I DID NOT like Justin's inner doubts and thoughts. How could he even contemplate voices like that?

PART 2:

I would have liked the meeting to have gone a little differently - just because I HATE Michael... It would have been funny if right from the start, Brett looked at Michael and said -- We weren't impressed with the last issue, so we're not making it. Low blow, huh? Then Michael could have been the fault for the movie NOT being made. (Sorry, I'm so mean.) Funny how these little quips enter the brain while reading certain parts of the story.

Brian could have held his breath outside for all Michael will still not think Justin makes money painting.

Love the title of this chapter... Now, if you'd just update that story, I'd give you a big virtual hug.

Am I surprised the guys blew up? Not really. Not seeing each other for a long time, they have to fight, the same as having sex and loving.

As long as they keep the sex dirty and the fights clean, maybe they'll make it.

After Brian told Marcus that he and Justin have an open relationship, and one-time only clause, I'm surprised Marcus didn't ask for the one-time.

Henry ~ I was liike, 'don't go there, Henry. These guys have enough on there plates from their "friends."

I love how these two just show up whenever, naked and ready.

I must be in a "let's slam Mochael mood." If Brian really thinks "End of discussion" when talking to Michael, well, we all know that until Michael's satisfied, he doesn't listen. Good that Brian pushed him out. But then he rants to everyone he sees.

I'm so glad Brian's realizing what he really wants, and is going after it.

I figured I better leave my comment. It was so great to read this again, as there was so very much I didn't remember. I wonder how many thousands of stories I've read since I read this one. And yes, I believe it's a thousand.

I'll start with the lesser of evils... well, not lesser, because it was pretty awful. Sean Sapperstein... what a scumbag. No better than his uncle. The apple sure didn't fall far from the tree. Let's just hope that we have seen the last of the two of them. It's too bad so many years have passed. Justin should have really turned Sap in. I was just happy to see that Justin finally broke down and asked for Brian's help.

MICHAEL!!! God... I just can't express how very much I hate him. Talk delusional. Killing off JT and Dr. Ken... in order to give Rage and Zepher a chance, just as it should be in real life. Should I laugh or cry? Gosh, I really hope Ben reads that garbage... soon!!! The only problem is, with Justin giving everything to Michael, Michael can well afford to live on his own. Somehow, he has to be knocked down a few pegs. I was ticked off when Michael decided to take in the meeting with Connor and Brett, but all's well that ends well, in that case. So glad Michael FINALLY learned Justin is a wealthy man. You can't believe everything you read on the internet. God, I laughed!

The women in Toronto... I am NOT happy with Mel... (I want to write something nasty regarding her.) Is the next story going to change, or has your writing changed over the years? Is Lindsay really a good person, and Mel is evil? I really don't understand Justin giving Lindsay $11k... especially when he's aware of the new loan Brian has arranged for them. I'm VERY interested to know what that is about, too. I have started the other story, but have pretty much just reread the seven chapters that were a rewrite of this ending. I hadn't read that before I started it, so I was a little confused. I don't get to read too much outside all my WIP's that I read... but I will get through it. It's fun reading and reviewing on current stories, but it's also reading completed ones too. Just not as much fun commenting as often.

Well, for a first story, you did an awesome job.

HUGS  ~Cathy ❤️

All I can say is...Fucking Brilliant!

This storyline is totally believable and kept in character (not easy to do with a 10 year future timeline). I bow down to a truly amazing writer. Your insight into their minds is delightful. (Plus I’m not a Mikey fan, seeing him as the whiny self centered character he really is always makes me smile!)

Off to read the sequel! Thank you for hours of wonderful and nail biting reading enjoyment!

Nooooo. They can't end it now. There has to be a way to make it work. 

How could Michael ask Justin to draw that? He must really hate him. 

I'm glad they connected again. Hopefully Justin will be able to let Brian know what happened. Keeping a secret like that could destroy him. 

Why can't Michael just concentrate on his own life. Our boys seem to have matured quite a bit in their outlook on a relationship. 

I already love this story. Brian admitting that he misses Justin is a huge step for him.