Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2025 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 16

Is Mel actually pregnant yet? It seems her hormones are way up. 

If Michael can't see that his marriage is in trouble, he better wake up fast.

It seemed like Debbie was grateful for what Carl told Michael.

Thank you for trying, Blake. Although I think a hit to the head - harder than Deb's slap - might make him realize it. 

So what's at the diner? If his mother is there, I don't think she will have anything kind to say to him. And neither will Emmett or Ted. Oh, Ted might have something to say - like Justin is DONE with you. If I was him, I'd go hide in the comic shop. Out of sight, out of mind.

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Date: Oct 08, 2025 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 14

I am so proud of Emmett for letting Michael know how disgusted he was by what Michael said. And touché for Jen being there to witness it! And kudos for Debbie learning about it, too. I just have to wonder if they will see how wrong they are for wanting everyone to know what is going on in each other's lives.

I just wish Ben and Hunter had gotten to know about the anniversary party, too. Because Ben was ready to hit Brian, and that is so out of character for Ben.

I knew someone would snitch about them being in Pittsburgh. But I didn't expect Hunter.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2025 7:54 pm Title: Chapter 12

I really like all your little catch phrases in this story. Like the banner on Justin's phone, and there have been a few others. 

So, who saw all these friends at Kinnetik? You gotta know someone seen them, so Mikey and Deb have another reason to go off the deep end.

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Date: Oct 08, 2025 7:17 pm Title: Chapter 10

Hopefully, building a crib will get better results than the swingset. (I never understood that one, either.)

Thank God, Carl is starting to try and make Debbie see reason. I laughed when he said they weren't going to Canada.

I just really hope the comment Michael made reaches Debbie's ears. I sometimes wonder if Cowlip just put stuff like that in the show, so people had something to help fuel along fanfiction. There are so many things that were really screwed up, and look how everyone writes about it.

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Date: Oct 08, 2025 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 8

Maybe Ben can have a cast of his lips done, cause Michael's gonna need a lot of shutting up.

I hope nobody gives Michael an inch during the whole trip.

Heaven will probably need to douse Michael and Deb when they find out where the girls are going to live.

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Date: Oct 08, 2025 5:59 pm Title: Chapter 6

You don't just show up at someone's house without calling... Why was the only two not quoting this were Debbie and Michael? They are just uncouth.

I hope they stay gone until nine at night. Give Michael and Ben something to think about. I mean, what are they going to do?

The emails are driving me crazy!

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Date: Oct 08, 2025 5:25 pm Title: Chapter 4

I rathered enjoyed Brian and Mel's conversation. So the guys have a little more info on it. So it can probably not be talked about around Michael. 

Ted really needs to call Brian.

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Date: Oct 08, 2025 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 2

Brian nailed it on the head! 100% correct that - at least Michael - would be a constant PITA. I can see him harassing them daily. Especially Justin about the comic. This could have made a good anti-Michael story.

Mel is really insistent about this. Is Lindsay going to get defiant and insist she and Brian do this again?

I hope once the offer is made and the guys hear all the conditions, they take time away from the girls, so they can talk this all over.

Reviewer: Allison42 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2024 8:09 am Title: Chapter 18

I love how you are addressing this. I was thrilled when Brian punched Michael and Cannon, and it always bothered me that no one else ever found out about it and they just stayed mad at Brian.

Reviewer: Allison42 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2024 5:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Did not see Mel as the mother coming!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2021 3:36 pm Title: Chapter 41

This was great from start to finish; I loved it!!

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2020 3:26 am Title: Chapter 41

did  read it again

Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2020 3:30 am Title: Chapter 18

Deb...clueless idiot as always. No wonder Michael is a total troll!