




Date: Jul 23, 2025 3:37 am Title: Chapter 30
A very nice ending. We got caught up in everyone's lives, and a wedding on the horizon.
Finally, Mel has to see that Brian has her back. She has no worry about Brian trying to take Gus away.
Debbie is a lost cause. I would hope the courts would have had her get counseling, when Michael had his trial, but unfortunately, not. I do wonder if she was biding time and will end up wanting to see Brian's baby. Well, give Carl a call when that happens.:D





Date: Jul 23, 2025 3:21 am Title: Chapter 29
Yep, it's official. Michael and Debbie don't live in the real world. All the crap that came out of Deb's mouth... well, it left me speechless.
BEN... RUN FOR THE HILLS!





Date: Jul 23, 2025 3:02 am Title: Chapter 28
Apparently, Debbie didn't hear the part when Blake said it came up when they were doing background checks. Another thing for her to blame on Brian. Now, widdle Mikey knows Mommy's been lying to him his whole life.
Mel better get her head in the game and let go of her past problems, or Brian will be talking to Gus to see what he wants.





Date: Jul 23, 2025 2:43 am Title: Chapter 27
Is Mel really confused about Lindsay, or does she want Leda to leave and take Lindsay back? Lindsay should be going to prison, so she can't be bothering Mel anymore.
I can see how confusing this has to be for Brian and Justin, because I'm confused too, about Mel's confronting them.





Date: Jul 23, 2025 2:20 am Title: Chapter 26
A WEEK??? Did they keep him drugged for a whole week? That's not good.
Sam and Lindsay were the kidnappers? It makes sense that they were hidden away. I couldn't figure out why no one ever saw Lindsay. They must have stocked up on supplies, taken Justin, and camped out there.
Since Sam is the actual kidnapper, why did he do it? Did he plan to kill off Justin, and use Justin's paintings as his own?
It will be interesting to know how Brandon knew what they did and where they were?





Date: Jul 23, 2025 1:55 am Title: Chapter 25
What did Debbie expect when she coddled Michael his whole life? Then, when he'd screw up, Brian was told to fix it.
How did Debbie even know where to find them? It wasn't advertised, so it seems there's a little stalkerish going on with her, too.
Did Brian's call go through to Carl? It seemed like it was interrupted.
Seems like Brandon's the stalker.





Date: Jul 22, 2025 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 24
AHA! Deb caught him! Hopefully she doesn't let her little boy talk his way out of this!
Gus' party sounds awesome!





Date: Jul 22, 2025 3:46 pm Title: Chapter 23
Now you throw Michael back in our face as a suspect.
He might be the one, but I just can't see it. He's dumber than a box of rocks. I don't think everything would be done so meticulously.





Date: Jul 22, 2025 3:27 pm Title: Chapter 22
My money is definitely on Brandon. He's too erratic and forceful. He likes to be with Justin way too much and touch him. His smirks about make me climb a wall. He also lied to Carl right in front of everyone.
Poor widdle Mikey ~ if his place was ransacked by someone else (other than himself) it would need a professional ~ which Brandon is. None of the other suspects probably wouldn't even know how to jimmy a lock.





Date: Jul 22, 2025 1:32 pm Title: Chapter 21
Talk about a kerfuffle! There's so much stuff going around and around.
I have to wonder if Lindsay is in Italy, or if that's an excuse so Sam can get Lindsay out of the light.
We have: Sam, Lindsay, Michael, Brandon, and Debbie. All these people sound and act crazier than bedbugs.





Date: Jul 22, 2025 1:06 pm Title: Chapter 20
Oh lordy... This cracked me up: My son could be the target of a stalker because he wants to take care of Justin. Gotta love Debbie - NOT!
Now Brandon's father needs to join Debbie in the whole disillusionment. SMH. Why do some parents think their kids can do no wrong?
If it IS Brandon, Daddy will have to eat crow.





Date: Jul 22, 2025 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 19
You just threw a curveball into the story. But thinking if it could be Michael, I have to laugh along with Ted and Brian. I could see Michael just following him, but not the dangerous stuff. Then there's the fact that Michael got beaten up, but I guess it could be staged.
I KNEW Debbie wouldn't believe Michael could do this. I wonder if Mommy will whack his head when she finds out.




Date: Jul 22, 2025 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 18
Yep, sounds like Brandon's our guy. At least the stalker guy... so where does Mikey's obsession come in with all the phone calls?
I can't wait until Debbie finds out about widdle Mikey's pastime. She was so ready to blame Justin and tell him to stay away from Michael. Yeah, Mommy needs to know that.





Date: Jul 22, 2025 7:06 am Title: Chapter 17
Who is this guy? They know what Brandon looks like, so if it was him, they would see him. Ethan hasn't been mentioned. Oh... what was the virgin's name in canon?
Either that, or maybe it's an OC? But it is really starting to get scary.
Then we have Michael calling repeatedly. Do you suppose Michael has someone helping him?





Date: Jul 22, 2025 6:47 am Title: Chapter 16
I'm getting a bad feeling about Brandon. It seems like he's starting to turn up everywhere Justin's at. Also, knowing the hotel Justin is staying at. Something only the police should be aware of. With his inheritance, we know he has plenty of money to fly to Florida on a whim. And rent a room at a high-priced hotel.
It's almost comical how Lindsay ignores Justin's pregnancy.





Date: Jul 22, 2025 6:09 am Title: Chapter 15
Talk about a match made in heaven! Both Brian and Justin say what they think. and are unapologetic about what comes out of their mouths. It's almost comical. When Justin gets on a roll, I can't help but laugh.
Debbie needs to be bitch-slapped. Although Jen is maybe starting to catch on.





Date: Jul 22, 2025 4:08 am Title: Chapter 14
Debbie has some nerve still talking shit about Brian. Neither she nor Michael have acted like a friend. Why would he come to them?
Then her wanting Justin to come and be with Michael ~ yeah, she's really kind of nutso.
There should really be an anti-Debbie on this story. :D





Date: Jul 22, 2025 3:51 am Title: Chapter 13
The stalker might not be Mikey, but don't ever think that if a guy wants to get close to Justin, they'd pull Michael into their games.
Who is this guy? He beats up Michael (but that's okay). And he apparently has excess money, since he signed into the hotel so he could sit and wait for Justin.
And he must look good since he can pick up a trick after just walking into Babylon.
Brandon?





Date: Jul 22, 2025 3:29 am Title: Chapter 12
Stalker doesn't sound good. If he should find out Justin's pregnant, he could go off the deep end. Kidnapping him, trying to abort the baby... wow, any number of things.
Every time Michael's idiocy comes on the screen, I just shudder.
Hmm... Terry must be more than Emmett originally thought. Terry seems to be keen on Emmett too.





Date: Jul 22, 2025 3:08 am Title: Chapter 11
Poor widdle Lindsay. I don't feel the least bit sorry for her. She made her bed...
A STALKER? I relooked at the tags, and there isn't a name associated as a stalker... maybe Ethan? He's crazy enough to do that.





Date: Jul 22, 2025 2:45 am Title: Chapter 10
It sure didn't take much for Cynthia to be elated!
Great story ~ no Ben and Michael. Ben is too smart and good for Michael. Yay! He seems interested in Ted. At least their IQs are in the same bracket.
Justin had me in stitches when he was in the art department.
So... Emmett and Terry? Great!
But why does Justin want everyone hooked up? It's so funny hearing his inner thoughts. :D





Date: Jul 22, 2025 2:23 am Title: Chapter 9
Justin and Terry do have a strange working relationship. He's a total queen. I respect that Terry won't come between Justin's relationships.
Nice to know that Terry isn't fond of Michael, Debbie, and Lindsay.
YAY, EMMETT! I gotta wonder who Michael will find to be his friend, now.





Date: Jul 22, 2025 2:15 am Title: Chapter 8
OMG, Lindsay is horrid! She needs to be bitch-slapped. The next time she puts Brian down, either in front of Justin or Gus, Brian needs to file to take her rights away. Then he never needs to see her again.
Mel was really nice. It sure says a lot when Lindsay's own child doesn't want anythiing to do with her.
And YES! Mel's with Leda!





Date: Jul 22, 2025 1:41 am Title: Chapter 7
Whoops, I forgot to say how proud I am of Ted. Emmett better keep his mouth shut, sit back, and observe Michael and Debbie.





Date: Jul 22, 2025 1:24 am Title: Chapter 7
Doggone parents! Your opinion doesn't warrant them once children move out of your house and are paying their own way.
Ooh, goodie. Debbie better watch out from here on out, or Mikey's gonna know his father isn't a war hero, but a drag queen! :D