every way there was to have sex, then Justin would know which he liked best. ;)

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Date: Jun 28, 2025 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 8

Big surprise. Michael - again. It better be something important, because otherwise, I think maybe even Brian will get peeved. 

Hopefully, Emmett explains to Justin the Brian and Michael dynamic. If this hadn't been their first night together, then I could see Brian being abrupt and kicking Justin out. 

But when this night is over, I wonder if Justin will give Brian another chance, or stay standoffish, and let Brian sweat it out. 

I wonder what kind of advice Emmett will give Justin.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2025 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 7

Brian wanted to make Justin scream his name before he was finished. Well, he managed to make that happen. 

It will be interesting to see where this goes. Talking - or back to writing? 

I'm anxious to find out what Justin's story is. Did Craig kick him out? Or did he actually lose his family? But if that was the case, Justin should have had money.

This is one HOT chapter. 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2025 9:29 pm Title: Chapter 6

So happy Justin laid out some things to Brian. Brian was impressed, and of course, Mr. Kinney couldn't let Justin know what he thought of the remarks he had written down. He just smirked to himself.

And it's a loft, not an apartment. I think Brian was offended. :D

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Date: Jun 28, 2025 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 5

I wonder what Brian wrote on the Post-it note he left on the board. But Justin doesn't work every night, does he?

Brian is really smitten with Justin. Am I surprised? No, not really. I kind of thought he would have offered some help with some advertising for Vic and Em. But his suggestions were good.

I wonder if Justin will play the 'dumb blond' with Brian, until he gets to know him better.

When Brian kept ordering drinks, then came out with: He’d had several already, and didn’t want to get too drunk ~ I was starting to think, another one? and how I would have already been flat-out under the table. LOL

 

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Date: Jun 28, 2025 8:52 am Title: Chapter 4

I can just see Mr. Kinney shaking his head in disbelief, especially when no one comes forward to take credit for the slogan. Because if it were a Kinnetik employee, wouldn't they want a chance at a promotion?



Author's Response: I liked a little mystery for this one.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2025 8:21 am Title: Chapter 3

Apparently, Justin isn't "dumb." I did get that one wrong. So no batting a hundred? Aah.

He must be working in Kinnetik, cleaning. Is Justin going to leave art notes regarding the boards? It almost makes sense. He'll get Brian's attention doing that.

Question for you ~ Do you know what year you wrote this? Just curious.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2025 5:43 am Title: Chapter 2

I'm batting a hundred today (knock on wood) since as soon as Justin didn't speak, the "dumb" part resonated within me.

That might be the case, but who is Justin? Does his real name tie him to anyone in the community, or give him away?

Maybe the "dumb" part is the result of the bashing? (I'm grasping at straws here.)

It sounds and looks like Mr. Kinney has his work cut out for him. Interesting...

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2025 5:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting... I liked the name of the club ~ original. I should pat myself on the back since I right away suspected it was Em and Vic's place. 

Oooh, and Vic made a crack about age ~ he's lucky Brian didn't snap.

The bouncer really needs an attitude adjustment.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2023 11:33 am Title: Chapter 16

This was great!! I was so happy when Brian finally figured out that it was Justin who was leaving the notes, and even happier when they finally started talking and getting to know each other better.

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2017 7:51 am Title: Chapter 16

The end? I want more. I just can't get enough of your writing. You always manage to capture our boys so well. Thank you for another great story. 



Author's Response: Thank you so much. That's a lovely thing to say.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2017 7:38 am Title: Chapter 15

Justin is a bit touchy. Probably because it's the truth. 



Author's Response: Definitely.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2017 7:26 am Title: Chapter 14

Oh oh. The hiding is over. I wonder what their reaction to that revelation will be. 



Author's Response: Good question.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2017 6:51 am Title: Chapter 13

What happened to Justin is so sad. No wonder he is so reticent when it comes to meeting new people. 



Author's Response: Not a nice history.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2017 6:05 am Title: Chapter 12

I can understand that Brian is troubled by this. It must be a bit creepy. 



Author's Response: It would seem creepy.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2017 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 11

I wonder how long it will take for Brian to figure it out. 



Author's Response: He's pretty smart, so not too much longer.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2017 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 10

I love that Justin is Brian's secret helper. It's really cute. 



Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2017 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 9

Poor Justin. He must be so disappointed. 



Author's Response: I would think so.

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