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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2017 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 9

The fact that Brian is talking about his half brother with Ted probably means that he wants to explore that part of his life. I think that would be great. 



Author's Response: It would be.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2017 3:26 pm Title: Chapter 8

Kip Thomas is a possibility but I have a feeling that it might be someone that nobody would ever think about doing something like this. 



Author's Response: You could be right.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2017 3:11 pm Title: Chapter 7

So Brian will finally know why Kip dropped the law suit. His reaction will be interesting. 



Author's Response: Yes it will.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2017 10:56 am Title: Chapter 6

I'm really glad Brian has no problem with Justin helping out financially. Also I hope he finds the guts to contact Chase. It might be just what he needs. 



Author's Response: This Brian is able to accept help.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2017 8:55 pm Title: Chapter 5

I think identity theft is something very personal. I wouldn't wish this on anyone. 



Author's Response: I agree. It's horrible.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2017 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 4

Brian's days seem to be getting worse. 



Author's Response: Yes they do.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2017 8:45 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm glad Brian told Justin about his problems. That's a good sign for their relationship. 



Author's Response: So different from the show.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2017 8:39 pm Title: Chapter 2

OMG This really sucks. It must be someone close to Brian.  



Author's Response: Could be.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2017 7:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

There are so many questions in my head right now. I'm going to read the next chapter. Maybe I will get some answers. Great start  



Author's Response: Glad you like it so far.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 15

Great story!!! Well built and written, interesting plot, funny stuff and some hot scenes.

Thank you for sharing it.



Author's Response: Thank you for all your comments. I enjoy reading them.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 14

What kind of kick ass party Michael is planning? Every party he organized was a flop.



Author's Response: LOL Too true.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 13

Kip Thomas, he could be behind all this. He lost 2 jobs because of Brian and this is kind of what he could do to destroy him financially.



Author's Response: He is certainly a possibility.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 12

I laughed so hard when I read what Gus said to his bully. He is picking some good stuff from Mel and Brian and he's very smart.



Author's Response: Thanks for all your great comments. I'm not sure about the stains. Gus is a very bright little boy.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 11

Baby Brian: I'm sure Justin would melt if he was able to see the pictures.



Author's Response: Quite likely.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 10

Michael has his dose of Brian. He still thinks Justin will leave.



Author's Response: That was always Michael's hope.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 9

I always wondered how they were dealing with the stains they might leave quite everywhere they had sex on. Sorry to ask, but with the hot scene in Brian's office, I had this on my mind.



Author's Response: LOL Good point.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 8

If Chase looks a lot like Brian, he could easily steal his identity. But, what would be his motive?



Author's Response: Hmm.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 7

After this reveal, maybe Brian could come clean and tell Justin he was at the hospital every night after the bashing.



Author's Response: That would be nice to see.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 6

What an iceberg this Joan!



Author's Response: Yes she is.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 9:18 pm Title: Chapter 5

Things are starting to roll. I cross my fingers for Sam. Could Stockwell be behind this? Or Craig?



Author's Response: Good guesses.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 9:05 pm Title: Chapter 4

This is getting more and more tricky!



Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 3

How did the banks refuse to give some details? Isn't Brian's new client from Philadelphia? That should tip them as the mailbox is in this city.



Author's Response: Not everyone is so smart.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 8:35 pm Title: Chapter 2

Intriguing story line!



Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 8:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Justin and the food! How many stories could be written about that...



Author's Response: Many have been. LOL

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 15

I enjoyed this story.  I do not remember reading this story before and am glad you chose to put it here.



Author's Response: Thanks, glad you gave it a try.

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